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 Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:08 pm
 Kage Applications Leader your village to greatness...
___Description
• You are apply to become the strongest ninja in your village. The one that will lead all the Shinobi to in your village and help them rise to higher ranks. To become a kage you will be responsible for not only the well beings of your villages. They are also responsible for handing out skill scroll to ninja, treats, and more. You also must remember that shinobi under you look up to you and need your guidance.
___Kages Open & Taken
• Konohagakure :: Haeso Hitsome
• Kumogakure :: OPEN
• Kirigakure :: Luciania
• Iwagakure :: Diablo en Musica 92
• Sunagakure :: CLOSED
• Amegakure :: CLOSED
• Otogakure :: CLOSED
• Kusagakure :: CLOSED
• Yukigakure :: CLOSED
• Hoshigakure :: CLOSED
• Takigakure :: CLOSED
• Sawagakure :: CLOSED
___Application
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[u][b]Username[/b][/u]
[u][b]Position Wanted[/b][/u]
[u][b]Why Do You Want It?[/b][/u]
[u][b]Please Give A Literate RP Sample[/b][/u]
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:48 pm
Username
Haseo Hitsome
Position Wanted
Konohagakure
Why Do You Want It?
Because I have to keep this village active for my job! I will train people for everything what they need and watch my own village!
Please Give A Literate RP Sample
Again and again the fires of war flare up, sometimes for greed, sometimes for power, and sometimes for love. But always the young are sent to the fields of battle to forge themselves in the heat of battle into the weapons of tomorrow. Aki Uchiha was no different, young,able, and willing, he was sent into the front lines and grew old before his time...
Bright flashes lit up the night sky in the horizon, and the dull thud of explosions shook the area for miles around. Aki lay in wait with his squad, waiting for the sign to engage in battle once again, waiting to kill or be killed. Taka a new recruit slipped over to him and asked "Hey Aki how many shinobi do you think Suna has out there?" . Aki sighed and then shrugged " More than enough to kill us all no-" a purple flash appeared on the horizon and everyone stiffened, it was time. All six of the young shinobi flew into action. Darting into the battle to bolster their failing forces. Aki reached the battle field and scanned the ar, noticing a fellow leaf shinobi fighting a losing battle he flew to his aid.
Flashing through a string of seals Aki spat out a torrent of flame towards the Suna nin, intending to make himself a obvious target, drawing the nins attack upon himself. Fortunately the ninja was not fast enough due to the weariness of battle, unfortunately the display drew more attention to himself. Dammit two more coming in quick.. the shinobi he helped nodded in gratitude and engaged one leaving the other to Aki. A clash of steel marked the beginning of Aki's new battle as they locked up in an engagement of pure strength Aki's blade pushing down on the mans kunai.
The two disengaged and were immediately back at each others throats. Aki almost reacted to late as the nin threw the Kunai and began forming seals. A searing pain flashed across his face as he barely managed to dodge the kunai. Throwing his blade high in the night air he formed a seal and appeared to be engulfed in a wave of water. But alas he had switched with his airborne blade and came down upon the shinobi like an avenging angle. Removing head from shoulder with a clean swipe. Looking up he saw the shinobi he had helped previous go down in a flash of light.
His hair blowing wildly in behind him due to the blasts percussion a single tear slid down Aki's face at the hopelessness of the whole ordeal. And yet he still engaged the mans killer overcoming him in moments. It would not be the last man he avenged that night nor the last tear he shed. And morning could not have come slower and when it did Aki stood with the survivors in a smoldering field of death. The leaf had won the battle but at what a cost...
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:43 pm
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:32 pm
Username
izeromus
Position Wanted
Kumogakure
Why Do You Want It?
To keep it active and so that the guild will keep on going.
Please Give A Literate RP Sample
The sun was just setting up in the horizon making the quiet and cold streets light up with life but there was still sign of people on the streets as it was very early, but in quiet morning there could be heard steps, fast paced steps coming from a medium sized building that looked like a house, inside it was an old man running with a small scroll in one of his hands the old man was running as fast as he could, but so fast because of his old age, soon he came to a door his facial expression changed from a tired one to a relived one, the old man knocked on the door 5 time with a slight beat to it.
Inside the was a bed and in the bead there was a man sleeping like a rock, this man was called Rioan or just Raikage, but it seemed he did not even budge from the knocking on his bedroom door but then again the old man outside knocked with more strength so it was a lot louder, Rioan now heard the knocking and opened one of his eyes and looked over at the door "Who is it at this time" Rioan asked but it did not sound like a normal person talking it sounded more like a mumble from a drunken man but of course Rioan was not drunk he was sleepy, so Rioan got up from the bed with such determination that even a turtle would be able to run away from him, Rioan now walked towards the door like a zombie and often bumping to stuff on the way and even tripping over his own sandals but he still made it to the door alive, and as soon as he opened the door he saw the old man there, Rioan gave a slight sigh at the vision at this early hour. "So what do you want at this hour advisor." Rioan asked with a lazy expression all over his face.
The adviser was quite shocked at how Rioan looked when he opened the door, he was only in his underwear and nothing else, the advisor now showed the small scroll to Rioan who slowly reached it up to it and got hold of it, now the advisor had a serious look on his old face which made him look quite creepy and then he said. "This came in this morning." Rioan looked at the old advisor's serious face and was a bit scared then he turned his attention back to the small scroll in his hand. "I can tell it came in this morning there was no need to tell me that." Rioan opened the scroll and started reading it following every line with his golden colored eyes, after he was done reading he looked over to the advisor. " It is a message from our frontier squad and it seems like they are under attack and need aid." Rioan quickly went back into his bedroom and dressed himself so that he was battle ready, a few minutes later he walked out of his room battle ready, now with a serious expression he looked at the advisor "I will go in front and you send in medical Nin after I leave... Do not send any type of fighting Nin because it might be a trap." With that said he sped his way out of the building and went towards the borders, it would not take long for him to reach his destination as he had inherited the same speed from the past Raikages.
After a few minutes of speeding Rioan was out of the village and going to where the reports came from, the report had come from a small outpost north of the village and one of the closest one to the village so Rioan could get there very fast, a bit after half way to the outpost Rioan could se some bodies on the floor so he stopped by them to see if there were any alive but he was out of luck none of them were alive and they all had burn marks all over their bodies so now Rioan knew that the attacker was a Katon user which gave Rioan a slight advantage as he was from the Ranton bloodline so he could use Raiton and Suiton, after checking out the rest of the bodies Rioan started speeding again towards the outpost where he was sure to meet the attacker, once he had reached the outpost he could see a hooded figure holding one of his scouts by the neck, Rioan rushed to the scouts aid, while he was running he done some hand signs. "Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ]" As the lightning hit the hooded man he changed into a puff of grey smoke, it was only a clone.
Rioan was quite shocked to find out that the attacker was only a clone and was able to do so much damage as Rioan reached the body of the scout it was already too late, the scout was dead so Rioan went around the perimeter to check if the onwner of the clone was near by but there seemed to be no one around those parts only the dead and burned bodies of the scouts, Rioan was heading back to the village when he heard some movements behind him and once he turned around there was a massive fireball closing in on him, Rioan had to jump to the side as fast as he could so he would not get hit but as he did that he was a bit too late his foot was caught in the fire but he was able to escape the attack, Rioan now could see the one who dared to attack him it was once again the hooded man but this time it was not a clone.
Rioan slowly got up and looked at them man that was fiften meters away from him, Rioan wanted to finish this quickly so he was going to go all out, Rioan started running towards the hooded figure and while running. "Mizurappa. [Violent Water Wave]" Water started gushing out of Rioan's mouth and go towards the hooded figure who only jumped back to avoid the attack, but what Rioan wanted was not to hit the man but to make a massive puudle where the man was, after he was done with the water jutsu his body began to get wrapped by lightning chakra, Rioan was using Lightning Release Armour, when the hooded man saw Rioan charge at him again he used the Great Fireball Technique but Rioan only done a step to the side and jumped with tremendous speed because of the Lightning Release Armour, while in the air Rioan made a few hand signs "Got ya...hehe,,, Lightning Release: Black Panther" Black lightning started forming in his hands and when he put them together a the black lightning came out forming the black panther and heading towards the hooded man, the man tried to get away from it but they were too close to dodge such attack so he was hit head on and with the water around his foot the attack was even stronger, the man had no chance of survival, once he was hit he was electrocuted to death with that Rioan safely landed away from the water and looked back to see if the man was dead, after he was sure the man was dead he started walking back to his village so calmly like nothing had happened.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:38 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 5:06 am
izeromus
Username
izeromus
Position Wanted
Kumogakure
Why Do You Want It?
To keep it active and so that the guild will keep on going.
Please Give A Literate RP Sample
The sun was just setting up in the horizon making the quiet and cold streets light up with life but there was still sign of people on the streets as it was very early, but in quiet morning there could be heard steps, fast paced steps coming from a medium sized building that looked like a house, inside it was an old man running with a small scroll in one of his hands the old man was running as fast as he could, but so fast because of his old age, soon he came to a door his facial expression changed from a tired one to a relived one, the old man knocked on the door 5 time with a slight beat to it.
Inside the was a bed and in the bead there was a man sleeping like a rock, this man was called Rioan or just Raikage, but it seemed he did not even budge from the knocking on his bedroom door but then again the old man outside knocked with more strength so it was a lot louder, Rioan now heard the knocking and opened one of his eyes and looked over at the door "Who is it at this time" Rioan asked but it did not sound like a normal person talking it sounded more like a mumble from a drunken man but of course Rioan was not drunk he was sleepy, so Rioan got up from the bed with such determination that even a turtle would be able to run away from him, Rioan now walked towards the door like a zombie and often bumping to stuff on the way and even tripping over his own sandals but he still made it to the door alive, and as soon as he opened the door he saw the old man there, Rioan gave a slight sigh at the vision at this early hour. "So what do you want at this hour advisor." Rioan asked with a lazy expression all over his face.
The adviser was quite shocked at how Rioan looked when he opened the door, he was only in his underwear and nothing else, the advisor now showed the small scroll to Rioan who slowly reached it up to it and got hold of it, now the advisor had a serious look on his old face which made him look quite creepy and then he said. "This came in this morning." Rioan looked at the old advisor's serious face and was a bit scared then he turned his attention back to the small scroll in his hand. "I can tell it came in this morning there was no need to tell me that." Rioan opened the scroll and started reading it following every line with his golden colored eyes, after he was done reading he looked over to the advisor. " It is a message from our frontier squad and it seems like they are under attack and need aid." Rioan quickly went back into his bedroom and dressed himself so that he was battle ready, a few minutes later he walked out of his room battle ready, now with a serious expression he looked at the advisor "I will go in front and you send in medical Nin after I leave... Do not send any type of fighting Nin because it might be a trap." With that said he sped his way out of the building and went towards the borders, it would not take long for him to reach his destination as he had inherited the same speed from the past Raikages.
After a few minutes of speeding Rioan was out of the village and going to where the reports came from, the report had come from a small outpost north of the village and one of the closest one to the village so Rioan could get there very fast, a bit after half way to the outpost Rioan could se some bodies on the floor so he stopped by them to see if there were any alive but he was out of luck none of them were alive and they all had burn marks all over their bodies so now Rioan knew that the attacker was a Katon user which gave Rioan a slight advantage as he was from the Ranton bloodline so he could use Raiton and Suiton, after checking out the rest of the bodies Rioan started speeding again towards the outpost where he was sure to meet the attacker, once he had reached the outpost he could see a hooded figure holding one of his scouts by the neck, Rioan rushed to the scouts aid, while he was running he done some hand signs. "Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ]" As the lightning hit the hooded man he changed into a puff of grey smoke, it was only a clone.
Rioan was quite shocked to find out that the attacker was only a clone and was able to do so much damage as Rioan reached the body of the scout it was already too late, the scout was dead so Rioan went around the perimeter to check if the onwner of the clone was near by but there seemed to be no one around those parts only the dead and burned bodies of the scouts, Rioan was heading back to the village when he heard some movements behind him and once he turned around there was a massive fireball closing in on him, Rioan had to jump to the side as fast as he could so he would not get hit but as he did that he was a bit too late his foot was caught in the fire but he was able to escape the attack, Rioan now could see the one who dared to attack him it was once again the hooded man but this time it was not a clone.
Rioan slowly got up and looked at them man that was fiften meters away from him, Rioan wanted to finish this quickly so he was going to go all out, Rioan started running towards the hooded figure and while running. "Mizurappa. [Violent Water Wave]" Water started gushing out of Rioan's mouth and go towards the hooded figure who only jumped back to avoid the attack, but what Rioan wanted was not to hit the man but to make a massive puudle where the man was, after he was done with the water jutsu his body began to get wrapped by lightning chakra, Rioan was using Lightning Release Armour, when the hooded man saw Rioan charge at him again he used the Great Fireball Technique but Rioan only done a step to the side and jumped with tremendous speed because of the Lightning Release Armour, while in the air Rioan made a few hand signs "Got ya...hehe,,, Lightning Release: Black Panther" Black lightning started forming in his hands and when he put them together a the black lightning came out forming the black panther and heading towards the hooded man, the man tried to get away from it but they were too close to dodge such attack so he was hit head on and with the water around his foot the attack was even stronger, the man had no chance of survival, once he was hit he was electrocuted to death with that Rioan safely landed away from the water and looked back to see if the man was dead, after he was sure the man was dead he started walking back to his village so calmly like nothing had happened.
I like the new sample, but I will let another mod take a look just to see what he or she thinks.
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:24 pm
Diablo en Musica 92 izeromus
Username
izeromus
Position Wanted
Kumogakure
Why Do You Want It?
To keep it active and so that the guild will keep on going.
Please Give A Literate RP Sample
The sun was just setting up in the horizon making the quiet and cold streets light up with life but there was still sign of people on the streets as it was very early, but in quiet morning there could be heard steps, fast paced steps coming from a medium sized building that looked like a house, inside it was an old man running with a small scroll in one of his hands the old man was running as fast as he could, but so fast because of his old age, soon he came to a door his facial expression changed from a tired one to a relived one, the old man knocked on the door 5 time with a slight beat to it.
Inside the was a bed and in the bead there was a man sleeping like a rock, this man was called Rioan or just Raikage, but it seemed he did not even budge from the knocking on his bedroom door but then again the old man outside knocked with more strength so it was a lot louder, Rioan now heard the knocking and opened one of his eyes and looked over at the door "Who is it at this time" Rioan asked but it did not sound like a normal person talking it sounded more like a mumble from a drunken man but of course Rioan was not drunk he was sleepy, so Rioan got up from the bed with such determination that even a turtle would be able to run away from him, Rioan now walked towards the door like a zombie and often bumping to stuff on the way and even tripping over his own sandals but he still made it to the door alive, and as soon as he opened the door he saw the old man there, Rioan gave a slight sigh at the vision at this early hour. "So what do you want at this hour advisor." Rioan asked with a lazy expression all over his face.
The adviser was quite shocked at how Rioan looked when he opened the door, he was only in his underwear and nothing else, the advisor now showed the small scroll to Rioan who slowly reached it up to it and got hold of it, now the advisor had a serious look on his old face which made him look quite creepy and then he said. "This came in this morning." Rioan looked at the old advisor's serious face and was a bit scared then he turned his attention back to the small scroll in his hand. "I can tell it came in this morning there was no need to tell me that." Rioan opened the scroll and started reading it following every line with his golden colored eyes, after he was done reading he looked over to the advisor. " It is a message from our frontier squad and it seems like they are under attack and need aid." Rioan quickly went back into his bedroom and dressed himself so that he was battle ready, a few minutes later he walked out of his room battle ready, now with a serious expression he looked at the advisor "I will go in front and you send in medical Nin after I leave... Do not send any type of fighting Nin because it might be a trap." With that said he sped his way out of the building and went towards the borders, it would not take long for him to reach his destination as he had inherited the same speed from the past Raikages.
After a few minutes of speeding Rioan was out of the village and going to where the reports came from, the report had come from a small outpost north of the village and one of the closest one to the village so Rioan could get there very fast, a bit after half way to the outpost Rioan could se some bodies on the floor so he stopped by them to see if there were any alive but he was out of luck none of them were alive and they all had burn marks all over their bodies so now Rioan knew that the attacker was a Katon user which gave Rioan a slight advantage as he was from the Ranton bloodline so he could use Raiton and Suiton, after checking out the rest of the bodies Rioan started speeding again towards the outpost where he was sure to meet the attacker, once he had reached the outpost he could see a hooded figure holding one of his scouts by the neck, Rioan rushed to the scouts aid, while he was running he done some hand signs. "Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ]" As the lightning hit the hooded man he changed into a puff of grey smoke, it was only a clone.
Rioan was quite shocked to find out that the attacker was only a clone and was able to do so much damage as Rioan reached the body of the scout it was already too late, the scout was dead so Rioan went around the perimeter to check if the onwner of the clone was near by but there seemed to be no one around those parts only the dead and burned bodies of the scouts, Rioan was heading back to the village when he heard some movements behind him and once he turned around there was a massive fireball closing in on him, Rioan had to jump to the side as fast as he could so he would not get hit but as he did that he was a bit too late his foot was caught in the fire but he was able to escape the attack, Rioan now could see the one who dared to attack him it was once again the hooded man but this time it was not a clone.
Rioan slowly got up and looked at them man that was fiften meters away from him, Rioan wanted to finish this quickly so he was going to go all out, Rioan started running towards the hooded figure and while running. "Mizurappa. [Violent Water Wave]" Water started gushing out of Rioan's mouth and go towards the hooded figure who only jumped back to avoid the attack, but what Rioan wanted was not to hit the man but to make a massive puudle where the man was, after he was done with the water jutsu his body began to get wrapped by lightning chakra, Rioan was using Lightning Release Armour, when the hooded man saw Rioan charge at him again he used the Great Fireball Technique but Rioan only done a step to the side and jumped with tremendous speed because of the Lightning Release Armour, while in the air Rioan made a few hand signs "Got ya...hehe,,, Lightning Release: Black Panther" Black lightning started forming in his hands and when he put them together a the black lightning came out forming the black panther and heading towards the hooded man, the man tried to get away from it but they were too close to dodge such attack so he was hit head on and with the water around his foot the attack was even stronger, the man had no chance of survival, once he was hit he was electrocuted to death with that Rioan safely landed away from the water and looked back to see if the man was dead, after he was sure the man was dead he started walking back to his village so calmly like nothing had happened.
I like the new sample, but I will let another mod take a look just to see what he or she thinks. Ok, and thanks *-*
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Posted: Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:46 pm
The whole thing is a run-on sentence, same as the last rp sample. I don't think it should be approved, strike 2. Length doesn't means it's good. Right now it's just full of fattening butter, instead of what should be meat, and cheese.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:10 am
Username
Antonio Inferni
Position Wanted
Raikage
Why Do You Want It?
Because we need a Raikage to get that village running
Please Give A Literate RP Sample
Demitri Arashi looked at the Mizukage and the Tsuchikage. They were using their different bloodlines to wreak havoc in the front line. “Hold the line Shinobi. The Raikage is coming.” His hands moved lightning fast as he did the hand signs for Reizaa Saakasu. Beams of “liquid lightning” were sent towards the two kage’s backs. They hit them, and the kage’s disappeared in a puff of smoke. “Raikage. You’re too predictable.” Ice appeared all around him. “Now you die.” Over two thousand senbon were sent towards him. Almost all of them hit. The Raikage’s body burst with smoke. “So are y’all.”
Clouds started to form in the sky. Form in the sky. They grew darker and rain poured from them. “Now you shall see the true power of the Raikage. The clouds fell quickly, to a height that would make any lightning made by them, hit the ninjas. Lightning started to hit the ground, electrocuting the other Iwa and Kiri ninja. The kumo ninjas weren’t killed from the lightning, but they were wounded. Two blasts hit the Tuchikage and the Mizukage.
“T…h…a…t hurt Raikage.” The two other kage’s glared at him. They moved for their attacks. The Mizukage boxed him in with ice, as the Tsuchikage launched fire and wind at him. He countered the fire with his suiton, and the wind he used the Mizukage’s ice to shield himself from. “To bad you are weak.” Another blast of lightning hit the two kage’s putting them down to their knees. “Now you will die.” He pointed both hands at the two kage’s and black Chidori’s formed there. He ran at them, and hit their chests. They were killed by electricity.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:11 pm
I deny it, I don't find it right. It's not showing that you're Raikage material.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:12 pm
I agree with Rundfunk, no offense but I don't think you're strong enough of a rper to be a kage.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:25 pm
TheyCallMeCBiscut I agree with Rundfunk, no offense but I don't think you're strong enough of a rper to be a kage. None taken. I would've taken offense if you would've been rude. I know it sucked. Just trying to speed up the process of Kumo getting finished.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:44 pm
((This should help speed up Kumogakure. It still needs the last paragraph but i will have it up soon, this is just to speed up the process.))
Username
izeromus
Position Wanted
Kumogakure
Why Do You Want It?
To keep it active and so that the guild will keep on going.
Please Give A Literate RP Sample
The sun was just setting up in the horizon making the quiet and cold streets light up with life but there was still no sign of people on the streets as it was very early. In the quiet morning there could be heard steps, fast paced steps coming from the direction of a medium sized building that looked almost like a house. Inside there was an old man, running with a small scroll in one of his hands. The old man was running as fast as he could, incredibly fast for his old age. Soon he came to a door, his facial expression changed from a tired one to a relived one in a matter of seconds upon coming to the door. The old man knocked on the door five times with a slightest knock to it.
On the other side of the door there was a room with a bed, and in the bed there was a man sleeping harder than a rock. This man goes by the name Rioan or just Raikage. It seemed he did not even budge from the knocking on his bedroom door, then again the old man outside knocked with more power, so it was a lot louder.Rioan,this time, heard the knocking and opened one of his eyes and looked over at the door. "Who is it at this time?" Rioan asked, but he did not sound like a normal person talking. His voice sounded more like a mumble of a drunken man. Of course, Rioan was not drunk,just sleepy. Rioan got up from the bed with a determination that even a turtle would be able to run away. A fter getting up, Rioan walked towards the door like a zombie, and as soon as he opened the door he saw the old man there. Rioan gave a sigh at the vision at this early hour."So what do you want at this hour adviser?" Rioan asked with a lazy expression.
The adviser was quite shocked at how Rioan looked once the door had been opened. Rioan was only in his underwear and nothing else.The adviser showed the small scroll to Rioan who slowly reached it up to it and got hold of it. Now the adviser had a serious look on his old face, which made him look quite creepy. "This came in this morning." Rioan looked at the old adviser's serious face and was a bit scared.Rioan turned his attention back to the small scroll in his hand. "I can tell it came in this morning. There was no need to tell me that." Rioan opened the scroll and started reading it, following every line with his golden eyes. After Rioan was done reading he looked over to the adviser. "It is a message from our frontier squad and it seems like they are under attack." Rioan went back into his bedroom and dressed himself so that he was battle ready. A few minutes later, he walked out of his room ready. With a serious expression, he looked at the adviser "I will go in front, you send in medical Nin after I leave... Do not send any type of fighting Nin because it might be a trap." With that said Rioan sped his way out of the building and went towards the village's Gate, it would not take long for Rioan to reach his destination. Rioan had inherited the same speed from the past Raikages.
After a few minutes of speeding, Rioan was out of the village and going to where the reports came from. The report had come from a small outpost north of the village and one of the closest to the village, Rioan could get there very fast. A bit after half way to the outpost, Rioan could see some bodies on the ground. Rioan stopped by them to see if there were any alive but he was out of luck. None of them were alive, having burn marks all over their bodies. Rioan figured that the attacker was a Katon [Fire] user which gave Rioan a slight advantage for he was from the Ranton bloodline so he could use Raiton and Suiton. After checking out the rest of the bodies, Rioan started to head over towards the outpost where he was sure to meet the attacker[. Once he had reached the small tower like outpost, Rioan could see a hooded figure holding one of his scouts by the neck. Rioan rushed to the scouts aid, while preforming hand signs. "Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ]" Once Rioan spoke the words water started gushing out of his mouth and then he touched the water with his hands which had lighting in them, As the lightning hit the hooded man he changed into a puff of grey smoke, it was only a clone.
Rioan was quite shocked to find out that the attacker was only a clone and especially on how the clone was able to do so much damage.When Rioan reached the body of the scout, it was already too late, and the scout was found dead. Rioan went around the perimeter to check if the owner of the clone was near by but there seemed to be no one around those parts only the dead and burned bodies of the scouts. After fully checking around Rioan was heading back to the village but he heard some movements behind him, Rioan quickly turned around, only to face a massive fireball that was closing in on him, Rioan had to jump to the side as fast as he could so he would not get hit, but he was too late. His foot was caught in the fire but he was able to escape the attack. Rioan saw the one who dared to attack him it. Once again, it was the hooded man, only this time it wasn't a clone.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:26 pm
Username iShay-chan, known and feared Bringer of Doom
Position Wanted Raikage
Why Do You Want It? Being an adv. lit/elite lit roleplayer, I have the time and ability to run a village smoothly. Also because it will help get this guild on its feet.
Please Give A Literate RP Samplexxxx“You know your job.” The voice of the man before her rumbled with a deep bass note as the brunette knelt before her leader. “Remind me what it is, girl.”xxxx“Synn is a threat. Threats must be obliterated.” The soprano voice deadpanned from under the hood of the coal-colored cloak that the girl wore.
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xxxxThe night was quiet. If it hadn’t been for the rain, their footsteps surely would have echoed off of the buildings that lined both sides of the rutted dirt road. Each cottage-style house had its shutters closed tightly, families inside them huddling together to wait out the storm. But people could only wait so much. The rain had been falling from the heavens in torrential sheets, as if Kami was trying to drown the sinners once more. The sky was nothing but roiling clouds that were the color of tar. Every few seconds, a deep rumble shook the earth and lightning split the sky into millions of pieces, almost like broken glass. Broken glass, or a giant’s jigsaw puzzle. The lightning lasted for only a millisecond; just long enough to momentarily illuminate the group that stood at the end of the road, their faces perpetually bathed in shadows cast by the hoods of their coal-colored traveling cloaks. A crack of lightning shattered the stillness of the scene as the rain pooled in the ruts in the road left by the passage of carts over the years, turning the unpaved mess into a river of mud. The three moved silently, the two taller figures dwarfing the third, though it was the smallest figure that seemed to be leading the group.xxxx“You are certain this is the house, Daichi.” The words were a nearly inaudible hiss from the smallest figure, the sound of the voice soft and angelic like that of a child. It seemed almost impossible that a voice that sounded like bells could speak in such a menacing deadpan. It was not a question. It was a statement of fact. Her feral crimson eyes glowed as the group silently approached a house with the number 16 emblazoned on the door in metal numbers.xxxx“Positive, Amaya.” The word came out from beneath the hood of the larger figure as a silken purr, the tone enticing with an almost seductive quality to it. The shapes were human, that much was certain, but they had a menacing atmosphere about them that made the hair on the back of a person’s neck stand on end. The speaker, Daichi, his name was, placed a hand on the shoulder of the smallest figure and, the movements perfectly synchronized, they took a couple of steps back from the door. “Harou.” A hand sheathed in a black leather glove appeared from under the thick traveler’s cloak, gesturing the largest of the three figures towards the door.xxxx“One. Two. Thr--” The end of the word was drowned out by an earsplitting crack of lightning overhead at the same time as the largest figure, Harou, placed a heavily booted foot against the oak door and kicked. The door, frame and all, crashed to the floor, rainwater quickly collecting in small puddles as the three figures stepped into the house. The sound, coupled with several soft screams that erupted from the family sitting peacefully in their living room, was deafening. The scarlet eyes of the smallest figure, Amaya, glinted with malice in the dim light of the room. The heels of her black patent leather stiletto boots made a sharp rapping noise as she crossed the threshold of the door and stood before the family, her brothers flanking her on either side. “My, my. It has been quite a while.” Her voice carried an unmistakable note of boredom as her deadly crimson eyes traced over each face. The girl’s pale, delicate-looking hands reached up and lowered the cowl of her cloak, the material blacker than night.xxxxHer face was lovely, a sculpture of a young goddess brought to life, her dark hair tied in a tight bun at the back of her head. She surveyed the family for several long, silent seconds as they huddled together, trembling, in the corner of the den. There were four of them: a mother, a father, and their identical twin sons. A middle-aged woman, clearly the mother of the household, was shaking, pressing herself up against the wall as her arms clutched her son to her chest. The boy looked no older than five, but his amber eyes were wise beyond his years. He stood, allowing his mother to clutch him to her bosom while he clung to the hand of another boy, identical to him down to the last freckle. “You,” She lifted her hand to point directly into the center of the first boy’s forehead. The child shuddered as he averted his gaze away from Amaya’s blood-colored irises. “Here. Now.” She snapped her fingers and pointed in front of her.xxxxThe mother’s anguished wail echoed in the unnaturally still night as she grabbed for her son. Harou and Daichi each seized one of the woman’s shoulders and threw her back against the wall, where she crumpled to the floor and began sobbing and shaking. Amaya grabbed a fistful of the young boy’s cropped dark blond hair, wrenching his head back with enough force to make him cry out in pain as she placed the edge of a poison-dipped kunai against his throat. The child whimpered, a pathetic sound as he leaned as far away from the blade as his captor would allow.xxxx“Tell me. Your name is Kirin, is it not? You are Kirin and your brother is Niko. Is that correct?” The boy nodded, leaning his head back and tightly closing his eyes. She pressed the edge of the kunai against the smooth skin of his throat, raising a thin line of blood droplets. “Where is your sister?” The words slipped through Amaya’s lips like satin as she purred into his ear, though the sound was more menacing than persuasive. The boy stayed silent, shaking his head minutely.xxxxAmaya angered instantly, throwing the boy back across the room by his hair and storing the kunai back in her thigh holster while the boy crashed headlong into the wall. A picture that was hung on the wall in a frame slid from its hook and crashed to the floor, sending shards of broken glass skittering across the polished hardwood floor like tiny glittering beetles. Raising her hand and shaking the sleeve to her cloak back to her elbow, she snapped her fingers, impatiently tapping her foot against the floor as Harou grabbed the other boy and brought him to his sister. “Where is she, damn it? Where is your sister?” She grabbed Niko’s face in her hand, squeezing just a bit as she backed him up against a wall and stood menacingly before him, her face just inches from his own. She held him tightly, just enough for her long, sharp, blood red-lacquered fingernails to leave tiny marks on his cheeks. Losing control, she shook him roughly. “You will tell me where she is or so help me, I will--”xxxx“Amaya, behind you--!”xxxxBefore her sentence was finished, a silver-tipped arrow sliced noiselessly through the air, puncturing Amaya’s palm between her index finger and thumb and pinning her hand to the wall, mere inches from Niko’s head. Amaya gasped softly in pain, using her left hand to wrench the arrow from her flesh. The silver arrowhead was covered with shockingly scarlet blood. The end of Daichi’s shout was cut off by a gagging, retching noise as the petite figure of a red-haired kunoichi dropped from the exposed ceiling beams and wrapped a length of wire around his throat. He gasped and spluttered for air as his eyes bulged in their sockets, his face turning a sickening shade of puce.xxxx“If you were truly looking for me, you would have known where to find me.”Amaya growled audibly at the sound of Synn’s cold soprano voice, seeming to come from the very ceiling of the house. Her feral crimson eyes darted upwards, searching the exposed rafters of the single-story house until they locked onto her face. The idea that Synn had evaded their ambush enraged Amaya while Synn gazed down at her from her hiding place. A quiet gasp hissed through Harou’s lips as a hand closed around his hair, tied back in a ponytail, and wrenched his body backwards. A swift kick to the back of his knee brought him to the ground as a cobalt-haired kunoichi laid the edge of a dagger against his jugular. His pulse thundered tangibly under the blade as he gulped and looked at his sister for instructions.xxxxThe blonde smirked, though the action was shrouded in the shadows where she was perched like a predator stalking its prey. Seeing Amaya at the end of the dirt road, she had slipped into the house through a window and used the counter in her kitchen to hoist herself up into the ceiling beams where she waited for the perfect moment to make her presence known. Bending her legs at the knees to counter-balance her weight and provide leverage, she leaned backwards until she was hanging upside down from the ceiling beams and fitted another arrow into her bow. Few shinobi were trained in the field of archery, but those who were had been trained by the elite. Synn’s gloved fingers pulled back on the feathered end of her arrow until her bowstring was pulled taut, aiming the glinting silver arrowhead between Harou’s eyes. At this distance, no one was close enough to take her weapon or stop her from firing the arrow. “You will release my brother now, thank you, or yours will drop where he stands.” Amaya shook her head in mock-disappointment before rounding on Niko and shoving him up against the wall, her forearm crushing his windpipe. He choked and gasped for oxygen as she laid the edge of the kunai back against his throat.xxxx“Synn, I’m disappointed. You know threats don’t work on the cold-hearted.” From there, everything seemed to happen in slow-motion. Amaya, moving quicker than the lightning that illuminated the room every few minutes, drew the blade across Niko’s throat, a thin line of crimson quickly becoming a spout as the boy’s eyes rolled back in his head, the skin of his throat sliced in a clean line. A choked gurgle escaped the boy's lips, followed by a large bubble of mixed saliva and blood which expanded and burst. Tiny bubbles built along the wound on his throat, forming a froth as the boy tried to scream. Synn screamed as she released the arrow and dropped quickly from the ceiling, the silver-tipped arrowhead embedding itself deep between Harou’s eyebrows with a sickening crunch. The hulking man went cross-eyed before his crimson irises, the same color as Amaya’s, rolled back in his head. Synn’s mother watched, wide-eyed with horror, at the scene unfolding before her. She shut her eyes tightly and swallowed the reflexive urge to vomit, clutching Kirin to her and shielding him from the spectacle before them. Harou fell forward to lay facedown on the floor, the feathered end of the arrow snapping off as the floor forced it still deeper into his head. His forehead hit the floor with a loud crack as blood and another substance, the name of which Synn had no desire to know, began to pool on the floor, flowing unchecked from the split in Harou's forehead that the arrow had made. Small lumps of what Synn assumed to be grey matter floated atop the ever-widening pool of blood on the hardwood floor.xxxxAmaya screeched her brother’s name as Midori, Synn‘s half-sister, moving swiftly and surely, pulled on each end of the razor wire. A strangled gagging noise bubbled from Daichi’s mouth as his face turned more blue than purple, his eyes bulging out of his head so far that they seemed to be about to pop out of the sockets. The wire sliced through the layers of fat, sinew, cartilage, and bone, making no noise as it did so, as Amaya drew her katana and slashed it through the air at Midori. Daichi’s head fell from his shoulders as his body fell forward, his eyes darting around in their sockets before rolling back in his head and going still. The head itself hit the floor with a dull crack as blood poured from the wounds on the body and the severed head, which rolled to a stop several feet from the rest of the headless corpse. Midori’s breath escaped in a hiss as the steel of Amaya’s blade sliced deep into her shoulder, cutting through flesh and muscle and laying the wound open clear to the bone. Blood quickly began to soak through her shirt, spattering Amaya's face and drenching her black tunic as Midori tried to stem the flow with her sleeve, turning on the spot and using her momentum to deliver a swift kick to Amaya's midsection. The brunette's slender body hit the wall off to Synn's left, her head cracking against the drywall hard enough to leave a dent and smear of crimson on the paint.xxxxAmaya pivoted on the spot, her eyes burning as she searched for Synn, who was once more crouched among the eaves of the house. The brunette was pressed against a wall, several stray locks of hair escaping from her usually neat bun, as she fought the internal flight reflex. An internal battle began, and the struggle showed clearly in her scarlet eyes. She was outmatched. Even a kunoichi of her level couldn’t hold her own against Synn and against Takara. Amaya knew her enemies better than that. They had been comrades, friends even, in the Academy together. Takara, Amaya, Midori, and Synn had graduated from the Academy at the top of their class, each excelling in a different type of specialized combat. Synn was the only one in the Academy who had been trained to wield a bow and arrow, something Amaya had struggled to learn before abandoning the practice completely. Amaya was a kenjutsu specialist, excelling in wielding standard-length blades and those that were larger than the standard katana. But her blades were no match for the distances covered by Synn’s hand-crafted, personalized arrows. Against Takara, who specialized in the use of razor wire and projectiles, Amaya had a chance. But Synn could position herself where Amaya’s blades couldn’t reach her, and slowly take Amaya down from a distance.xxxxHer choices were laid out clearly before her: if she ran, she would never get a chance like this again, never have the opportunity to take Synn down again. If she stayed, she would find her death at the hands of two people she once called friends. Fight or flight. Fighting would kill her either way. Either she would exhaust herself until she couldn’t fight anymore, or Synn would put an arrow through her temple. Flight was the simple matter of getting back out of the door and running for the road. The doorway was wide open, raindrops spattering against the splintered remains of the door as Amaya, in a desperate attempt at flight, bolted for the open doorway. And that was the only opportunity that Synn needed.xxxxHer body tumbled quickly through the air that was thick with tension and the metallic smell of blood as Synn fell from the ceiling beam, somersaulting through the air and landing in a crouch behind her foe. Her gloved hand shot out, seizing Amaya by the collar of her cloak and jerking her back. A strangled gag burst from the brunette's lips as Synn, fingers entwined within the cloth of the girl's cloak and dress, allowed her inertia to carry her actions. She rotated her shoulder cuff and lifted Amaya's feet from the floor before hurling her small figure across the room. She hit the opposite wall and slid to the floor, gasping for breath before jumping to her feet. However, the was something off about her posture, the way she was crouching, coiled like a cobra that was preparing to strike. The brunette seemed unable to straighten up completely, a detail that Synn took great satisfaction in.xxxx"So now you want to fight. Well, you're in for the fight of your life." The blonde snarled at the girl who had once been a sister to her. Her vision was tinted crimson, pulsing slightly, keeping time with her thundering heartbeat and the adrenaline that was racing through her body. Her entire form was shaking, trembling minutely from the raw force of the anticipation coursing through her system. Amaya closed the distance between the two kunoichi in a matter of mere milliseconds, slashing at Synn's torso. The blonde retaliated, infusing her fingertips with chakra and jabbing them against the pressure point in the crease of Amaya's elbow. The girl cried out in pain as a small welt formed on the place where Synn's fingers had touched her skin. First red, then greenish-purple, a bruise began to form in a matter of seconds as Amaya's fist connected with the side of Synn's face. The force of the suckerpunch to the side of the face made a small grunt burst from Synn's lips as she was sent sprawling back, struggling to stand as her brown leather boots, unlike the shoes most shinobi wore, skidding on the hardwood floor, sliding through puddles of mixed rainwater, blood, and bits of gray matter. Disregarding the actual techniques of the fighting style she'd meticulously practiced for years, Synn curled a fist, pulled her muscles back, and let her arm snap forward to plow her fist into the end of Amaya's chin. The girl fell to her knees, blood pouring from her mouth as she spat a glob of saliva and blood onto the floor, one of her teeth making a brilliant white speck in the mass of dark crimson. "Well, Maya? Am I strong enough for you now?" She grabbed the brunette and hauled her to her feet before roundhouse kicking her in the cheek. "How about now?" Synn's angry shouts were torn from her lips by the chaos of the storm outside. Her gloved hand clamped down on the top of the brunette's head, seizing the girl by the hair only to knock her down once more. "What about now? Is this enough? Am I brutal enough now, Amaya?" Grabbing the other girl by the throat, she lifted her until her feet were no longer touching the floor, squeezing her trachea. Amaya gagged and spluttered for air, kicking at Synn in a desperate attempt to free herself. The kick itself startled Synn just enough to release her hold on Amaya and drop the girl, letting her fall in a heap to crumple on the floor. She gasped for air for several seconds, massaging her throat with her own hand. There were five purple marks left from each of Synn's fingers on her throat.xxxx"How about now, Maya?" Synn's voice was soft and deadly as she stared, amethyst eyes cold and dead, into the crimson hues of her prey. The brunette was shaking, struggling to hold herself up as she looked into Synn's stoic face, tiny black spots and stars popping in her vision like bubbles. The blonde reached down and slowly entwined her hand around collar of Amaya's clothing, pulling her to her feet and shoving her until her back was against the wall. She carefully placed her forearm over the girl's throat and lifted her feet once more from the floor. The black spots began to bloom and pop in Amaya's field of vision as Synn's face swam into focus. She had never seen the blonde like this before. Her normally porcelain complexion was smudged and flecked with mud and smears of blood. She had one small cut by her hairline from when Amaya had punched her in the face, and the blood was slowly trickling down her cheek. Her cheek was swelling rapidly, a purplish lump forming under her skin. But it was her eyes that startled Amaya. Normally clear amethyst orbs now gazed back at the brunette, dark with anger, but sparking with hate and bloodlust. Her eyes were glassy, almost crazed looking. She leaned forward, her lips close to the brunette's ear as she whispered. "How about now, Maya? I'm strong enough to beat you. Is that enough yet?" Amaya said nothing, staring into Synn's eyes with an expression that plead for mercy. "Well? How about now?" Synn drew a single kunai, twirling it nimbly between her fingers and placing the tip against the soft flesh of Amaya's cheek. The brunette's breath came in a gasp as she felt the sharp blade slice deep into her face, felt the blood that ran down her cheek, down her neck. Synn held the kunai at eye level for a moment before running the tip of her tongue along the dull side of the blade. Amaya shuddered as waves of pain washed over her, threatening to pull her into unconsciousness.xxxxAnd then, before Amaya could take another breath, the pressure on her throat was gone, and she was falling. She must have been dead. Synn killed her. It was the only logical explanation. Synn was so close to ending it all. She wouldn't have just walked away. But she wasn't dead, that much was certain when her body hit the floor with a heavy thud. Synn turned her back on the brunette, facing her family, facing the three corpses that lay in the den of her home. Her mother clutched Niko's body to her chest as she wailed in despair. It was the only chance Amaya would ever have, so she took it, scrambling to her feet and bolting for the door. What her gaze missed, however, was the two objects in Synn's hands as she made one last rush for freedom.xxxxA silver-tipped arrow sliced noiselessly through the air, silently entering the head of the brunette through her temple. The silence rang in the air, as if reverberating off of the people who were holding their breath. With a thick-sounding splash, the brunette dropped to her knees before falling to lay face-down in the river of mud that made up the walkway leading into the house. Her crimson eyes rolled back in her head before closing forever.
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Wealthy Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:04 pm
Two rp samples, I vote iShay-chan for Raikage.
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