|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:55 pm
Don't Be afraid
I) I dance to my own music,
I don't care what they say,
I'm nobody's fool,
Or their slave,
I am my own girl,
And I'll stay that way,
Wild and free,
Is how I'm meant to be,
C)Take what you get,
Live how you dare,
Strike out your own way,
Don't be afraid,
If you fall,
Get back up again,
And don't be afraid,
II)Life throws you curves,
Learn how to bend,
Take each day like it is your last,
Show them you strength,
Don't run away,
If it's your dream,
Never give it up,
Turn to the crowd with a smile on your face,
(Chorus)
We Can Make Peace
1) Please just sit down,
I need to talk to you,
I know you don't wanna hear it,
But it's something I have to do,
I messed up,
And I can see that now,
Gives a whole new meaning,
To the frase "Hind sight's 20/20",
I can't ask for forgiveness,
But please hear this out,
C) I lied,
Said somethings I shouldn't have,
I messed with you,
And now I see,
I'm so sorry,
I just hope someday,
We can make peace,
2) Life hasn't been the same,
Since that fateful day,
I regret a lot,
But I'm facing my demons,
And dealin' with my ghosts,
You're the only one left,
That I can't bring myself to face,
(Chorus)
3) I know I shouldn't be here,
But here's where I'm at,
Down to my last thread,
Please please don't walk away,
Bawl me out,
Give me hell,
As long as it's something more than silence,
I don't care,
(Chorus)
III)Don't be afraid,
Hold on tight,
They can't kill,
What's in your dreams,
So don't be afraid,
(Chorus)
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2006 2:24 am
Tristen2006 To the phrase "Hind sight's 20/20", Fixed. The lyrics seem very teenage-growing-up-phase-thing, but what can I say? Artists are never wrong. xp
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Apr 06, 2006 2:12 am
i like it, but then again i like so much more than other people. keep on wirting, perhaps i should start posting my lyrics?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:29 am
Depends how it suits the music, what type of song is it? Fast/Loud? Soft/Melodious? Rockabilly? Funk? R'n'B?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:28 pm
Hmmm...well, as poetry it's okay, but it seems awful wordy for music. I'm not dissing it, but I think it might be hard to sing and get all the words out...speaking as one who sings.
I like the first one most.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 5:53 am
I really like the second one.
The first one seems a little chopy and would be a little hard to sing.
With these songs something by All-American Rejects came into my head for the tune...
How is it that it sounds?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 3:09 pm
torrinne Hmmm...well, as poetry it's okay, but it seems awful wordy for music. I'm not dissing it, but I think it might be hard to sing and get all the words out...speaking as one who sings. I agree that it is a bit wordy, but it all depends on how fast the tempo would be etc. Otherwise absolutely lovely. smile
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 4:17 pm
They are great! you should hear what i write! it;s insane (Literally!) razz mrgreen
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:06 pm
Tristen2006 Don't Be afraid I) I dance to my own music, I don't care what they say, I'm nobody's fool, Or their slave, I am my own girl, And I'll stay that way, Wild and free, Is how I'm meant to be, C)Take what you get, Live how you dare, Strike out your own way, Do not fear, If you fall, Get back up again, And do not fear, II)Life throws you curves, Learn how to bend, Take each day like it is your end, Show them your strength, Don't run away, If it's your dream, Never give it away, Turn to the crowd with a smile on your face, (Chorus) We Can Make Peace 1) Please just sit down, I need to talk to you, I know you don't wanna hear it, But I have to I messed up, And I can see that now, Gives a whole new meaning, To the frase "Hind sight's 20/20", I can't ask for forgiveness, But please hear this out, C) I lied, Said somethings I shouldn't have, I messed with you, I stabbed your back I'm so sorry, I just hope someday, We can make peace, 2) Life hasn't been the same, Since that fateful day, I regret a lot, But I'm facing my demons, And dealin' with my ghosts, You're the only one left, That I can't bring myself to face, (Chorus) 3) I know I shouldn't be here, But here's where I'm at, Down to my last thread, Please please don't turn your back, Bawl me out, Give me hell, As long as it's something more than silence, I don't care, (Chorus) (Chorus) I really liked them but i changed them to make them flow and rhyme a bit more. Hope ya like them!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:56 pm
It definitely tells a story, very nice! Perhaps more use of metaphors would help it flow better and make it a little easier to get everything out? I would love to hear what you had in mind musically when you wrote this!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:41 pm
I like, but it'd be easier to say with a recording. But beggars can't be choosers
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 5:55 pm
I like it, has a good meaning unlike other songs that you find that aren't exactly appropriate or tell you something negative! xd
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 9:23 am
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
