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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 4:18 pm


Tell what I need to work on. Just don't be a d**k about it or I'll send an army of zombies after you twisted .
PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:29 pm



Are you sure you want this?


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:05 pm


Haha. You know xane. The entire reason for a writers workshop is so that people will be dicks towards you.

Simple reasoning. The world is full of dicks. When someone us going to spebd time and money to read something you wrote. If it is not spectacular. Then it is s**t. Because everyone is a niw, the biggest dicks of all, Re the most importabt. The publishers. They dont give a ******** how awesome you story is. They want to make money. So a writers workshop, rather than have random people eat you alive and ruin your career entirely, because people rarely give a second chance and you will always been known as s**t if thags your first impression, you have people you know, and like mercilessly destroy everyfhing you do until your a blubbering mass afraid to write anymore.

You need the absolute worst oppinions everyone. Because it will help you improve. It will make you see the story though outside eyes without tarnishing your reputation. A typical writers workshop is. You have people read your work. They get to tell you everything that is wfonv with it, and you dont get to argue back. Because, if they dont get it, neither will other people.and we tend to oberlook the little things.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:52 pm


Ok I see your point Omega. And yes Rangi I'm sure I want this I am not an easily deterred person and I can take criticism. So yea guys lay it on me I know I need a lot of improvement in my writings and I have no friggen clue where to start. And don't worry I wont leave the guild or give up writing or anything like that just because someone pointed out the 20million flaws my crappy roleplay posts have that is the entire reason I made this thread.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:18 pm



Well give me some time. I will overlook some of your posts and we will get to work, alright my friend?

PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:36 pm


Thanks Rangi. I look forward to the improvements you shall bring upon me.

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