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 Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:52 pm
crying
I don't really do outlines as much as I just do a synopsis of my story. XD I know what the main plot is, but I just need parts in between that will help, you know, make a story. gonk lol, easy, right?
I usually just apprev. names so it's easier to write. I hate having to spell out the characters' names every time when I already know them. :/
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 9:57 pm
Okay, sooooo...I'm really just starting my story in the middle so I know what parts I need to improve upon. XD
Story junk:
M and J still in the cave thing with the CodeTalker guy. M receives a tiny implant transmitter to help stave off reception from V and Z. They leave.
Once they leave, they are attacked by Hunters. Scary! Dang, I need a better name for these freaks. XD;
There are some parts I want here buuuut I dunno if I'll include them ...
M and J fly to BB where they get the low down on what's been going on at their end. M realizes that she wants to understand all about what this supposed "ultimate being" is -- but where to start?
Okay, here, I need some help. XDD I'll think about it!
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 7:43 am
I like it, and commentary to yourself is pretty awesome xp . How scary are your Hunters?
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2011 4:25 pm
PANDA reading a BOOK I like it, and commentary to yourself is pretty awesome xp . How scary are your Hunters? Hunters are these beings (kinda like humans but made in a lab) made by the government that can be controlled completely by agents (special agents etc.) A lot of the Hunters I have thought about mainly have the look of bugs or sea creatures -- some have a fused spine and eight legs (like spiders), some have a glowy-type skeleton (maybe an electric-type being, not sure yet), others have an exoskeleton (like crabs). Some don't really look human, but they're small, reconnaissance beings used to track others. Anyway, they have no compassion (haha, of course) and aren't really "human" so they are expendable, killing machines. I guess you can call them more like "sentient beings". Something like that. XD
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Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 6:33 pm
Sevi Rais Okay, sooooo...I'm really just starting my story in the middle so I know what parts I need to improve upon. XD Story junk: M and J still in the cave thing with the CodeTalker guy. M receives a tiny implant transmitter to help stave off reception from V and Z. They leave. Once they leave, they are attacked by Hunters. Scary! Dang, I need a better name for these freaks. XD; There are some parts I want here buuuut I dunno if I'll include them ...M and J fly to BB where they get the low down on what's been going on at their end. M realizes that she wants to understand all about what this supposed "ultimate being" is -- but where to start? Okay, here, I need some help. XDD I'll think about it!All right, to add to this -- M decides to go back to the beach to where she saw that strange ship in the air -- perhaps there will be some clues there? Z and V do not want to follow them, but, reluctantly, they do to try to find the adapter that connects to the TAM. Also need to split up BB to "divide and conquer" the humans. Eventually this will be their undoing...(?) Also gotta make the scene where M meets V in a building or something. I wanted it to be a school buuuuut ... well, we'll see. That would kinda make sense...
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:00 pm
Whoa, reading about your Hunters made me think of some creatures in Mirrormask!
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:04 pm
MADLYALICE Whoa, reading about your Hunters made me think of some creatures in Mirrormask! I think I've heard of that, but I've never read it! eek Ugh, I swear I've given up on fiction! Tragic! emotion_8c
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:05 pm
Sevi Rais MADLYALICE Whoa, reading about your Hunters made me think of some creatures in Mirrormask! I think I've heard of that, but I've never read it! eek Ugh, I swear I've given up on fiction! Tragic! emotion_8c Heheh, luckily Mirrormask is a movie, not a book! (At least, as far as I know.) Great movie though, beautiful art.
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:12 pm
MADLYALICE Sevi Rais MADLYALICE Whoa, reading about your Hunters made me think of some creatures in Mirrormask! I think I've heard of that, but I've never read it! eek Ugh, I swear I've given up on fiction! Tragic! emotion_8c Heheh, luckily Mirrormask is a movie, not a book! (At least, as far as I know.) Great movie though, beautiful art. I've heard of Dark Mirror ... what's Mirror mask about? surprised
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:18 pm
Sevi Rais MADLYALICE Sevi Rais MADLYALICE Whoa, reading about your Hunters made me think of some creatures in Mirrormask! I think I've heard of that, but I've never read it! eek Ugh, I swear I've given up on fiction! Tragic! emotion_8c Heheh, luckily Mirrormask is a movie, not a book! (At least, as far as I know.) Great movie though, beautiful art. I've heard of Dark Mirror ... what's Mirror mask about? surprised "In a fantasy world of opposing kingdoms, a 15-year old girl named Helena who works at the family circus with her father and mother, who wishes--quite ironically--that she could run away from the circus and join 'real life'. But such is not to be the case, as she finds herself on a strange journey into the Dark Lands, a fantastic landscape filled with giants, Monkeybirds and dangerous sphinxes. She must find the fabled MirrorMask in order to save the kingdom and get back home.' It's a movie by Dave McKean and Neil Gaiman.
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Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:25 pm
MADLYALICE "In a fantasy world of opposing kingdoms, a 15-year old girl named Helena who works at the family circus with her father and mother, who wishes--quite ironically--that she could run away from the circus and join 'real life'. But such is not to be the case, as she finds herself on a strange journey into the Dark Lands, a fantastic landscape filled with giants, Monkeybirds and dangerous sphinxes. She must find the fabled MirrorMask in order to save the kingdom and get back home.' It's a movie by Dave McKean and Neil Gaiman. Ooh Neal Gaiman! I saw Coraline. Great film. 3nodding Sounds like Mirror Mask is a good movie, too! Okay gotta get to bed now and think up another scene for my novel tomorrow! XD I've been working on a fanfic, so I've been quite slow on my novel. //shotshot
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:53 am
Mirriormask sounds really cool.
And the Hunter things sound creeeeepy. To me anyway...
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