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 Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2011 6:59 pm
Been awhile since I last posted...A really long while. Figured I might start becoming active again.
So Poetry's considered art right?
Inspired by the 90's/early 2000's Emo/Screamo bands Saetia, Pg. 99 and Kite Flying Society
I can read the lines
They're slowly disappearing
I've been wasting my life
Like I've been rehearsing it all this time
I'm the leading role
And I can feel my heart-beat decreasing
I have no control, I'm watching it all un-fold
I'm upon a stage and it's unnerving
My lines are almost gone and my heart's stopped beating
I catch a glimpse of what the last line reads
"I'm half-enthusiastic about the coming dawn,
I feel no need to find a replacement; I'm leaving
My life's been staged, I don't feel the need to be Benignant
I've haven't lived my life and thus is my punishment"
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Posted: Wed Oct 05, 2011 7:27 pm
A really long while? Try two weeks. And I'm not sure how you could be active again, when you were never active in the first place.
As for the poem... Well, it's not as dumb as your last poem, but twice as meaningless. What is it supposed to be about, exactly?
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