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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:58 pm

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I do avi art sometimes and I'd like to know what you guys think of it.
Here's a link to my art shop:

In particular I was wondering if you could critique this one:

Thanks <3

Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:40 pm

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In particular I was wondering if you could critique this one:

DETAILS DETAILS DETAIL! O:. Add more shading to the cheeks and highlight the eyes as well as some white lines in the eyebrows. Plus some emotion, and noticeable separation from the chin to neck.

owo........You told -us- to critique.

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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:49 pm

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Nairomi

In particular I was wondering if you could critique this one:

DETAILS DETAILS DETAIL! O:. Add more shading to the cheeks and highlight the eyes as well as some white lines in the eyebrows. Plus some emotion, and noticeable separation from the chin to neck.

owo........You told -us- to critique.

;A; There is such a thing as a nice critique but I'll work on it.

Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:04 pm

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Nairomi

In particular I was wondering if you could critique this one:

DETAILS DETAILS DETAIL! O:. Add more shading to the cheeks and highlight the eyes as well as some white lines in the eyebrows. Plus some emotion, and noticeable separation from the chin to neck.

owo........You told -us- to critique.

;A; There is such a thing as a nice critique but I'll work on it.

.......If critiquing -was- nice. It would be considered a compliment :U.

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Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 3:10 pm

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.......If critiquing -was- nice. It would be considered a compliment :U.

And also a critique 8U

Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 4:15 pm

the clothing needs wrinkles. your darks aren't dark enough . her right arm is to long. people say the eye is the window to the soul if you have no pupil they look like dolls. gold piece on shoulder needs to be shinier. behind her a** where the golden piece of jacket is. needs to be shaded because not much light should be getting to it. shade the face more. add highlights.

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Posted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 10:00 am

Lol@ Constructive criticism.
I can't help unless the size is bigger. I have more of a "general art"s critique.

When I mean size, I mean more to work with, like the body, legs, arms, accessories... ect.

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