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 Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 6:56 pm
well, since people dont read my journal, i'll post my poetry here.. doesnt even seem like anyone here o.0" please feel free to make comments (harsh criticism recommended):
ps- they're not in the same order as my journal and please excuse my poetry if there are any cussin' of stuff like that
Lost
Walking around in this world, looking confused and worried
You just cant find the way and your mind is buried
No one would just take the time to help you
Now you are lost and dont know what to do
You just dont know how to express how you feel
But it all seems too real
You cry, cry, and cry
But the situation never dies
You've given up and now you watch each day go by
When you finally realize you should try again
And wonder why then
Why all the wait
Since its too late.
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 7:10 pm
i guess i should post more than just one so theres more to talk about =/ (these are pretty old but tey're in the computer so... here you go):
Scared
You thought running away would be best
But that would just increase your stress
Everything in your life is becoming a mess
You really need to take a break and rest
But there was too much to fix
Everything was in a mix
You started to run
It was like the sun, no matter where you go there was the sun
You tried to hide
But it would also turn the corner and be right by your side
You cried wolf but no one was there
No one seemed to care
You didnt want to stay
All you want to do was run away
You'd go anywhere
But here.
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 7:12 pm
this one is just something that came up to my head of changing the topic of what i've been writing about
Rose
Such beauty and elegance
With its soothing scents
Soft red flakes floating in the air
Close your eyes and you can feel them rushing through your hair
Symbol of love and caring
Other times, it shows your heart tearing
It brings joy to the heart
And other times, it rips it apart
You could say, "I love you,"
Or "Bye, sorry but I dont know what else to say or do"
It means so much
Memories come back even with the tiniest touch
Every night you take it and hold it close with a soft fist
Just sit there, close your eyes and forget everything else exists.
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 7:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 7:34 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 8:23 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:37 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:39 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 7:41 pm
this one... i dont really know what to say about it, i guess i jsut wanted to try something new =/ -- enjoy:
Broken Heart
I have a heart like fire
It lights up and goes black
With my desire
But I know someday itll crack
When my heart is filled with light
Blinding my sight
Whatever is ahead is going to be a surprise
As I enjoy it now
Time flies
Enjoying myself too much to realize Im going to end up with a broken heart again
Sitting there wondering how
This happened the same as then
Now Im left with a broken heart
Leaving me here to fall apart
My heart is no longer lit
As we speak
My heart gets darker and darker bit by bit
Till the darkness had reached its peak.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:17 pm
wow....very deep indeed...
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:30 pm
yeah, i showed my friend one of my poems and she said (and i quote) "someone needs a hug"
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 8:46 pm
Red_World04 yeah, i showed my friend one of my poems and she said (and i quote) "someone needs a hug"
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 4:03 pm
this is the latest one i wrote---just like a week ago--- and its my thoughts about the world and how i feel about it, tell me if you agree:
MIMICK
Why does everyone got to
Look like, sound like
Walk like, talk like
Doing what everyone do
People dress like, act like
Think like, live like
They got it all
Treatin' others like they're better than yall
People just want to be like you
Sit like, hit like
Eat like, treat like
That's what you gotta do
Now you should know to be like
Free like
Able to see like
That that's what people wanna see.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:05 am
Everybody's so busy trying to be different that they still end up the same. Interesting concept. The two before the last one were somewhat choppy though.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 10:33 am
Infinity-Nevermore Everybody's so busy trying to be different that they still end up the same. Interesting concept. The two before the last one were somewhat choppy though. That's the way the world turns.
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