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PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:37 pm


Introduction

Wander freely, wander far
Following the fading star....


Hello hello, welcome to a quest for an investigator and his magnifying glass! Crits are very much welcome, but only until December 31st, please. You can post here, though I'd prefer if you IMed me so we could discuss properly -- my MSN is lostandtold@hotmail.com, and my AIM is lostandtold
(yes, I'm lostandtold everywhere).

My eternal gratitude to kotaline, chenabby, Kitty Sprightt, and thyPOPE, who listened to me ramble and encouraged me to make this quest!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:41 pm


The Keeper

The man with a house, but no home; finding the missing, but not what's missing.


Character name: Adrien Durand.
Age: 18.
Region: Born and raised in Imisus; currently a wanderer, but with a home in Mishkan.

Appearance: Small, pale, and delicate, Adrien has never known the flush of youthful vitality, and probably never will. He's a pale flame of a person who seems to consume himself -- no matter how much he tries to exercise or how healthy he eats, he has stopped growing at 5' and can't be much more than 100 lbs.

He is very pale, with equally pale blond hair, usually kept short and combed neatly, and surprisingly sharp green eyes. When embarrassed, he tends to flush a shocking shade of red, and he sunburns badly instead of tanning. In an unfortunate twist of fate, he gets cold very easily, and so he’s almost always bundled up in a thick coat, gloves, and boots, with a long scarf wound multiple times around his neck. Despite this, his thin, bony hands are almost always cold when he removes his gloves, and he always internally groans when he has to go to Shyregoed.

Somehow, against all odds, he escaped the Plague while hardier folk around him succumbed to it.



Personality: Adrien comes off as well-bred, polite, even a little shy -- he doesn’t go out of his way to be social, but when he does speak, he tries to take care not to step on any toes or bruise any feelings. Upsetting people is more trouble than it’s worth, and if a little extra effort on his part to smooth over potential offenses can prevent loud arguments or fights, so much the better.

His Plague’s loud, unflattering observations are a source of great embarrassment for him, as he hates being the center of attention -- especially negative attention. In fact, he dislikes commotion in general, and tends to be a bit of a wallflower, fading into a crowd or the background fairly easily. Of course, being on most people’s good side is very helpful when he has questions that need answering, or people that need finding.

His quietness isn’t for a lack of things to say, though. While his education was good, if unremarkable, he prefers to observe. People, to him, are the most strange and curious creatures of all, and the Plague is the greatest puzzle. During the long hours he spent people-watching from his window as a child, he acquired a peculiar knowledge of people's general habits, and the possible meanings of a nervous glance or an unusual stain. He doesn't always get it right, and he usually keeps his observations to himself.

He does not like hastiness, nor does he like to be rushed; he much prefers to have the luxury of time, to be able to look, listen, and learn. The right question here and the proper observation there can give him plenty of information, though he doesn’t spread it unless asked, keeping it to formulate his own ideas. Given adequate time, he can make plans, and backup plans, and prepare -- since, to him, preparation is the most important task of all.

Unfortunately, this leads to him to be overly cautious sometimes, as he prefers to think, not act. He will hesitate to take opportunities and risks when he ought to, and he would rather retreat from a disadvantageous situation than stick it out. If he has another compelling reason to stay, such as loyalty to a person or to his ideals, that will override his caution -- but in the absence of that, retreat it is. As a result, he usually doesn't end up in situations out of his control or beyond his ability to affect.

His caution stems in part from the fact that he prefers to be prepared, but it also has roots in insecurity. He simultaneously craves affirmation and distrusts it, just as he seeks company, but is uncomfortable with others. Although he has observed others for years, he has rarely attempted to interact with them himself -- and after his mother's death, a fear of further attachment took root. She was the only person he considered himself close to, but even she could not escape the Plague.

This is probably complicated by his very strong, optimistic belief in people’s inherent goodness, which almost borders on naivete. He’s not stupid -- he knows that people will lie, cheat, steal, and murder, and that some people are simply beyond redemption or caring about it. However, rather than deny that evil exists, he chooses to believe that all people have the capability to be good, but circumstances have forced them to be otherwise, and he’s very enthusiastic about it. Morals and righteousness are the topic that rouse the strongest response from him, and he will go on at length about doing the right thing if the listener lets him. Directing him away from the subject, or telling him to shut up, might work -- but he will quietly, and stubbornly continue to believe. Whether he will always believe, though, is uncertain -- especially in a place like Panymium, where so many have been brought low by the Plague.



History: In Imisus, the household of a Scientist and his wife was busier than ever. Marie Durand was reserved, refined, intelligent, ladylike, and polite, the daughter of a soldier; Vincent Durand, on the other hand, was an eccentric Scientist, prone to long silences followed by loud and excessive rambling when struck by a particularly good idea. Though the marriage had been arranged by their parents, it was not unhappy, and Adrien was born in the middle of a bitterly cold winter. His parents both had high hopes. His father wanted him to follow in his footsteps -- and his mother hoped that he would follow her own father into the military. Ever since marrying Vincent, she had become painfully aware of the silent distrust leveled at the Scientists, especially since her own family treated her husband with suspicion and wariness. If her son was to become a soldier, he might find an easier way through life; she kept the hope that he would thereby break her family's silence locked in her chest.

As he grew, Adrien took most after his mother, who was home much more often. His father was almost always working, not returning until long after his son had fallen asleep, then rising in the early hours of the morning to go to work. When they were in the house at the same time, Adrien was embarrassed by his father’s sudden and often incomprehensible outbursts, and withdrew from them, becoming ever quieter and more thoughtful.

He was frequently ill, and never took well to running around roughhousing with other children. When they were playing tag, he was off to one side, watching beetles scurrying in the dirt, or in town, browsing a trinket shop. His one joy seemed to be examining and collecting unusual objects -- anything from teacups to butterflies to trinkets to his favorite, scarves. He would spend hours examining each new acquisition, studying them from every angle and discovering all their intricacies.

Eventually, though, his curiosity turned to people. People, who followed no pattern that he could discern, were the most intricate creatures of all. He took to sitting at the window, observing passersby as they bustled to and fro on the street, just like the insects had in the dirt -- and yet, to his frustration, he found no rules for them. He had to settle for observing facts about them and their habits and collecting the objects that they left behind, and over the years, the intricacies of social convention started to become clearer to him. But he was still aimless, goalless, unsure of what he wanted to do, and so he lingered, watching others and their lives, while he spent his own indoors.

Then, disaster: not long before his seventeenth birthday, his mother began to sicken. His father’s work was suddenly very, very personal, and it became an obsession. He was nearly impossible to approach, much less talk to, always busy or locked in his study. Adrien, dreading her inevitable end, stayed by his window seat, seeking to forget his own troubles by divining those of others.

Near the end, his father burst in through the front doors and straight to her bedside, with what he claimed had to be a cure. When he suddenly fell silent, Adrien knew it had failed -- but he had not expected how stifling the silent, empty house would become. His father stopped speaking altogether, withdrawing into his work. Unable to bear the deafening silence any more than he’d been able to bear the sight of his mother wasting away, Adrien packed up to leave.

But among his possessions was something that had not been there before: a box with a note. It was his final birthday present from his mother, a brand new magnifying glass -- but the lens was dirtied by a peculiar black swirl that could not be cleaned off. Nonetheless, he took it with him, unable to leave it behind, and he set off to travel and find his own way, somewhere far away from his silent home.

The first month was the hardest. He was very sharply introduced to a world of cuts, bruises, and cold nights, and he began taking odd jobs as he could. One of those jobs was for a watchmaker: to find the man’s sister, who had last been heard from on her way to Shyregoed to be married. Adrien discovered a surprising pleasure in this task, one that had been absent from all the errands he’d run; he was traveling, seeing more of Panymium, but he was doing so with a goal, asking questions and seeking someone in particular, in order to ease her brother’s worries. Unfortunately, it was not a happy ending, for she had died of the Plague.

Nonetheless, the experience left a lasting impression, and Adrien came to realize that many Panymese had loved ones who had been lost in uncertain circumstances. Adrien, without family ties or a fixed job to keep him in one spot, was well-suited to start looking for people exclusively -- finding runaways, lost travelers, and those who had succumbed to the Plague, and bringing word back to their friends and family. Though he has a house in Mishkan now, it’s little more than a place to store the objects he collects on his travels; he is more often off in the far-flung corners of Panymium. In finding the lost, he strives to fill the aching hole that has slowly grown in his chest for the past year.

And though it seems to him that each time he returns to his house, the dark swirl on the magnifying glass' lens seems to darken and expand, it must only be his imagination.



Quirks:

-He loathes silence. It makes him deeply uncomfortable and shifty, especially if a particularly large or usually busy place is quiet. He seeks gatherings of people for this reason -- though not to socialize. The white noise of people in the background is calming to him. For the same reason, even though Lucia's prattlings are often nasty and barbed, he is grateful because at least then it's not quiet.

-He likes to clean and organize. His living quarters are usually spotless and neatly arranged, no matter how temporary they are; his home in Mishkan is even more so.

-His collection of odd objects is quite impressive. While most of his collecting is aimless, just picking up interesting things here and there, some of it is based on a particular subject. He collects butterflies, chess pieces, and scarves in particular; a few of his favorites from the last collection usually travel with him, and he swaps scarves often.

-He keeps a notebook for each investigation, meticulously organized and filled with his cramped, nearly illegible handwriting. He keeps at least a written description of the person, a log of his travels and information gathered, and a little charcoal sketch if possible (going by a description, or any artwork the family might have of the person).

-He also keeps a journal. It's comforting for him to be able to organize events in his life like any other collection.



Development:

-As yet, he has not found anyone who did not want to be found. This would probably be a source of great conflict for him -- to carry out his mission and bring back the lost person's whereabouts against their wishes, or to obey their wishes and tell the searchers that he failed? To go against someone's wishes, or to compromise his morals?

-He needs to grow a spine -- or, at least, to be less uncertain of himself and more confident.

-Friends! It would be nice if he found friends, though he's not very good at making them. Lucia's quick and clever, but she's not exactly very nice. He would probably be most at ease making friends with another Grimm/Plague, since they show immunity to the Black Plague that's claimed so many lives.

-Factions! As of right now I'm leaning towards the Scientists for him, but he would have to remain in the dark about their...less savory experiments, lest his sense of justice compel him to leave.

lostandtold

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:47 pm


The Plague

Look closely -- no, don't just look. See.


Item history: Marie Durand had always been fond, in her quiet, reserved way, of her son. Though she loved her husband, wild epiphanies and all, she was internally and guiltily glad that Adrien took after her, hoping that he would find his way more easily in life without his father's eccentricities.

His fascination with observation didn't escape her; often she would stand at his window when he wasn't there, trying to see what he saw in the crowds that thronged the streets, or study his collections in his room, only to shake her head in quiet bewilderment and retreat. Still, even though she didn't understand it, she accepted and nurtured it, and for his birthday, she went out to purchase a very special present for him.

But unknown to her, the shopkeeper had been seized by the sickness, and not long after she returned to her home with the box she'd purchased, it began to affect her. She left the box among her son's possessions not long before she became bedridden, and forgot it. As she sickened, a black smudge began to cloud the magnifying glass' lens.

After her passing, Adrien discovered it, and kept it out of sentiment, not yet knowing what it would become.



Personality: Lucia is observant -- but sharply so. Whereas Adrien observes to get information, Lucia observes in order to pass judgment. And where he believes in good, she sees evil. Her gaze is harshly critical, quick to pick up on others’ faults and mistakes and to blow them out of proportion. There is often a nugget of truth in her statements, but she tends to exaggerate them, turning a married man’s wandering eye into chronic unfaithfulness, and making someone’s white lie into a malicious attempt to mislead another. Although she is keenly observant, she is also prone to sensory overload, which causes her a lot of discomfort; she is only quiet when she is so overwhelmed that she has to withdraw into the warm, dark folds of Adrien's scarf.

First impressions are especially important with her, because they tend to color her perceptions of a person, place, or event afterwards. She focuses so intensely on her (usually negative) first impression that she has difficulty seeing any overall changes in a person, or indeed the person as a whole. A drastic change would be a shock for her, resulting in a very sudden paradigm shift.

Lucia believes that people’s capacity for evil is unmatched. She is fully aware that some people simply don’t care about others or actively want to hurt them, and believes strangers cannot be trusted. This pessimism has started to give way to cold certainty: if she has to protect her own Grimm from those who would try to fool him and do him harm, then she will, and that’s that. Never mind her size; being an embodiment of the Black Death is probably deterrent enough.

She is confident, even arrogant, loud, and abrasively honest. She does not hesitate to share her less flattering observations, even in public, despite Adrien’s objections and embarrassment -- indeed, she doesn't hesitate to share her observations on him, which are rarely positive and more often pushy and scolding. Despite his horror at what she says, he grows to admire her bravery in speaking her mind, as she is anything but insecure.

Lucia prizes truth above all else, and believes that in order to find the truth, she and Adrien cannot only observe -- they must also act. She constantly urges her Grimm to seize opportunities and pursue leads, rather than always sitting back to ponder. Sometimes, she simply can't bring herself to retreat and seek help; she is compelled to intervene herself.

This is because, despite her focus on the negative, she too believes in humanity's capability to be good, just like her Grimm -- though why is beyond her understanding. Though at the moment it's a more cynical, weary, belief, centered mostly around her frustration that people do not achieve what they could, it's there. As a result, she holds herself to high standards of honesty and fairness (if not kindness), and despite her grumbling, she is more than happy to help Adrien find missing people and bring peace to their families. In her own, critical way, she tries to push others to recognize their own flaws and mistakes, and to correct them.

She could probably do a better job than she is now, though.



Concept ideas:

All of these are pretty much open and flexible, because I love seeing what artists come up with, but these are a few rough ideas.

Putesco: The lens is fogged with a black swirl, an odd defect for a brand-new magnifying glass to have. The rest of it is clean, the ornate metal handle still shining and clean. An eye pattern is engraved at the end of the handle.

Excito: She could possibly be made out of glass, or have some kind of sheer veil. I envision her having a very slim, narrow body and spindly limbs. Her clothes would be conservative, neat, and crisp, with the only embellishments being an eye or eye-like motif. Colors are white, gold, and dark brown.

Anhelo: Tall, thin, and severe, with a fondness for businesslike white clothing and a withering glare from behind her glasses. The eye motif, probably more stylized and less overt than before, continues.



Quirks:

-As an Excito, she'd be barely three inches tall -- small enough, in fact, to hide in Adrien's thick scarf, only to poke her head out to say something decidedly sharp to whoever he might be speaking to at the time.

-She loves to run, sometimes popping out of her favored place and sprinting down the street after someone or something that's caught her interest. This causes problems for Adrien, who often has to scramble after her.

-She's easily distracted by intricate/ornate objects, and will often stop to study them in rapt fascination. Though she can sometimes resist the pull if she has a compelling reason (e.g. trying to chase down a thief), she will readily abandon a conversation to study an intricate bit of embroidery on her listener's dress.



Development:

-Learn to be nicer. She doesn't yet see any value in softening her words or gentling her tone, but she needs to; unfortunately, she is so obstinate that it might take her actually hurting someone, or being shouted at, to startle her into thinking of changing.

-Becoming less jaded and more hopeful. Between her and Adrien, they have the extremes; now they both have to find middle ground.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:52 pm


Prompt

The perpetual frozen winds of the Northern Sanct travel down to the rest of Panymium from the frigid mountains. Jack Frost's breath whips and nips at your dainty flesh, whether you be human or Plague. A harsh Winter, this one will be, and all folks poor and rich, comfortable or homeless, will have to work hard to survive. How does this Winter go for you and your Grimm? What hardships do you endure and how do you overcome them?

Excito


Shyregoed in the summer was cold; Shyregoed in winter was a nightmare. The wind screamed and howled, clawing at clothing and exposed skin alike; when it wasn’t, the silence was deafening. It was so cold that even the evergreens seemed to shiver like wet cats, unappetizing needles bristling outwards in all directions. Little stirred in such a cold, inhospitable world.

But winter in Mishkan without money for food was even worse. So Adrien found himself trudging through the snow, in his thickest boots and warmest scarf, but despite all the layers he’d piled on, he was still shivering within the confines of his coat. He’d gotten a woolen cap to try and keep his head warm, and pulled his scarf up to his nose; all that left was a thin strip for him to see through. Even so, his lashes were fringed with frost, and he had to squint and keep his eyes down to avoid being blinded by the snow.

It was horribly quiet -- the kind of quiet that pressed in around him. All the sounds of the forest had first been stolen by the wind, then muffled by the snow. It made him uneasy, cold little fingers prickling up and down his spine.

"I hate this," a small, high voice piped from within the many folds of his scarf. Lucia’s tiny head popped up into his narrowed field of vision, her mouth turned down into a frown even stormier than the wind that had just died down. "Why did you have to take a job in Shyregoed? In the winter? It’s bad enough normally, and so are its people, but I can only imagine how awful it’s going to be this time. If that baker left any tracks, I bet they’re all covered by snow. And you’ll not get any help if everyone’s too busy shivering around their fires."

"Bored, Lucia?" he asked, as polite as could be. "Not that you need an excuse to disparage the good people of Shyregoed -- no, don’t look at me like that, we did get plenty of help looking for Ms. Portman half a year ago, didn’t we?"

"Because they were hoping you’d pay her debts," she answered snippily, before burrowing back down into his scarf. "And bored? Of course I’m bored. Bored, bored, bored! There’s nothing to look at except snow and you, and I think I’ve seen enough of both to last me my whole life! Couldn’t you have taken a job in, I don’t know, Auvinus?"

"I thought Auvinus was too humid for you? We can’t pick our clients, you know. And the pay is quite good." A nice sum up front to cover expenses, and the rest awaiting proof that she’d been found.

"It is humid," she admitted, and he didn’t have to look at her to know she was scowling. "Well! Maybe if you looked harder for jobs and started asking in higher circles, you’d be paid better overall."

"Lucia," he sighed, and she popped back up to jab him between the eyes with one tiny finger.

"Don’t 'Lucia’ me, you know it’s true! You didn’t sleep well because you were worried about the money -- no, I wasn’t awake earlier, I saw that your socks don’t match, and even if you’re dressed for the cold, that’s not a mistake you normally make. And your purse would be empty if you hadn’t taken this job. You’ve got enough searches behind you to start working for people who’re more important -- or more well-funded -- than you have been, don’t you think?"

He opened his mouth to answer, but the wind started to pick up again, and he shut his eyes against it as its cold fingers caught his scarf and pulled. Lucia ducked back down into safety with a little shriek, and he brought one gloved hand up to tuck it closer, to make sure she was safe from the wind.

The sound of her thin voice was just audible over the wind.

"I hate Shyregoed!"

Behind his scarf, Adrien’s mouth curved up.

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