a poem i wrote. tell me what you think

[marieaskelinton]

I know this is going to sound really crazy and weird at the start but you need to read the whole thing.

Blood dripping fro my arms
Red on the floor
A smile from my face
I'll finaly reach my resting place
People walk in my room
My vision goes blurry
Can't see
I open my eyes hours later
Saved... again
My parents cry
My brother asks why
But i dont know why
I just want to die
My life is like a day in Hell
The devil speaks to me
He says I'm no good
I believe him
He told me and stupid
I believe him
He fills my mind
With things i think are true
God spoke and said silly you!
You are beautiful and kind
People need you
Your strong, smart and so much more!
I need you on earth
So I can free you
I believed him more then I did before
Now I'm free
In God's love
I'm a child from the place above

i started writing and didnt stop until it was finished. so what do you think?