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Song of Blue

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 12:10 am


Critiquing Forum

For critiquing, especially written works.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 6:22 pm


First
When I first saw you...
I was afraid to meet you...
when I first met you ...
I was afraid to kiss you...
When I first kissed you...
I was afraid to love you...
But now that i love you...
I'm afraid to lose you...

` J a k e


p a s s i o n n e

PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:14 pm


Cute. heart
I like it, anyways.
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