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 Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:20 pm
Feel free to give constructive criticism =) 
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:34 pm
Better than anything I've seen. Is it anyone in particular?
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 8:19 am
Silver Ace Revolver Better than anything I've seen. Is it anyone in particular? Drawn from a pose book my uncle gave me. Practicing to put into a portfolio. Hopefully school will let me in =P
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:54 am
The third one has crazy narrow wrists, seems too narrow to be realistic.
On the fourth one, the slope of the left breast seems to start in the armpit, and the abdomen doesn't appear to twist properly relatively to the angle of the shoulders compared to the angle of the hips. Could be bad shading, bad lines, or bad judgement, can't tell.
On the fifth one, the back has a strange concave curve. It looks like it's supposed to be at waist level, but it's too high up, maybe?
On the sixth, the left arm appears too narrow compared to the right arm, and the right shoulder seems to be broader than the left shoulder.
On the seventh, the right thumb seems to be displaced.
On the eighth, I think somethings up with that rib line? I can't tell.
Was the pose book illustrations or photos? Certain things seem to be recurring, like arms and wrists being weird. It could be carried over from the original illustrator.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:43 am
Storm Aether Was the pose book illustrations or photos? Certain things seem to be recurring, like arms and wrists being weird. It could be carried over from the original illustrator. Drawn from photos, all from the same pose book.
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