Welcome to Gaia! ::

All Writers United

Back to Guilds

A place for any and all writers to share their brilliance. 

Tags: writing, literature, fantasy, horror, roleplay 

Reply Fantasy
Demi God Hidden Within (Not done)

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Zelden Rizmara

Enduring Winner

5,200 Points
  • Marathon 300
  • First step to fame 200
  • Forum Sophomore 300
PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 8:08 am


Demi God Hidden Within

User Image


Author: Zelden Riz
Info: A six year old child and his father hikes through an empty plain on an Island until they crashed into the ocean far oof the coast of peir. Survived and but injured they swim to an island that changes there lives. Torture, Fear, Chao’s, and intense drama as they try to survive the mugging…

Personal thoughts: First actual story dealing with by action/ Drama. An Adventure I hope will keep you on your feet.

Idea's:
Its sure to have an Explossive impact:
PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:45 pm


First Chapter: Journey

[Tic-Toc-Tic-Toc] Its 3:00am and the Magnolia street in California, is silent along with the rest of the neighborhood. A family of three stays in the biggest house in the neighborhood which is why most people despise them as locals. Yes, there personalities were being selfish, Liars, and unkind,

“That’s the price you get for being rich [Tap] and enter.” Pressing the enter key on the key board,

“Ah. Finally done with this novel, took long enough.”

Saying as he leans back into his chair in his office in his home. He glances back at the computer then looks at the ceiling above, excited about the trip to Hawaii him and his family was going on, at the moment he had a mixture of excitement but tired.

“Damn its 3:06am already? [Tap!]” Saying after looking at his watch while stretching but once he careless regain himself, his wrist hit the key board hitting [END], deleting all of his work instantly. His eyes watering slightly from being up so late this pushed the frustration back for a moment.

“F***!” A scream that woke everyone home up with a frightened suspicion. Everyone came running out of there rooms, leading the bunch was the mother in her bright pink robe and house shoes concerned. Behind her was her 3 year old little girl, Sarah, and twelve year old son Baxter. Both in there pajamas.

“F***!! Sh*t” the father releasing a storm of curse words carelessly as always. “John?”

His wife speaks out toward him as she made her way to him with curiosity. Once she turned the corner in the doorway to his work area and sees there was nothing she still calmed but still asks,

“You woke me and the kids up.” John brushes pass her…


((Will expand sasp))

Zelden Rizmara

Enduring Winner

5,200 Points
  • Marathon 300
  • First step to fame 200
  • Forum Sophomore 300
Reply
Fantasy

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum