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MagicalXEmoXNinja

PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 1:03 pm


these are some of the poems i have written i hope u like them.
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smile big for everone
even though u know what they done
they gave you the end
but not the start
not how to build but how to tear it apart
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i try to be happy i really do
but everything i do reminds me of you
so today i will try expecially hard
to forget about the girl who ripped up my heart
i want to say sorryi really do
but no words come out not even when i try to shout
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today is that day
that time of year
back to school
for a new term
see all those faces
the ones i have hated
ill try to fit in
but i know i carnt

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thanks for reading
PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:20 pm


cheeselover555


i try to be happy i really do
but everything i do reminds me of you
so today i will try expecially hard
to forget about the girl who ripped up my heart
i want to say sorryi really do
but no words come out not even when i try to shout
___________________________________________________________________

thanks for reading


This one reminds me of my first crush, which was desperate and one-sided. Hope you find love somewhere.

Song of Blue


YoukoPeam
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 2:55 pm


I like the first one the best..Because at some points in life i think its true...and the last one is How i feel every new term i go to school because of the fact that someone (usually me) has that happen. I mean it happens to everyone at one point but there will be someone that tries to fit in but will fail because no one accepts people that are different in this world.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:16 pm


thanxs for that everyone

much thanked biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin

MagicalXEmoXNinja


MagicalXEmoXNinja

PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:21 pm


this is another poem i write 2day

_________________________________________________________________

i walk these rooms
i walk these halls
i walk this house
i walk ,walk,walk
i open these doors
i open these windows

i am searching
searching for that
special something
that special someone

but i carnt find it and
NEVER
will
_________________________________________________________________

this poem sucks really bad rolleyes
PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:30 pm


okay here goes another 1 i will make this 1 up off the top of my head

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It's alright to tell me what you think about me
I won't try to argue or hold it against you
I know that you're leaving, you must have your reasons
The season is calling your pictures are falling down

The steps that I retraced the sad look on your face
The timing and structure, did you hear, he ******** her
A day late a buck short I'm writing the report
On losing and failing when I move I'm flailing now

And it's happened once again, I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands, sees through the master plan
But everybody's gone and I've been here for too long
To face this on my own, well I guess this is growing up

And maybe I'll see you at a movie, sneak preview
You show up and walk by on the arm of that guy
And I'll smile and you'll wave
We'll pretend it's okay
The charade, it won't last
When he's gone, I won't come back

Well, I guess this is growing up

__________________________________________________________________

long peom well hope ya all like it
mrgreen peace mrgreen

MagicalXEmoXNinja


MagicalXEmoXNinja

PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 12:44 pm


well does anyone have any feed back?
PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 1:45 pm


cheeselover555
okay here goes another 1 i will make this 1 up off the top of my head

__________________________________________________________________

It's alright to tell me what you think about me
I won't try to argue or hold it against you
I know that you're leaving, you must have your reasons
The season is calling your pictures are falling down

The steps that I retraced the sad look on your face
The timing and structure, did you hear, he ******** her
A day late a buck short I'm writing the report
On losing and failing when I move I'm flailing now

And it's happened once again, I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands, sees through the master plan
But everybody's gone and I've been here for too long
To face this on my own, well I guess this is growing up

And maybe I'll see you at a movie, sneak preview
You show up and walk by on the arm of that guy
And I'll smile and you'll wave
We'll pretend it's okay
The charade, it won't last
When he's gone, I won't come back

Well, I guess this is growing up

__________________________________________________________________

long peom well hope ya all like it
mrgreen peace mrgreen


Not bad!

Song of Blue


MagicalXEmoXNinja

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 1:35 pm


dramaartwriting
cheeselover555
okay here goes another 1 i will make this 1 up off the top of my head

__________________________________________________________________

It's alright to tell me what you think about me
I won't try to argue or hold it against you
I know that you're leaving, you must have your reasons
The season is calling your pictures are falling down

The steps that I retraced the sad look on your face
The timing and structure, did you hear, he ******** her
A day late a buck short I'm writing the report
On losing and failing when I move I'm flailing now

And it's happened once again, I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands, sees through the master plan
But everybody's gone and I've been here for too long
To face this on my own, well I guess this is growing up

And maybe I'll see you at a movie, sneak preview
You show up and walk by on the arm of that guy
And I'll smile and you'll wave
We'll pretend it's okay
The charade, it won't last
When he's gone, I won't come back

Well, I guess this is growing up

__________________________________________________________________

long peom well hope ya all like it
mrgreen peace mrgreen


Not bad!


thanx
PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 1:41 pm


heres another
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ill look at you
you will turn away
i will chase you
you will run away
i will love you
you will hate me
i will die for you
but you would kill me

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very short i dont know if i am writing about a girl in perticular but i need advice this this girl i am VERY good friends with well i really like her we joke we laugh but she dosent like people like me. I dont know what to say do i keep it in and bottle it up? shall i tell? i just dont know anymore
advice plz somone

MagicalXEmoXNinja


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 7:55 am


Nice poems
PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 10:27 pm


cheeselover555
this is another poem i write 2day

_________________________________________________________________

i walk these rooms
i walk these halls
i walk this house
i walk ,walk,walk
i open these doors
i open these windows

i am searching
searching for that
special something
that special someone

but i carnt find it and
NEVER
will
_________________________________________________________________

this poem sucks really bad rolleyes


I think it's good! It descibes what we all feel, wanting that one person to make us complete

evil_twin_1975
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