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Satin Doilee

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2012 10:21 pm


ESSENTIALS

  • Name: Maike Fuchs [MIE-kə Fyuks]
  • Nickname: N/A
  • Age: 8
  • Social Class: Artisan
  • Occupation: Exploring, Gathering, Keeping out from underfoot – Her parents work as Furriers


APPEARANCE

On a typical, cold and snowy morning nearly eight years ago, the Artisan couple Sieglinde and Anselm found a curious bundle carefully situated on their doorstep. Beneath the layers of rich, soft furs, swaddled in swaths of expensively colored fabrics, was an infant child. She did not cry, staring up at the adults with a quiet curiosity, the fair skin of her face rosy with cold. The baby had eyes a shade of blue the likes of which the couple had never quite seen, with flecks of gold and green to resemble a deep and distant sea, much different than the blue-white ice which they knew so well.

The girl was eerie, in a way, her inquiring eyes seeming to hold much more wisdom than her lack of years could possibly hold. Yet, the couple felt nothing short of blessed; the woman, Sieglinde, was barren, and the two had been wishing for a child for years. But why would someone have given away their child, without leaving so much as a note? The baby clearly came from wealthy parentage, where affording her care wouldn’t have been an issue. They thought, perhaps, there was something wrong with her… in the way she stared, the way she didn’t cry or fuss.

As the girl grew older, it became clearer. In as full of color as her eyes were, the child’s hair was lacking. Full, lustrous, holding a slight, natural wave, and completely white, whiter, perhaps, than the snow that they saw every day. Maybe she was one of those anomalies… those creatures who had come into contact with the evil spirits of the forest. They would take the risk. And so, the couple called the child “Maike,” a name whose oldest roots meant something akin to “wished for child,” and took her in to love her and raise her well.

Eight years later, those eyes are just as bright and that hair is just as devoid of color. Maike has grown a lot in the past few months, and now stands at 3’5”. Weighing in at a mere 57lbs, she looks like quite the delicate, gangly little thing, all signs of baby chub lost to her new, more elongated limbs. As a result, she doesn’t have the best coordination at this point in time, and can often be found tripping over herself.

As her father, Anselm, is a furrier, Maike has never wanted for warmth. Although they do not get to keep the richest or most expensive pieces, the girl can most commonly be seen sporting a long, white coat of Audenhair. She is also rarely seen without a pair of fur-lined mittens, to cover the strange scars that became more and more visible on her hands as she grew.

PERSONALITY

As an eight year old, Maike switches frequently from being brazenly self-confident, to almost self-deprecating in her uncertainty. This is a point in her life of great self-discovery! Yet, in a world that truly depends on survival of the fittest, she has to grow up fast, and learn everything she can as quickly as possible. Thankfully, Maike is an intelligent girl who observes things with a keen eye and a quick brain. Her curiosity runs in great abundance, but she’s not always completely confident in her analyses of things, and often relies on the wisdom and knowledge of those older than her, especially her parents.

The girl is not needed too much around the shop, especially now, when her clumsy lack of limb-control often means she’s more of a burden than a help, even when she’s really trying! Thus, Maike spends most of her time exploring the city, hunting for mushrooms and other fungi near the entrances of the caves, or sitting just outside the edge of the forest. She is a brave girl who finds the mystery surrounding the city to be more interesting than frightening. Of course, she still wouldn’t dare actually enter the forest, lest some evil monster come and gobble her right up… not yet anyway.

On these lonely excursions, Maike passes the time contemplating the stories she has heard, and devising more of her own. Stories are a thing which Maike adores. Her mother came from a theatre family and, although Anselm saved her from a life of performance, Sieglinde knows many stories, and loves to share them, especially with her eager daughter. Maike occasionally performs these stories for the city’s residents, but more often, the tales are told to an imagined audience. As it were, it would seem that people don’t quite know what to do with the bright and vibrant child.

For the most part, the city people accept her, as she is gentle and eager to assist, but many residents of Llywdbeinn are also wary of the girl, especially those who know the immense amount of mystery surrounding her birth. They often try to avoid the child, who some believe may very well have evil spirits lurking around her, and they do their best to keep their own children away too.

As it were, Maike is not the least bit magical, and although she can be the biggest, bossiest, most stubborn little brat in the world, she would like to think that she is not controlled by too much evil. Because of these reactions, it was not until very recently that Maike began to accept her appearance.

One evening, the girl’s father found her outside, wet and shivering, her beautiful, snowy hair matted with clumps of half-frozen soil, with which she had been attempting to turn her hair brown. It was on that day that Anselm showed her the Audenhair, whose fur matched her own colorless locks, and who Maike thought to be the most beautiful thing in the world. Her parents told her that she was beautiful. They said that she was unique, not a monstrosity. It is for that reason that she wears the Audenhair furs so frequently. Perhaps ironically, especially living in a world where animals, including Audenhair, are killed on a daily basis, and food can be scarce, it was also for that reason that Maike now possesses a sweet, small companion.

One especially clumsy, destructive day, the little girl boldly snatched a discarded scrap of animal skin from her father’s workbench and headed to her place at the edge of the forest. Determined to be of some use to her parents, she found a stone, loaded it into her makeshift slingshot, and waited for a critter to come by. Eventually, one did, a young, snowy Audenhair whose subtle movements the child’s keen eyes quickly caught. However, Maike had never used a slingshot before in her life. In fact, she only knew what their purpose was by subtly observing the hunters as they made their way into the forest. Thus, it was only by chance that the small rock ricocheted off of the frozen earth and struck the small animal in the leg.

At that moment, Maike’s empathetic nature took over. The creature was nowhere near death, merely stunned, his leg slightly bloodied, but the girl scooped it up and hurried home, crying and crying and apologizing over and over to the poor, innocent creature that she had injured. Her parents were dumbfounded at the child’s requests to not only heal the creature, but to keep it as a pet; Maike now believed strongly that it was her duty to protect the innocent animal. Because of her, the Audenhair would forever walk with a tiny limp; surely it would never be able to survive on its own in the wild! Her parents hesitantly agreed, just so long as they didn’t have to worry about feeding the critter. Fortunately, the Audenhair, whom Maike named “Leutwin,” is just as brave as his owner, and, despite his limp, is quite adept at foraging for himself.

Being so empathetic, Maike distresses over the effect she has on people, who sometimes go so far as to lock doors when they see her passing by. Thus, she tends to observe them from afar, spending most of her time with only Leutwin as company. With her Audenhair friend, she is content to learn through watching, although she dreams deeply of one day being able to perform her stories, and to have them be enjoyed by every person in all of Llywdbeinn.

ABILITIES

As it stands now, Maike doesn’t do well in most physical situations. Still getting control over her newly minted arms and legs means a lot of clumsiness a lot of the time. However, there’s an undercurrent of grace to the way she moves. She’s swift, and when she stops falling over her own feet, will probably be an excellent runner.

Mentally, she’s keen and observant. Maike is intelligent, capable of assessing situations at a level probably a bit beyond her years. Yet, she isn’t entirely confident in herself all the time, and often turns to her parents for the truth, or at least something to reaffirm her own suspicions. This lack of self-confidence comes, in part, from the fact that she is not completely accepted by everyone around her, although it is a characteristic that she is slowly coming to terms with.

With her parents, Maike is quite pleasant and charming. However, she tends to stay to herself most of the time, not wanting to make those who are wary of her uncomfortable. She wishes for social interactions beyond the relationship that she has with Leutwin, but for now is content with merely observing those around her.

HOBBIES

Maike spends most of her time playing with or caring for Leutwin, and trying to find ways in which to be helpful to her parents. She often hunts for common fungi to add to their evening meals, or heads to the edge of the forest with her makeshift sling (although she hasn’t actually used it since the incident with Leutwin). She enjoys making up stories and acting them out (often with Leutwin’s help) to an imagined audience and people watching.
PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2012 7:28 pm


In consideration of world setting, there are several things that won’t fit I’m afraid.

- Clearly the daughter of a rich family, but expressing some of the ‘begrudgingly accepted’ traits that a handful of people poses, left on the steps of a middle class family. – Likely they would have raised her themselves. The births and lives would be recorded particularly for any kind of noble. Hers at best would have been lower rank nobles such as Zachariah Bantok, which would have provided her with access to a family trade. Her hair is not sufficient reason to lay her at the feet of strangers who would not likely take her in, being as she does express those traits and she is not family.

- Even if she were adopted by this family, being that she expresses unusual traits as distinct as white hair, they would not call her a wished for child, no matter how endearing her personality. It is a troublesome trait and one to be feared on a deeply superstitious level.

- Even if she were a member of the furrier family, which would remove the abandoned issue, even at her age she would be given small tasks in the home. She may be a child but there would be things she could handle even at an early age including cleaning the shop, stirring already mixed dyes and particularly learning how to sew scraps of fur that she might one day take on the trade.

To put it bluntly, she would be put to work. An awkward age would not be any kind of excuse to run about.

- No parent in possession of his or her senses would allow a child to go out on its own, to the forest. Even at her age she would have long since been told of the grave dangers of the forest, hunting on her own, for lichen or audenheir would be as though she skipped with a picnic basket into a 6 lane highway of Mack trucks driven by rabid grizzly bears. Simply speaking, something would kill her and eat her, even the edges of the forest are not safe.

- For pets, only nobles would even consider trying to tame a wild forest animal which might be ‘spirit ridden’ as a pet, even if she already expressed signs of being Touched it’s a dangerous proposition, never mind the fact it’s of greater value as a pelt. It not being a modern society it would likely have been mixed into a stew and a pair of mittens.

You may instead wish to:

- Make her older, should you ever earn her as a character we have no templates that would fit her age, and it would also give her greater liberty to move of her own accord. I personally feel it would better fit the observational skills you describe for her.

- Keep her as part of the family of ‘furriers’; perhaps even consider making them pigment makers, as they would otherwise likely purchase the pigments for leathers at market so they could focus on the primary demand for their services. Regardless I would flag her as apprentice artisan.

- Find a domestic pet, give her a wulfkind pup, it will be loyal and able to follow her a great many places, its fur could be soft and white and that would be in no way unusual for such an animal, it would also be unlikely to be anyone’s dinner.

- Consider that the majority and likely the most desirable of lichens would come from the caves. There they would be rich and plentiful, cultivated there by farmers to be brought to market as food, dye and a great variety of other uses. The caves are far from being without hazard but it would also be more likely that a child would be brought with them by her parents to learn gathering ways if her family were in fact farmers.

- Also consider that you may be able to work with other players learning as their apprentices, in which case she would be old enough to take on assigned tasks. Not only things to instruct her towards the trade she was apprenticed to, but likely also, if she were apprenticed she would be assigned duties like cleaning the house. As said above, she would be put to very specific tasks, all of which would have someone with her or leave her somewhere that she would be easily observed.

We're willing to work with you on this because it is a complex and very medieval setting!

endejester
Vice Captain

Feral Cat


Satin Doilee

PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2012 8:14 pm


/sigh/ Sounds like I just need to come up with a completely different character. xD
That's okay. All your crits make sense~ I'll think of someone new.
In fact, if it would be easier to delete this thread, please feel free to. I don't think a simple revision will work, so whoever pops up next will be a completely different character anyway. ^^


Maike will probably turn into a short story now... I just lovehertoomuch x3
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