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Could I trouble you for some feedback...

Classy Dame

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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 10:48 am

Hi everyone, I was wondering if I could get some feedback about my avatar?
Thank you in advance!

Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 12:25 pm

I like how you worked the gold in, and the maroon (or maybe puce?) red-tint in the shoes and such compliments the off-white or beige garments. I like the skimpyness, but it feels just a tad too bare. But the knocking knees make it seem intentional.
I like it.
9/10

pintachu

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Rosilien

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Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 12:45 pm

Her face may be a teeny bit too pale, and the cincher seems budgeted compared to the rest. Otherwise, it's a gorgeous avi!

Posted: Fri May 25, 2012 12:49 pm

She looks a bit to bare you might think of wings or a background o help with her proportions.

AislingJuno

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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 10:38 pm

Looks 50's to me if that was what you were aiming for and if you can afford it id suggest a better cincher and maybe get rid of the sleeves and put something else?