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What is this to you?
A cry for help?
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a richie gril making it up?
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a really messed up girl?
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Krellxxt

PostPosted: Mon Feb 21, 2005 8:02 pm


I found this poem and was blown away by it... let me know what you think)

I cry for the lose of my brother.
My morther's dead.... My sisters sliceing away her own skin.
Tears that flow over my cheeks, tears that seal away my happiness
Love doesn't light his hollow heart anymore.


My boyfriend beat and cheated on this heart
his frist brused and sliced this skin
my tears flow for the love i still have for him
Love holds me to this beaten life.

My farther raped and used this body
His hands have ran over this body
My tears flow went he comes in my room late
Love ripped from this heart like he riped away this shrit

No one will understand this pain
Their minds are clear without care for me
My tears flow... someone has it wrost then me right?
Love is everything and nothing to me....
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:36 am


krellxxt
I found this poem and was blown away by it... let me know what you think)

I cry for the lose of my brother.
My morther's dead.... My sisters sliceing away her own skin.
Tears that flow over my cheeks, tears that seal away my happiness
Love doesn't light his hollow heart anymore.


My boyfriend beat and cheated on this heart
his frist brused and sliced this skin
my tears flow for the love i still have for him
Love holds me to this beaten life.

My farther raped and used this body
His hands have ran over this body
My tears flow went he comes in my room late
Love ripped from this heart like he riped away this shrit

No one will understand this pain
Their minds are clear without care for me
My tears flow... someone has it wrost then me right?
Love is everything and nothing to me....

That's creepy.

Merenwen99
Crew


Krellxxt

PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:38 am


YES! This person, Kakoy, is one of my lil writing buddies... we live near each other, and write together... but WOW this is deep and painful...
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:46 am


Wow. Is it true? That's really quite scary.

Merenwen99
Crew


Krellxxt

PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:49 am


well i know she lives with her dad... and she is only happy, well it seems like, she is only happy around me... I don't know why...

She isn't that outhere to be able to make somthing like this up... I hope atleast..
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:56 am


Gosh.

Merenwen99
Crew

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