This is an amazing upcoming new fantasy writer that would love feed back and constructive criticism.
This is a link to the first couple chapters: http://www.wattpad.com/story/5459364-seeds-of-desolation

And a link to the facebook page that has character bios and extra juicy bits: https://www.facebook.com/SeedsOfDesolation

Please and thank you. Reads, comments, votes, and likes are all appreciated blaugh