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Daily Challenge -"Who am I" #1 (Deadline : Saturday 1/25/14)

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:10 pm


Who am I #1 - Charlotte
Basic Description - brown hair, brown eyes, about 5' 5", blue dress

Your challenge is to write a short passage describing Charlotte however you would like. It can be in any perspective and style.


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I will try to post a prompt of some kind each day and each one will continue until midnight one week later. I look forward to seeing what everyone comes up with. smile
PostPosted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:30 pm


She came by every day. Each time, my heart always skipped a beat when her shining brown eyes met mine. Her brown hair was braided into a crown which wound around her head, small wisps of that feathery hair escaping and creating a lovely halo effect. My eyes widened when she sent me a small smile; I hadn't realized that I had been staring and quickly averted my gaze. She probably thought I was creepy now. Good job, dude.

As I sipped my black coffee, I couldn't help but glance around the small cafe. She was at the register now, paying for her drink. The cashier asked her name for the order and she breathed it out as she always did.

"Charlotte."

I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. I really needed to work up the courage to talk to her. She never failed to look put together and fashionable. Today, for example, she was wearing a blue dress. But it wasn't just any blue dress; oh no. Not for Charlotte. It was mid-thigh in length with a square neckline and little cap sleeves. A darker blue ribbon encircled with area under her bust line (I felt myself blush at the thought) and below it a lace overlay of the same color made the dress look elegant and youthful at the same time.

I opened my eyes and nearly dropped my cup when I saw the object of my thoughts directly in front of me. I tightened my grip on the cup and tried to smile at her, my nerves acting up and making me blush in embarrassment.

"Hi. Is anyone sitting here?" Her voice was light and filled with an amusement at what I hoped wasn't my lack of coordination.

"No. No, go right ahead and take a seat, " I said, my own voice coming out hoarse and shaky. She gave me a small smile and placed her drink down on the table before pulling out the chair and sitting. Her five foot and some inches sank into the chair gracefully. Oh dear god; I was so going to screw this up.

"So...Come here often?" Charlotte's brown eyes twinkled in mirth as she laughed knowing, as well as I did, that I had noticed her.

...Maybe I had a chance after all.  

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 9:03 pm


luffylover
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Very nice! It made me smile and painted a delightful picture. My favorite phrase was "brown eyes twinkled in mirth". smile Good luck and thanks for participating!
PostPosted: Mon Jan 20, 2014 1:03 am


School was always boring. I hated it. My feelings dulled and nothing interested me.
Until the day I met Charlotte, that is.
Charlotte was a quirky girl, with a crooked grin outlined in strawberry-flavored lip gloss. Her hair fell around her shoulders like a waterfall of chocolate, with a gentle curl at the tips. She was perky, giggly, goofy - but best of all, she was my best friend.
Every Friday after school we would go straight to the park to watch the ducks and just talk. About school, about our families, about life... sometimes, we wouldn't talk at all. We would just sit together and watch the ducks.
After a while, I asked her out. Our first date was at that very park.
She was wearing a dress. A beautiful, blue dress that could have made the sky itself envious of its pure color. A brown ribbon wrapped around her waist and pearls adorned around her neck, she was a sight to behold. I complimented her dress, and saw her brown eyes glitter at the flattery. For every date after that, she wore that dress - and when she grew out of it, she got a new one and wore that. I never questioned it, because it seemed to make her happy. It always seemed to make her happy...
And that is why your mother will be buried in that dress. Because she was always her prettiest when she was her happiest.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 20, 2014 8:18 pm


- The Grim Reality -

Nice details biggrin It's really the little things that make a character come to life in my opinion! I love the way you ended it on a bittersweet note. Thank you for participating and good luck. smile
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