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 Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:49 pm
Yes... here you will find a selection of some of my stories, short, long, or poetic. I work any kind of topic, scary, funny, serious, etc. So for our first story I present you with "Serial Killer" a story I wrote last year.
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:51 pm
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Shore_Angel_Rebirth Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:24 am
I really liked your story but here's a couple suggestions. Code Red is universal for fire to my knowledge. I looked it up and homicide is 187. Also you might not want to refer to the distinguishing aspects of a serial murder's crime scene as symptoms. That's generally a medical term used to break down the parts of a disese. Other than those 2 I really enjoyed your story and I look forward to the next 4laugh Here's some links you might find useful:
Police codes
http://www.cobras.org/police.htm
Might be interesting
http://www.crimelibrary.com/
If you run out of synonyms
http://thesaurus.reference.com/
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 1:29 pm
stare Well, yeah but I mean... I'm thirteen... stare
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 5:52 pm
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