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 Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 1:36 pm
Just in the mood for writing poems...Idk...
Anyone else wanna join me?
I'll write up my poem soon~
Everyone's an artist.
If you can rhyme and express how you feel you can write a poem xD
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 2:02 pm
Lovey are flowers but not one is like you.
A beautiful flame, which burns down the meadow.
You are death, that which is ugly and true.
The poison in my veins, the pus that is yellow.
Slow and painful, a pain much worst than being shot.
You are corruption, that which twisted my heart
And left it to die and suffer as my mind begins to rot.
But that beauty within you is the only lovey part,
Beauty, hiding until someone comes to tame you.
Once you found what I lost, then truly my hope died.
And still within my mind or heart I still start to rue.
Dying as others before me once more i have cried.
Yes, a flame that I once was fed to had burned me.
As my ashes are taken my mind still won't be free
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 9:59 pm
✻ ✻ c e l t i c h e a v e n s : :
Darkness looms even
beyond the horizon
A thousand screams muffled by
The unrelentless rain
The tears of heavens intertwined
with the blood of the fallen
in a morbid creation
Of unfortunate reality
Yea, I don't really like rhyming my poems rofl Even if I did, I wouldn't be able to write as eloquently as you! OTL
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:03 pm
Everyone can write poems, I liked yours! Shakespearean poems are my favorite, that's why I write poems like that.
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:06 pm
PairsOsocks Everyone can write poems, I liked yours! Shakespearean poems are my favorite, that's why I write poems like that.
Thank you ;^;
I used to love his works like a maniac during my teenage years xD
Any particular one(s) you like? biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:09 pm
Sonnet 130~ My Mistress' eyes (i think that's what it's called)
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:12 pm
PairsOsocks Sonnet 130~ My Mistress' eyes (i think that's what it's called)
Very nice pick! I love that one too! There's an odd beauty in his non-traditional descriptives that makes that sonnet linger after reading~
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:18 pm
Indeed~ I just love how he always turns around the entire meaning of the poem by those last two ironic couplets.
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:26 pm
PairsOsocks Indeed~ I just love how he always turns around the entire meaning of the poem by those last two ironic couplets.
Exactly!
Are you as big a fan of his stories/plays?
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:29 pm
celticheavens PairsOsocks Indeed~ I just love how he always turns around the entire meaning of the poem by those last two ironic couplets.
Exactly!
Are you as big a fan of his stories/plays?
I'm interested in his plays but I really will have to admit. I don't like Romeo and Juliet I should read his other plays...
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:34 pm
PairsOsocks I'm interested in his plays but I really will have to admit. I don't like Romeo and Juliet I should read his other plays...
Not a fan either. But then, I'm never a fan of anything with a romantic theme /shrugs.
Perhaps try the Twelfth Night, Merchant of Venice and Macbeth?
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:38 pm
I might read Macbeth. I want to actually... Just never got time to read it
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:42 pm
PairsOsocks I might read Macbeth. I want to actually... Just never got time to read it
That's my favourite of his works, so please give it a try!
And after you do, let me know what you think!
It shouldn't take too long to get past it, especially if you're familiar with his language biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:45 pm
Will do! In the mean time explore more of the guild
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:48 pm
PairsOsocks Will do! In the mean time explore more of the guild
Will do 3nodding
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