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 Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 11:36 pm
So this thread is for my on-progress visual novel entitles Raven. The name will be changed if I can.
Story Plot:
Watching from his cage, he could see how his master, Mica suffers from the treatment she's getting from her boyfriend, Jonas. Despite all this, Mica still loves her boyfriend even though she's being treated badly by the jerk. And so, Raven, Mica's pet bird, couldn't take it anymore. Raven longs to be with Mica. To give the thing that jerky Jonas couldn't give to Mica: love.
And then one day, Raven felt dizzy. After blacking out, he sees his cage destroyed beside him. Things around him became a little bit smaller than usual. And when he looked into the mirror, he is now a human being!
How can he live as a human when he doesn't even know where to start?
Player will play as Raven. The goal is to win Mica's heart and to tell the truth that her pet bird is standing before her, as a human being, without making Mica think that he's crazy!
I hope it's not too boring. I am having troubles on deciding the endings. How can Raven make Mica his? Also trouble with the art. No tablet and stylus. I only use mouse. I'll be posting some images later on.
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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2015 3:50 am
 So this is Mica from the story. I have Raven's outline, will work on that tomorrow, maybe?
This Mica here, has less details. Compared to the next picture. I am glad I'm improving, even a little!! heart This other Mica has some shades added on her!! I will also draw Mica in different poses, like all other visual novel does. So there!
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2015 7:18 am
 This is Raven! And his clothes are wet! Because there's this menu option wherein player will be asked whether Raven wants to "Look like a Human" or "Eat like a human."
If player chooses "Look like a human", he'll search for male clothes, and birdbrain he is, he saw some clothes hanging on a clothesline past the neighborhood! So he crosses the street ( naked) to have those clothes!! But the clothes were still wet, that's why! biggrin
Silly, right? But what do you expect from a birdbrain? lol
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2015 8:24 am
After sometime, I decide to change my "sprite" for Mica.  A much better sprite than the first one! I'm glad I've successfully finished this with just using mouse! Proud!
For the updates, here's what I accomplished:
-Story Plan and script is fully finished! (But needs some proofreading to be sure.)
-Set one of Mica's sprite fully done! (Set 2 and 3 will come later)
-Sketches of Jonas' sprite are done. (Just the sketch)
-Sketches of 6 CGs are done (Still just the sketch)
There is improvement but it's taking me real slow since there's no drawing tablet to be used. And that's it for now!
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2015 9:31 pm
An update! 3-8-2015
Mica's sprite all done from Pose 1 to Pose 3! Not gonna upload picture because Internet's too slow. Now on to Jonas' sprite!!!
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2015 2:44 pm
aaah that sounds like the coolest story!! i really wanna see Raven's interactions with Jonah surprised
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2015 4:30 pm
wendybirdx aaah that sounds like the coolest story!! i really wanna see Raven's interactions with Jonah surprised
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2015 5:10 pm
Fake Existence Well, this was my very first attempt as a one-man team so it's not that pretty redface But there's a lot of rooms for improvement. I hope... xd Wait really??? Oh wow that's so cool!! And when you say this was your first attempt you don't mean you're not releasing it, right? xD
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2015 5:23 pm
wendybirdx Fake Existence Well, this was my very first attempt as a one-man team so it's not that pretty redface But there's a lot of rooms for improvement. I hope... xd Wait really??? Oh wow that's so cool!! And when you say this was your first attempt you don't mean you're not releasing it, right? xD
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