This is my first real time doing a Military RP, so please critique this like you would a newbie to RPing. Since I am basically a newbie to this type of RPing.


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Army
- You are a leader of a four-man squad on patrol in a mountainous region. As you make your rounds, you come across an enemy encampment close to a known Crokian research facility. At this point, your objective is to report back to your superiors what you found. However, you may play this out how you like. If you choose to engage your enemy, roleplay the combat scenario as best as you can.


Sergeant Nathanial Holtz
Mjolnir, Odin Company, Foxtrot Squad Leader
Mountainous Region
Patrolling
1000



"HQ-Actual to Mjolnir 6-1, Mjolnir 1 has reported in WMD’s at a Croakian Research Facility, find a good angle and check it out, over." Standing up from his crouching position, Nathanial looked back at his three squad-mates before motioning calmly for them to fall in. Twirling his index finger in a circle whilst pointing upwards his squad mates fell in behind him, waiting for his next command. With the orders given from HQ-Actual to find a better position the male cut his hand downwards, towards a slightly lower portion of the Mountain they were currently sitting on.