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 Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2015 5:30 pm
❝ ＦＩＲＳＴ ＧＬＡＮＣＥ ❞ Characters Name: ambrosine
Race: grimm
Zodiac Sign: the crown
Academy House: enoch
Gender: female
Starting Stage: freshling
Body Type Base: freshling: B, ears 3
Brief Description of Appearance: smoky-colored long-limbed baby too clumsy for her own good, trips over her long legs and her tail 90% of the time. dark glow-y eyes and seemingly extra fluffyFirst Glance | Life History | Personality | RP Prompt | Appearance
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Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2015 5:31 pm
❝ ＬＩＦＥ ＨＩＳＴＯＲＹ ❞ Little Rosi has led a very social life as a Freshling, keeping very busy and active both inside and outside of school. Her bubbly personality and strong drive to be helpful and make friends has proven very beneficial while connecting with others. She was an orphan from the Cache, and while she does recognize that there are very few members of her race running about the academy, she substitutes her classmates for her family and is happy with that at the moment. She does feel kind of lost about being a Grimm because very little is known about how her ancestors lived, her instincts as her only guide. Rosi also feels a bit of a disconnect with the other races, because no matter how many friends she has in her improvised 'pack', she doesn't know if she'll ever have a real Grimm pack to call her own. The little Grimm was always fond of playing with her plushies, her favorite game being 'play nurse', attending to their stomach aches, bumps and bruises in her secret little green corner of the Academy. She is drawn to nature and medicine, and hopes to scrape up some insightful information about her race while studying in Enoch, as well as further her involvement in medicine. Rosi will take a particularly life-changing gardening glass as a Freshling, which combined with her love of taking care of others and playing nursing games with her plushies leads to her pursuing an education more geared towards holistic medicine and medicinal practices as a Junior.
As she gets older, meeting and interacting with more Grimm will lessen Rosi's yearnings for a pack. She will realize as a Junior that she cares about finding love and wants to have children and a family of her own. As a Senior, she will pursue several business classes as well as her medicinal-geared curriculum in order to have the right tools to set up her own holistic medicine/herb shop. First Glance | Life History | Personality | RP Prompt | Appearance
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Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2015 5:32 pm
❝ ＰＥＲＳＯＮＡＬＩＴＹ ❞ ●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●Positive Traits●●●●●●●●●● ✎ helpful | rosi is an inherent giver. she is always there for someone in need, whether it be for emotional support, physical help, or just someone to listen. rosi loves to be active, and believes that there is always something to help out with. ●●●●●●●●●● ✎ all-inclusive | rosi loves company. she can pick out a solitary person from a crowd and has no problem brightening up their day. she takes her aversion to being alone and projects it on everyone else, so she tries to be as welcoming and inclusive as she can. it doesnt matter what race or gender you are, everyone is a friend in rosi's mind.●●●●●●●●●● ✎ extroverted | rosi is anything but shy. she will try to make friends with just about anything, if they want a new friend or not. her first two traits pool into her extroverted trait, fueling her bright and bubbly aura that attracts so many. rosi loves to be active and around others, which perfectly suits her extroverted trait.●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●Negative Traits●●●●●●●●●● ✂ self-denying | on the more negative side of her helpful trait, rosi will expend most of her energy putting other people first, which can be detrimental to herself sometimes.●●●●●●●●●● ✂ codependent | because rosi puts so much energy into being around and helping others, she relies on others to make her happy. when there is no one to socialize with or help out, this pools into her loneliness trait.●●●●●●●●●● ✂ gets lonely easily | because rosi can't always surround herself with friends, when she is by herself she becomes quite lonely. this combined with her codependent trait drives rosi to make a constant effort to be around others.●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●Likes●●●●●●●●●● ♪ | being around others●●●●●●●●●● ♪ | helping people●●●●●●●●●● ♪ | hot sweet drinks●●●●●●●●●● ♪ | nature & forests●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●Dislikes●●●●●●●●●● ⚔ | rejection●●●●●●●●●● ⚔ | uncertainty●●●●●●●●●● ⚔ | being idle●●●●●●●●●● ⚔ | bright lights/loud sounds●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●Hobbies and Abilities●●●●●●●●●● ✉ | climbing trees | rosi's combined love of nature and high places lends itself to her love of climbing trees. she is quite nimble, and can scale a tree in a matter of minutes!●●●●●●●●●● ✉ | gardening | something that developed as a Freshling, rosi began her love of gardening after taking a class and taking care of the little sprouts and learning that some plants can help people. ●●●●●●●●●● ✉ | she is very in-tune with empathy, and can read others on how they feel by observing body language (will develop over time) ; this allows her to better understand what others might need help with, how how to make a better relationship with them!●●●●●●●●●● ✉ | heightened senses of hearing, sight, and smell (ordinary racial trait) ; this is a gift and a curse, as it allows Rosi to be more connected to the things around her, yet it means she is more sensitive to loud sounds and bright lights (and harsh odors).●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●Personality●●●●●●●●●● ✌ | she is a happy bubbly little grimm who likes to help out when she can. she doesn't like being alone, so she'll make friends with anyone (and just about anything) for some company. she's the kind of nightmare to put others needs before her own, sometimes to the point where she'd give up her lunch to a freshling who forgot theirs, or lose sleep staying up all night to help take care of nocturnal familiars. she doesn't believe in being bored or doing nothing, the way she sees it, there's always something to help out with and someone to hang out with. she likes keeping herself occupied with whatever she can (whether that be reading, playing outside, or even doing homework) to keep her mind off the fact that she feels out of place. ●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●My House●●●●●●●●●● ❧ enoch | she is alright with her house placement, and agrees with it's motto: ' shining light on what you don't know only serves to make your world a brighter and more colorful place'. she is also drawn to studying medicine in order to help people as best she can when she gets older. besides, there wasn't an academy dedicated to gardening.●●●●●●●●●●●●●●●My Race, Other Races, and Myself●●●●●●●●●● ☸ my race | she feels a very tight bond with other grimms, due to the fact that there aren't very many that are in the academy. she has a strong pack mentality and likes to surround herself with others (both of her race and of other races) to feel like she has a family.●●●●●●●●●● ☸ other races | she doesn't discriminate against anyone, a friend is a friend! while she does seem to connect easier with fluffy races (imps and baphomets), she gets along great with everyoneFirst Glance | Life History | Personality | RP Prompt | Appearance
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Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2015 6:22 pm
❝ ＲＰ ＰＲＯＭＰＴ ❞ Prompt 5 Your Nightmare has just woken up on a day where they have class. What is their morning ritual? How do they get ready? Ambrosine rolled over to the chirping sound of her alarm, sitting up in her little bed and rubbing her eyes before clicking it off. She opened up the blinds in her little dorm and let the sun shine in, stretching the sleep out of her long furry limbs. She made her way over to her bright green class calendar, tripping over a stack of books on the floor but recovering without causing too much damage. Thank goodness her roommates slept like a log! The other three had left the dorm by the time she had woken up, probably with earlier morning classes than her. A toothy smile spread across her face when she realized that she had her favorite class today: Health & P.E.! Excited, she bounced over to her miniature vanity, picking up her brush and started to work on her thick fluffy coat. Because her fur was so dense, she got tangles and knots like crazy, especially after a good night's sleep. She started at the base of her tail and methodically worked her way down, collecting a brush-full of smokey green fuzz. Once she finished detangling her neck fluff, she gave one last swipe over her fuzzy ears before grabbing her little watering can and fed her little chlorophyll-producing friends. "Good morning Jade, Good morning Laurel and Myrtle!" she whispered, sprinkling each of the little green sprouts with water. Sometimes, when she helped out in the greenhouses after class, the gardeners would let her bring home a little potted friend. She donned her favorite sweater after replacing the watering can and stumbled off for the walk to class. Rosi loved to feel the grass and dirt underneath her paws, and didn't mind if she got muddy or if she collected grass. She sometimes got in trouble for getting the carpet dirty, but there were no carpets to dirty in P.E! wordcount: 296 First Glance | Life History | Personality | RP Prompt | Appearance
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Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2015 6:23 pm
❝ ＡＰＰＥＡＲＡＮＣＥ ❞ Custom Form Name: Starting Stage: Freshling Race: Grimm Base: B with Ears 3 Description: Body: i like the idea of smoke and shadows, so gradients/ombres are cool! subtle markings would be cool too, with whatever you interpret from the palletes.
Eyes: Base 4 ; would be cool if they contrasted her body coloring (light eyes with dark fur / dark eyes with light fur)
Hair: i like hair 29 ; could look good dark or white, or even the tips the opposite color of her roots (like black hair with gradient grey/green tips). no half-head one color half-head another, please, but an ombre would be cool too~
Clothes: i feel like she'd wear cloak-y things and maybe cooler clothes because she gets so hot because of her abundance of fluffy wooly fur, but as she gets older she starts wearing longer skirts that have slits up the sides to show her legs and drapey maybe cropped peasant-style tops and hippie-ish fashion elements mixing with her druid-y kind of mysterious vibes
Tail: same smoky green shadowy idea as the body <3 i have a headcannon that she's fluffier than others in her race because she came from a pack that lived in a colder climate
Claws: in contrast with her fur/skin so they stand out References: [ color pallete ] [ and another for the greens ]Quest Approval: - Cost: 750k First Glance | Life History | Personality | RP Prompt | Appearance
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Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2015 1:54 pm
~Staff Crit~ Appearance: - Be aware that the only race that has glowing eyes is Geists. Grimm eyes do no glow unless she were to be a hybrid. They can be very bright and give off the illusion of glowing but without Geist blood they can't actually glow. Backstory: - Please include all your notes in your write up of her backstory and possible future events. It just helps us see the complete character when you present IC thoughts about how they feel about things right now, and what they'd like to do in the future. As for how many partners she wants, you can present that as a hypothetical that she does have dreams of getting married, having a family and children of her own. - Is there a reason she's so interested in medicine and plants and all that? What spurred her to be drawn to those fields of study? Maybe include an event that triggers her interest in plants and medicine. Personality: - The traits of her personality need to be elaborated upon and how they impact her as an individual. She's extroverted, but what does she do with the trait? Does she have a lot of social circles she's a member of? Go to a lot of club meetings? Does she want to have a lot of friends to help counteract the fact she gets lonely? Just give us your thoughts about how she uses these traits to be the individual she is :3 - Over all all the traits need to be elaborated in including her hobbies and how she uses her abilities to best effect. Prompt: - Depending on her personality type (and the fact that she's extroverted) Rosi may room with up to 5 other kids. She'd have more than one person to worry about waking up. - Just a note: brushing her tail UP would be against the direction of her fur, and turn her into a puff ball. lol - Grimm don't wear shoes because they have paws. While she may own a pair of sheaths that give the appearance of shoes, or shin guards for sports, she wouldn't actually own anything that encloses her whole foot.
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 1:25 pm
alrighty!
i made edits (in red) to her life history, explaining more about her interest in medicine and including my notes into the description.
I elaborated on all of her positive and negative traits as well as her hobbies
i also made some minor edits to her rp post
(i also tweaked some things on her custom form like a different hair style and I added another pallette)
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2016 2:44 pm
Critique incoming!
Appearance:
Just be careful on the glowing eyes note on the description. Just as Argent said, only Geists have glowing eyes. <3
Maybe, since she's starting as a Freshling, you could have her custom form go with her appearance as a Freshling? Like her sweater and pants/skirt?
I'm slightly confused with her coloring. Her custom form and first post makes it seem like she will be smokey colors (greys, browns), then you're saying there should be green in the tail in the custom form and in the prompt. This is just for clarity!
Backstory, Personality, Prompt:
I feel like you followed Argent's advice well and I have nothing to add here!
Other than that, I'm going to approve her! Grats!
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