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PostPosted: Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:44 pm



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Full Name: Mark White
Nickname: Thunder
Age: 22
Rank:D
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 155
Guild: Blue Pegasus
Guild Mark Location:Back
Guild Mark Color: Royal Blue
Tattoos/scars/birthmarks:
Appearance: Average height, slender build, rocking brunette hair, blue eyes, and appears a couple of years younger than he is.
Often seen wearing a black shirt with a blue cross and blue stripes down the sleeves with a lightweight white with brown underarms undershirt; grey or blue carpenter jeans, a pair of steel toed boots, white ACE wraps around his arms, and his blue sunglasses. When he stars getting serious in battle he will remove his black and blue over shirt to reveal a light blue scarf and lightweight armor pauldrons on his undershirt.
Personality: He is very protective of friends and loved ones, and is usually a fun guy, but can be serious when necessary. Will sometimes overreact to things he feels aren't right. Is quick to apologize when he realizes he's in the wrong. Will sometimes quote heroes, songs, movies, or other people when he feels he himself cannot come up with his own way of saying what he feels
Personal Skill: Cooking and listening.
Favorite Food: Breakfast foods and corn
Favorite Drink: Strawberry drinks
Least Favorite Food: Hominy. It's a lie that tries to be corn
Likes: music, games, friends, food, drink, and women
Dislikes: Liars, cheater, thieves, and people who get away with s&*t they shouldn't be
Hates: Spiders


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Magic
Primary Magic: Lightning Magic
Magic Type: Caster
Spells:

Owner name: Mark White
Spell Name: Electroshock
Spell Rank: D (Will go up to an A-rank at higher Ranks)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: As simple as electric spells come. The user simply places their hand on a target and electrocutes them until they pass out. Can also be used to power small appliances


Owner name: Mark White
Spell Name: Stun Strikes
Spell Rank: C
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: More a Fighting Stance and less a spell, Stun Strikes encases the hands and feet of the user in electricity, allowing each physical attack to shock and stun the opponent, to lead into further attacks. (Opponents that are hit by Stun Strikes become increasingly numb/stunned depending on the amount of consecutive hits. One hit causes numbness. Two is a limb stun, Three causes half body stun. Four is full body.)


Owner name: Mark White
Spell Name: Chain Lightning
Spell Rank: C (Will go up to an A-rank at higher Ranks)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: The user fires off bolts of lightning from his hands that can chain between multiple opponents.


Owner name: Mark White
Spell Name: Lightning Crash
Spell Rank: B
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: A slight upgrade to his buddy Ryan's Lightning Dash. The user cloaks themselves in electricity before dashing forward to strike the opponent with a lightning charge melee strike that explodes on impact. Supplements Mobility by 10 for the round.


Owner name: Mark White
Spell Name: Lightning Strike
Spell Rank: B (A During Thunderstorms)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: The user fires off bolts of lightning from his hands, or calls down bolts from the sky. The magic is more powerful during storms.


Owner name: Mark White
Spell Name: Lightning rod
Spell Rank: A
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: The user zaps their opponent with a massive positive charge so as to call upon a thunderstorm's ferocity directly upon them, turning them into a human lightning rod

Secondary Magic: Purple Flare
Magic Type: Caster
Spells:
Owner Name: Mark White
Spell Name: Flame Torrent (cannot be downloaded lol)
Spell Rank: D (Will go up to an A-rank at higher Ranks)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: The user emits a large torrent of purple flames in front of themselves. Flames will stick to what they touch and continue to burn until willed away or the user runs out of magic


Owner Name: Mark White
Spell Name: Cannon Flare
Spell Rank: D (Will go up to an A-rank at higher Ranks)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: Compressed balls of purple flames are flung at a target. Flames will stick to the target and continue to burn until willed away or the user runs out of magic


Owner Name: Mark White
Spell Name: Flare Chain
Spell Rank: B (Will go up to an A-rank at higher Ranks)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: The user creates a chain of purple flare and proceeds to use it like a burning whip or it can be used to ensnare opponents.


Owner Name: Mark White
Spell Name: Flare Chain Shuriken
Spell Rank: B
Magic Type: [Caster/Holder]
Spell Description: When the user cracks the Flair chain they can cast off chain links to act like flying burning shuriken


Owner Name: Mark White
Spell Name: Flare Blitz
Spell Rank: A (Burning crater makes it an S-rank)
Magic Type: Caster
Spell Description: The user's body becomes surrounded by purple flames and shoots at the opponent like a missile, slamming into them with great force leaving the opponent in a burning crater.


At his current rank (D) Mark is unable to use Flare Blitz, Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike


Motto: There isn't a thing in this world you can't do if you put your mind and heart into it!
Battle Strength:
•Battling multiple opponents and creativity with magic
Battle Weakness:
•Often forgets how much magic he has forcing him to resort to fisticuffs


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ƒ ι g н т ѕ - ω σ η : 0
ƒ ι g н т ѕ - ℓ σ ѕ т : 0

Mana: 350

Physical Offense:20
Magical Offense:25
Physical Defense:20
Magical Defense:20
Mobility:15
Intelligence:20

Missions Attempted:
Missions Successful:
Missions Failed:

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Magic Equipment List

Head:

Arms:

Hands:

Fingers:





Chest:

Waist:

Legs:

Feet:

Eyes:

Ears:



Jewels: 000
Extra Magic Equipment:







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Family:


Background History:
•Born in Magnolia and the youngest of three brothers, Mark was only unique in that he was capable of using magic. This led to some slight jealousy from his brothers, but his mother soon straightened that out.

His mother was a nurse and occasionally had a hard time making ends meet, so he ran a small paper route in the early mornings to earn money for books and his school lunch. This work ethic and his grandfather's words of wisdom kept his spirits high and became his motto: "There isn't a thing in this world you can't do if you put your mind and heart into it!"

At 10, he became fascinated with lightning magic after being struck by a stray bolt during a storm and not being affected. What made it? Why did he not get hurt? Why him in the first place? These questions drove his curiosity, but sadly magic was forbidden at school.

It was around a year later that he met his best friend Ryan Grayson and his sister Serah. After Mark helped Ryan beat some of his usual bullies, they became best of friends. After Ryan had left the school to join Blue Pegasus, Mark was adamant that they stay friends and gave him his number.

It wasn't until he had heard about Serah's disappearance that he really became unshakable in studying magic. While still forbidden to learn about it in school, he would study magic at home in his spare time until he graduated. He had to help Ryan find her. After all, he would do the same for him.

But first he would have to join Blue Pegasus...


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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2016 7:12 pm


Overall, I think this profile is good. There are just a few small tweaks that need to be done and you'll be ready to post.

1. You need a picture of your character, or at the very least a lot more description of what the character looks like.

2. You're missing your character's motto.

3. You have too many higher ranking spells between the two types of magic. D-ranks are only allowed 1 A, 1 B, 2 C, and 3 D rank spells. You could alter the ranks of some of the current C-rank spells so that they're D for now. Then you can increase the rankings as you progress. Also, make a notation of which spells your character can currently use.

Once you've made these corrections, quote me so that I can look it over again. You'll need to try to avoid using any spells until Seph and/or Shikairu can approve those.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 1:24 pm


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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 4:45 pm


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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well


1. That'll work for now, but please do try to get a picture added as soon as you can.

2. You're most welcome. ^_^

3. It's better. That said though, you still have one too many B-ranks. I'd change one of the current C-rank spells to a D-rank and then one of the B-ranks to a C-rank. Doesn't matter which ones. Once that's done, I'd say your profile is accepted. smile

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 5:07 pm


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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well


1. That'll work for now, but please do try to get a picture added as soon as you can.

2. You're most welcome. ^_^

3. It's better. That said though, you still have one too many B-ranks. I'd change one of the current C-rank spells to a D-rank and then one of the B-ranks to a C-rank. Doesn't matter which ones. Once that's done, I'd say your profile is accepted. smile

I'm a bit confused. I listed Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike as being unusable. That should leave Lightning Crash as my only B-rank spell.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 5:15 pm


MarkM117
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MarkM117
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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well


1. That'll work for now, but please do try to get a picture added as soon as you can.

2. You're most welcome. ^_^

3. It's better. That said though, you still have one too many B-ranks. I'd change one of the current C-rank spells to a D-rank and then one of the B-ranks to a C-rank. Doesn't matter which ones. Once that's done, I'd say your profile is accepted. smile

I'm a bit confused. I listed Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike as being unusable. That should leave Lightning Crash as my only B-rank spell.


Ah okay that was my bad. I didn't cross-check those. With that knowledge, you can put one of them back in as a D-rank if you wish. From what I can see, you only have 2 D-rank spells when you're allowed 3. smile

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 5:38 pm


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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well


1. That'll work for now, but please do try to get a picture added as soon as you can.

2. You're most welcome. ^_^

3. It's better. That said though, you still have one too many B-ranks. I'd change one of the current C-rank spells to a D-rank and then one of the B-ranks to a C-rank. Doesn't matter which ones. Once that's done, I'd say your profile is accepted. smile

I'm a bit confused. I listed Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike as being unusable. That should leave Lightning Crash as my only B-rank spell.


Ah okay that was my bad. I didn't cross-check those. With that knowledge, you can put one of them back in as a D-rank if you wish. From what I can see, you only have 2 D-rank spells when you're allowed 3. smile

okey dokey lokey! Added a new D-Rank spell and edited it into my custom magic too. Didn't think of one until I read your post there. I find it simple but it's application could be very useful
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 6:37 pm


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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well


1. That'll work for now, but please do try to get a picture added as soon as you can.

2. You're most welcome. ^_^

3. It's better. That said though, you still have one too many B-ranks. I'd change one of the current C-rank spells to a D-rank and then one of the B-ranks to a C-rank. Doesn't matter which ones. Once that's done, I'd say your profile is accepted. smile

I'm a bit confused. I listed Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike as being unusable. That should leave Lightning Crash as my only B-rank spell.


Ah okay that was my bad. I didn't cross-check those. With that knowledge, you can put one of them back in as a D-rank if you wish. From what I can see, you only have 2 D-rank spells when you're allowed 3. smile

okey dokey lokey! Added a new D-Rank spell and edited it into my custom magic too. Didn't think of one until I read your post there. I find it simple but it's application could be very useful


Alrighty then. Everything looks to be in order for me. Like I said, just be sure to avoid any spells until they can be officially approved.

ACCEPTED!

Feel free to post in the coliseum whenever you're ready.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 6:43 pm


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1. I don't currently have a picture so I added his usual clothing in hopes that that might be enough extra to pass until I do. I can't really think of anything else to describe his appearance.

2. I can't believe I missed that! Thanks for pointing that out!

3. I have left a note after my magics listing spells I am currently unable to use. I got so hyped when making my magics I kinda forgot to count my spells XD I hope this is better. Thanks for pointing that out as well


1. That'll work for now, but please do try to get a picture added as soon as you can.

2. You're most welcome. ^_^

3. It's better. That said though, you still have one too many B-ranks. I'd change one of the current C-rank spells to a D-rank and then one of the B-ranks to a C-rank. Doesn't matter which ones. Once that's done, I'd say your profile is accepted. smile

I'm a bit confused. I listed Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike as being unusable. That should leave Lightning Crash as my only B-rank spell.


Ah okay that was my bad. I didn't cross-check those. With that knowledge, you can put one of them back in as a D-rank if you wish. From what I can see, you only have 2 D-rank spells when you're allowed 3. smile

okey dokey lokey! Added a new D-Rank spell and edited it into my custom magic too. Didn't think of one until I read your post there. I find it simple but it's application could be very useful


Alrighty then. Everything looks to be in order for me. Like I said, just be sure to avoid any spells until they can be officially approved.

ACCEPTED!

Feel free to post in the coliseum whenever you're ready.

Alrighty! Thank you! Though I still need to post this in the Application topic, right?
PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 6:46 pm


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I'm a bit confused. I listed Flare Chain Shuriken, Flare Chain, and Lightning Strike as being unusable. That should leave Lightning Crash as my only B-rank spell.


Ah okay that was my bad. I didn't cross-check those. With that knowledge, you can put one of them back in as a D-rank if you wish. From what I can see, you only have 2 D-rank spells when you're allowed 3. smile

okey dokey lokey! Added a new D-Rank spell and edited it into my custom magic too. Didn't think of one until I read your post there. I find it simple but it's application could be very useful


Alrighty then. Everything looks to be in order for me. Like I said, just be sure to avoid any spells until they can be officially approved.

ACCEPTED!

Feel free to post in the coliseum whenever you're ready.

Alrighty! Thank you! Though I still need to post this in the Application topic, right?


Yes, you'll need to post it in the Blue Pegasus application area too. That way Yuuki can keep track of all Blue Pegasus members.

(P.S. I just wanted to clarify something, is your character already part of Blue Pegasus or is he going to join? You may want to add that into your bio real fast before posting in the application section. Sorry for not asking sooner.)

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2016 7:11 pm


Updated weight, appearance, and added a profile picture
PostPosted: Tue Feb 16, 2016 7:49 pm


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Updated weight, appearance, and added a profile picture


APPROVED!

You'll also need to post the updated profile in the Blue Pegasus Application section. That way Yuuki can update it on the members thread.

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