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 Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 7:31 pm
Characters Name - Cedar
Race - Bakeneko
Zodiac Sign Void - The Chalice
Academy House - Enoch House
Gender - Female
Starting Stage - Freshling
Body Type Base B / ears: 1 Hair: Custom
Brief Description of Appearance or Custom Form
Username: LunaRei_SilverBlood Starting Stage: Freshling Race: Bakeneko Base: B / ears: 1 Description:Body: Paler skin? ( I'm totally open to seeing what you think is best/looks best! )
Eyes: If possible Autumn hues
Hair: A lightiish brown / Auburn
Clothes: Complimenting~
References (if applicable): Uncert / Cert / Other Cert / Artwork / Artwork / Art WorkQuest Approval: n/a Cost: 750k
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 4:35 pm
Cedar is an orphan from the cache. As a freshling she doesn't really understand what it means to be an orphan yet. You can't miss something you've never had right? Though now that shes old enough to go to attend school she's starting to realize that she doesn't have any emotional attachments anyone. And she is starting to long for that attachment. The caretakers that raised her were nice and all, but as she see's the other freshlings with their parents she's realizing that clear difference.
So far in her life Cedar has decided to join the Enoch House. And she likes it so far. She choose to join Enoch because of her curiosity about the world. It wasn't that she didn't want to interact with others but she wanted to learn about everything else. There are many others that she can observe and learn from and hopefully one day make long lasting friendships with.
Having been raised with a mix of most if not all the other races she doesn't really identify with a lot of the stereotypes that her race has. She's happy to chat and spend time with anyone she deems a friend. With some you have to take the bad with the good; no one is perfect. Cedar can and will get along with just about any of the races. She does tend to be wary of anyone, not just a race that does things she doesn't think is right. And that usually tends to be the Giest. She doesn't like how manipulative they can be... And she has often fallen victim to it more than once.
Cedar physically identifies with Fallen and as she learns Magic she will use the divine source. But she's still learning about her race and as much as she wants to learn she doesn't feel that it should change who she is or heavily weight on who she will become.
The event that will change Cedar the most is as a junior she'll see someone getting bullied pretty bad by a couple bullies. Something will just overcome her and she'll intervene to stop the bullying and help with the injured nightmare's wounds. And as she does she'll realize how good it makes her feel to be helping someone like this and it'll aim her toward her path of being a healer.
In terms of her medical training Cedar will rely primarily on her magic but she'll study traditional medicine as well. With a future hope of possibly mastering both.
Cedar wants to help others, primarily as a healer but those that need extra help, or less fortunate. She like many others, would like to meet that special someone and maybe even start a family.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2016 9:03 pm
Personality
Kind - For the most part, Cedar is kind to everyone. There are very few (If any) nightmares out there that she would ever treat any less. Do unto others as you want done to you. It's helped that she's been raised at the school because shes been able to see everyone as individuals rather then a stereotyped race.
Loyal- Once Cedar finds the magic of friendship she'll realize that she would do almost anything for them. She will do everything she can to support them and everything she can to be a good friend in return.
Multi-tasker - Cedar has a great ability to bounce from one activities to the next and has great organizational skills. She's always able to keep herself busy with her own projects and always be there to help a friend. But this isn't always good! She can over book herself and wear herself out if she's not careful.
Self-conscious- Despite having confidence in what she wants to achieve, she struggles with her image and how she fits in and how others see her. She wants to be well liked, but she can have trouble accepting that not everyone will like her. Not to mention self doubt about if she achieve all her goals. Is she truly on the right path for her?
Naive - Sometimes ignorance is bliss but not all the time. Because Cedar wants to show kindness to everyone sometimes she gets taken advantage of in an obvious way that she simply doesn't see.
Selflessness - Normally this is a good thing, but not when someone gets carried away with it, without realizing it. Just after Cedar realizes how happy she felt helping someone she starts to get carried away and will need to learn with the help of friends to balance herself.
As a freshling Cedar is curious about everything and her curiosity will also make her gullible. She's a happy youngster that wants to get into everything when she's feeling energetic. But even at a young age she doesn't like to be in the spotlight. So if the group does something like a play, she might cry if she has to go on the stage. And despite possibly showing the qualities of a leader she doesn't want the attention! Because she puts in so much energy on a regular basis when nap time comes around she's out like a light.
Likes
Freedom, fun, helping others, food, learning, cool weather, spending time outside
Dislikes
Ultimatums, confrontations, violence, bad tasting food, letting friends down, failure
Hobbies
Cooking/baking, working at the free clinic, gardening
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2016 12:28 pm
RP response
Your Nightmare sees an abandoned plushie sitting on the ground by a tree in the courtyard. It looks nearly new and kind of expensive! What does your Nightmare do after they notice it?
Cedar looked around as she toddled her way down the street. Her caretaker for the day was shopping for some supplies and chose to bring the little fallen with her. Cedar's autumn hued eyes looked around, widening at all the sights she was seeing. Her wings gave an excited flutter as she saw a tall tree just yonder. She tugged at the hand of her caretaker and pointed excitedly.
With a smile from the caretaker Cedar practically dragged them over to the tree and she smiled with a young laugh. It was a small park, there were flowers and other plants near the tree. But it didn't take long for her to see the plushie leaning up against the tree. The young fallen's wings drooped as she looked around, where was the plushie's friend? The one that would love it so much as to take it everywhere? It looked almost new so there had to be another fleshling around that it belonged too.
When she slipped her fingers from the caretakers she toddled over to the plushie and looked around again. A strange sadness filled her she looked at it. She felt lonely for the plushie, it was just so sad. She leaned down and picked it up, when she turned around to make her way back to the caretaker her eyes had welled with years.
When the caretaker asked her why she was crying Cedar sad. "The plushie is sad because it's all alone... I want to make it happy again and give it a home."
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2016 5:07 pm
Critique Incoming!!
Appearance:
Everything here looks good!
Backstory:
Looks pretty good! Can you add in how she feels about other races? Also, what made her choose Enoch? If she doesn't realize that she wants to go into medicine until she's a junior, why didn't she go into Eldritch - which is more people based? : D
As for her healing-- is she intending to become a traditional medicine doctor, or someone who relies primarily on magic to heal?
Personality:
Looks pretty good, but I'd like to see a basic paragraph or two on how she is as a person right now. If you can add that in, it should complete this section!
Prompt:
Looks perfect!
Quote me back when you're ready for your next critique! Cedar is shaping up to be very lovely, I'm excited to see her around in the future. <3
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2016 5:15 pm
I should have gotten everything. In terms of her magic and healing, I noted that she relies on her magic but if it's possible I'd like for her to still study traditional. So just let me know ^^
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 1:52 pm
Allllrighty, that looks much better!
Could you expand on this little bit here?:
"She does tend to be wary of anyone, not just a race that does things she doesn't think is right. And that usually tends to be the Giest. She doesn't like how manipulative they can be... And she has often fallen victim to it more than once. "
I'm thinking there may be some word confusion that's catching me up.
Also, would you please make your edits in red so I can see them a little easier? <3 I want to make sure I'm catching everything!
Quote me when you're ready for the next crit! She's shaping up very nicely. : D
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