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 Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 3:32 pm
Poetry, for me anyway has always allowed me to express my appreciation and love of anime. I have held it as a strength. I sometimes just write poetry in my spare time about many different anime, but here I'll only use FMA as a subject.
The rules are simple. All poetry must be about FMA or alchemy. Nothing else is of use here, and will be deleted.
Now allow you inner spirit to shine through.
I will post samples regularly
Samples:
Title: Spirit of Alchemy
In all of my troubles
A circles my hope
It guides me into another realm
Where my imagination
Is triggered and unleashed
I can bring forth a creation
of my own will
Of natures elements
and my own strength
And my circle cast
allows me to bring
into the world
the spirit within
Title: Quiet I'm Ed(It's a little funny xd )
Hey you guys
You noise is irritating
allow me to do
my silent meditating
Or soon I may
us my powers on you
and you'll all see
my alchemy-jutsu!
Ha ninja time
wait I'm an alchemist
the most powerful one
in the state! Boo yah
Now queit!!
Because I'm Ed!!!
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 1:37 pm
Title: Edwards begining
My brother, human
Myself as well
Then Mother
gone...and my soul weeps
The door opens
I walk inside
The world changes
And so do I
My mother still gone
my arm and leg
are too
and my brother
is human no more
but a soul inside metal
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Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 11:44 pm
the laws and lifes:
To get you must give
to live one must die
do the things that u do not want to do
but it feels right inside of you
many cries
many laughs
waiting in your path
many have different lifes
and many sacrifice
what is happiness?
you may ask
in a war with fear
blood spreads
people cry
even though this world has harm and death
the sadness will disapear
omg did i right that? eek
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Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 5:23 am
I wrote this Envy-inspired song a little while ago... It's really effing creepy. gonk
Unfortunately, it's on my computer in my room, which is not hooked up to the network or internet, so I'll have to get a floppy. Maa, I'll post it here when I post it and my EdxEnvy fic on ff.net...
Again, it is really effing creepy.
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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 7:39 am
Ok OokamiAya! And to angelic_princess2 good work!
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 12:26 pm
Faithless Ed
Many sacrifices were made,
Sacrifices for a loved one,
Only to come to failiure,
And a powerful heartache,
A boy wanders the earth,
Along with his brother,
Whose soul is sealed within armor,
Many times this boy cries,
Weeping regretfully,so sorrowful,
He feels so faithless,
Trying to fix the damage that was done,
Wishing,just wishing,he hadn't made that one mistake,
that changed his and his brother's life,forever.
(Kinda sucks but oh well)
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Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 10:02 am
Sekasha13 Faithless EdMany sacrifices were made, Sacrifices for a loved one, Only to come to failiure, And a powerful heartache, A boy wanders the earth, Along with his brother, Whose soul is sealed within armor, Many times this boy cries, Weeping regretfully,so sorrowful, He feels so faithless, Trying to fix the damage that was done, Wishing,just wishing,he hadn't made that one mistake, that changed his and his brother's life,forever. (Kinda sucks but oh well) It's fine!
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 2:02 pm
Gothika_Immortal Poetry, for me anyway has always allowed me to express my appreciation and love of anime. I have held it as a strength. I sometimes just write poetry in my spare time about many different anime, but here I'll only use FMA as a subject. The rules are simple. All poetry must be about FMA or alchemy. Nothing else is of use here, and will be deleted. Now allow you inner spirit to shine through. I will post samples regularly Samples:
Title: Spirit of Alchemy
In all of my troubles
A circles my hope
It guides me into another realm
Where my imagination
Is triggered and unleashed
I can bring forth a creation
of my own will
Of natures elements
and my own strength
And my circle cast
allows me to bring
into the world
the spirit withinTHATS SO AWESOME xd ... I don't write any kind of poetry myself sweatdrop ... Have you ever won any Poetry contests? We're having a Poetry Slam at my school tommorow but I bet no one will have a poem as awesome as your FMA one xd exclaim Heres something I can contribute, the translated lyrics to the Russian FMA Insert Song "Bratja(Brothers)" 3nodding exclaim Forgive me, little brother! I am so sorry It's forbidden to try to return the one who was taken by the earth The one who knows the law of the Existence would help me to find the answer. I was very mistaken: There's no cure for death. Dear mom! Sweet [mom]! We loved you so much. But all our efforts Were wasted I tempted you with the wonderful hope of returning our home My brother, it's all my fault Don't cry, don't be sad, big brother! You're not the only guilty one. We have one road, we will purge our sins completely I cannot blame you, I am not hurt at all. We sinned by wanting to be stronger than everyone else Dear mom! Sweet [mom]! We loved you so much. But all our efforts Were wasted I was tempted with the wonderful hope of returning our home It's all my fault But what should we do, how should we be? How to fix everything, and forget? It's forbidden to try to return the one who was taken by the earth
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:45 pm
Very well done...and yes, i've won many contest with my anime poetry.
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Posted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 11:01 am
Gothika_Immortal Very well done...and yes, i've won many contest with my anime poetry. Just to verify... I didn't write that... I got it from animelyrics.com sweatdrop ... Thats really cool xd exclaim Whats the biggest prize you ever won and what Anime Poem was it question
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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:05 pm
The biggest prize, it was just a published work in a school book they were trying to publish, not sure how that went though. But one was on FMA, one Chobits, the other of Hellsing. They are my favorite animes.
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:51 am
Gothika_Immortal The biggest prize, it was just a published work in a school book they were trying to publish, not sure how that went though. But one was on FMA, one Chobits, the other of Hellsing. They are my favorite animes. I still want to see Chobits crying exclaim My favorite Animes are InuYasha, FMA(Of course xp exclaim ), Naruto, Rurouni Kenshin, and Serial Experiments Lain... A published work eek exclaim To bad you don't know if it really was published...
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Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 4:07 pm
LOL...I suppose so...I need to make another poem...
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Posted: Fri Apr 14, 2006 10:53 am
Gothika_Immortal LOL...I suppose so...I need to make another poem... What I have written is some english version InuYasha songs xd exclaim But they aren't very good sweatdrop ... I tried to make them go along with the translated Japanese lyrics...
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 11:12 am
Heres the lyrics to "READY STEADY GO" xd exclaim
READY STEADY CAN'T HOLD ME BACK
READY STEADY GIVE ME GOOD LUCK
READY STEADY NEVER LOOK BACK
LET'S GET STARTED READY STEADY GO
READY STEADY CAN'T HOLD ME BACK
READY STEADY GIVE ME GOOD LUCK
READY STREADY NEVER LOOK BACK
LET'S GET STARTED READY STEADY GO
fukitonde yuku fukei korugaru you ni mae e
kurushi magure demo hyouteki wa mou minogasanai
Sceneries being blown away seem to whirl in front of me
Even if I get desperate, I won't overlook my target anymore
ate ni naranai chizu yakute shimaeba ii sa
uzumoreta shinjitsu kono tenohira de tsukami torou
An unreliable map should be burnt
I'll grasp onto the buried truth with my hands
muchuu de (hayaku) kake nukete kita
urusai kurai ni harisake sou na kodou no takanari
hibite (yonde) iru kimi no koe
koko de tachidomaru you na jikan wa nai sa
READY STEADY GO
I came running frantically -hastily-
The throb of my heartbeats feels deafening enough to burst
Your voice is echoing -shouting-
There's no time to be like standing still here
READY STEADY GO
kazoe kirenai kizu kakae konde ite mo
chotto yasotto ja tamashi made wa ubawasenai
ano oka no mukou de kimi ni deaeta nara
nani kara hana sou sonna koto bakari omou yo
Even if my countless wounds get hugged
For a moment and gently, I won't let my soul get taken
On the other side of that hill, if I met you
I'd only think about what to start talking from
muchuu de (hayaku) kake nukete kita
urusai kurai ni harisake sou na kodou no takanari
hibite (yonde) iru kimi no koe
koko de tachidomaru you na jikan wa nai sa
READY STEADY GO
I came running frantically -hastily-
The throb of my heartbeats feels deafening enough to burst
Your voice is echoing -shouting-
There's no time to be like standing still here
READY STEADY GO
READY STEADY CAN'T HOLD ME BACK
READY STEADY GIVE ME GOOD LUCK
READY STEADY NEVER LOOK BACK
LET'S GET STARTED READY STEADY GO
READY STEADY CAN'T HOLD ME BACK
READY STEADY GIVE ME GOOD LUCK
READY STREADY NEVER LOOK BACK
LET'S GET STARTED READY STEADY GO
kokoro wa (hashiru) ano sora no shita
karamawari suru kimochi ga sakebi dasu no o tomerarenai
kimi made (todoke) kitto ato sukoshi
atsuku hizashi ga terasu kono michi no mukou
READY STEADY GO
PLEASE. TRUST ME.
My heart -runs- underneath that sky
I can't stop my idle feelings from crying out
Surely I'll -reach- you in a little while
The sunlight shines hotly across this path
READY STEADY GO
PLEASE. TRUST ME.
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