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PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2016 6:03 am


Upgrade quest(s) for Thorn Kincaide
PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2016 6:10 am


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Dumortierite

Challenge: It’s beautiful to burn up
Paint it black
(You’ve got a smudge – right there.)
Only shades of grey
Light it up
Shadow and flame

Uniform:

MAIN COLOUR: Black or dark grey. Charcoal grey?
SECONDARY COLOUR: Purple

Victorian vampire-gothic. Elegant creeper.
Nice button coat with piping. Dark gloves. Button-up knee-high boots. Waistcoat?

Top -- Thigh-length front-buttoned coat. Victorian vampire-gothic/military-gothic. Negaverse piping. A more masculine cut of this? Or [x] [x] If the coat's not buttoned all the way closed, there might be a waistcoat underneath?
Bottoms -- plain long pants.
Gloves -- Black wrist-length gloves.
Belt -- CC? Maybe the coat has one. Or an untied belt hanging loose, trailing behind.
Shoes -- Gothy. Flat heels. Button-up knee-high boots if they look okay. Or just shiny black Victorian button shoes.
Shoulders -- CC, whatever goes with the coat.
Accessories -- CC, please add more creep as required.


Weapon

Lieutenant - Artist's charcoal stick

Captain - A blackened, burnt-out tree branch, good for bashing. The tips of the branches are still smouldering, warm to the touch, and may deliver small cigarette-like burns with sustained application, but they go out quickly when used this way, and can't start fires.

General - Tree-themed iron pitchfork/candelabra hybrid with red-hot, fiery-looking points. It can cause scorch-burns (equivalent to a bad sunburn) or leave a brand if pressed against skin for a long period, but can't start fires. No magic except for not cooling down.

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PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2016 6:20 am


This is a knight concept for the same civilian. I don't know if it's allowed to be here. If it's not, I'll remove it. If it is, any crit or comments would be appreciated here too, to keep the two quest concepts in line.

Knight Title: Damascus, Page of Saturn

Knight Title: Damascus, Page of Saturn

Challenge: You’ve got a smudge – right there
Faith in darkness
Walk into the light


Uniform:

All the purple forever. White and grey for neutrals, blue or black as accents.

Victorian gothic. Less punk, more elegant/old school.
Nice Victorian coat. Floppy shirt. Waistcoat or lining in damask-pattern silk. Lace. Button-up/old-fashioned knee-high boots.

Top -- Nice Victorian coat. Floppy shirt. Waistcoat or lining in damask-pattern silk. Lace. More Victorian, less military. Here are some fancy coats: [x] [x] [x] And some waistcoats: [x] [x]
Bottoms -- Long pants, in appropriate Victorian-era cut.
Gloves -- White wrist-gloves
Belt -- Probably not
Shoes -- Button-up/old-fashioned knee-high boots.
Shoulders -- Probably not
Accessories -- Little silver skulls or arcane symbols. And Saturn symbols. Silver or purple roses, or rose-pattern damask. (Eventual plan for Knight would be damask-steel/patterned steel decorative armour)


Weapon & Magic

Page Weapon- Artist's charcoal stick

Squire - Burning branch
Magic: Damascus inscribes a circle of magic runes in charcoal on a flat surface, or in firelight in the air to activate his magic. Two long ghostly arms emerge from the circle and grab onto a single target, partially immobilising them by grabbing and holding their limbs. Damascus can channel for up to 30 seconds, or half that time for double the arms.

Knight - Black wooden staff with red/fiery stars caught in the branched top (or candles for the dead, if that's more in theme).
Magic: Damascus inscribes a circle of magic runes in charcoal on a flat surface, or in firelight in the air to activate his magic. Once activated, a fully formed ghost emerges from the circle and moves to grab, grapple and immobilise a single target. As the ghost is human-shaped, the immobilisation will usually be arms/upper body only. The ghost appears to most as a faceless spirit, but the target may also perceive it as the ghost of someone they knew - the vengeful spirit of someone they killed, or even a deceased loved one immobilising with a hugging motion. Only the target is able to 'recognise' the ghost. Damascus has no influence over how the target perceives it. Damascus can channel for up to 45 seconds.

PostPosted: Wed May 04, 2016 6:22 am


Notes:
Candles for the dead
- Ghost summoning magic: ghost appears and holds a target still - death and binding.
- Ghost stares and judges - death and watching.
- Protective circle of ancestors?


(Power Theme: Watchers, binders, death
Appearance: Gothic culture and Victorian)


- Knights are hard.
- Knight magic is hard.
- Send help.

- I think the Nega-side is complete?

- May need to change the Knight name, given RL political stuff, but no idea what to choose instead.

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PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2017 4:09 pm


LokisRose


Hey, Lokis!

Dumortierite looks great, and I'm happy to give him a trial stamp! Damascus would have to be reviewed separately, unfortunately, but the Nega side looks great~

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 01, 2017 9:53 am


LokisRose


Hey, Loki!

The Nega portion looks good to me, and while I cannot officially stamp Damascus unless you are submitting a purification plot, that profile looks pretty good to me, too! The only feedback I could give is that it might take a lot of time to actually draw those runes to initiate his magic; rather than that, it might be easier to just say that when he channels his magic, the runes appear in a circle beneath him (or the target)! But, we can work on that if you eventually have any plots to purify him or quest for Damascus as a separate Knight!

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