Yeah, I know, maybe the Poem thread should be in this subforum, because it's a very creative forum, I think. Oh well, it's not my decision. C:
Anyways, regardless, on to Cat_Lover's art. The face is very shiny anime. Out of curiosity, have you ever considered trying any different style? Watch as I'm accused of trying to sway young artists to the dark side of Western art. Cx
It's a little lopsided, that face. Have you tried drawing lines through the face (faintly, I suppose) so that you can better plan for the features?