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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 12:38 am


Thorn
If I were to start again,
would you still be my friend?
If I choose the pain,
would things still be the same?
If I said goodbye,
would you still stand by?
If I needed a guide,
would you rush to my side?
If I had almost died,
would you have cried?

If I were not your friend,
would you start again?
If things were not the same,
would you choose the pain?
If I did not stand by,
would you say goodbye?
If I did not rush to your side,
would you still need a guide?
If I had not cried,,
would you still have almost died?
If I had never came,
would you feel the same?
If I were to leave,
would you be free?
If I had not been your thorn,
would you not feel such self scorn?


Not quite sure where the concept came from, but it came. I'm also not sure how I feel about it. How does it make you feel?
PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 12:58 am


Wow this a little deeper than i first thought. Like I said I'm not sure about how I feel about the poem, but i do belive that if I am indeed in the poem it is in my past. I think i could fill both roles, but I can't fill either at the present, maybe it is for a friend. Maybe I've been awake too long and I am starting to think to deeply on it.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 8:14 pm


wow.. its really good.. I would be there for anyone even if their not there for me. and I dont plan on leaving any one.. and I hope someone will do the same. yet sometimes I vanise from those I love. but I will always be there for them if they ask.. with out another word just help or hi and I will be there
PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 8:58 pm


"I'll be there and I'll Cover you"-"Thousand Kises"RENT
that is me.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 11:49 am


Very good, makes me think alot about certain things I have done and what had happened to me.
PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 4:06 pm


Wow. I like it alot. It makes me think about my friends. I'm always there for them, even if it seems like I'm not there. Anyways, I like it.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 9:41 pm


Broken.In.Pieces.
Wow. I like it alot. It makes me think about my friends. I'm always there for them, even if it seems like I'm not there. Anyways, I like it.
I am glad you like it.
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