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shadowspinner13

PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:20 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 5:08 pm


Cute, awesome idea. Danny as a fox? Awesome! Though I'd have to say I consider it a sweet and awesome story. Failure describes it well though.

You are truly talented.

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shadowspinner13

PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 5:20 pm


Ah... Talented.. right. redface

The fox thing came up from staring at his suit for to long. Started that with a Pet Shop of Horrors cross over...

Perhaps I will do a sequal o it. nut first I must finish this. I'm at a cliff hanger on my origional.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 10:04 am


No offense, but I kinda like "Forgetten Through the Ages" better redface

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shadowspinner13

PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 2:26 pm


Yeah, that's coming. It takes longer, and I'm still working out little details.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 9:54 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 7:42 pm


Experiment after experiment, nine inventions, or for us normal folk, two years, passed by and Danny had grown into an active boy, that roomed about the house as he wished, always under the careful eye of his '"family". He was clumsy, always falling, but never once was there a single sign of ghost powers. Jack even went as far a to zap him a little when Jazz was at school and Maddie was shopping one day, but the boy only cried, loudly. He barely managed to quite the boy before they got home an hour later.

The trackers and the constant monerting were the only signs that he even had ectoplasma. Other than that, he was just like family.

Jazz had also grown. She still dragged around Bearburt, but didn't take him to school because he was afraid of the other kids. She was protective of Danny and Bearburt said that he would need her protection more than ever soon.

"Hey Danny wanna go to the park with me?" Jazz had pulled out the wagon, and was putting in a few toys. "We can bring your rocket."

"Swure! Dwoes Mommy know that we're going?" Danny started to jump up and down in excitement.

Jazz wanted to tell him to stop, but he was still little. He didn't know that jumping up and down was not a big boy thing to do. She was proud of her big girl skills, including her perfect talking skills.

"I already asked mom. She said that we had two hours, that means we need to be back before the big hand reaches the six." Telling time was another one of her skills that Jazz was proud of. She could also count to a hundred and knew two plus two. Her little brother could only count to ten.

"Can I ride in wagon? Pwease?" The park was only two block away, but if she didn't pull him, it was take a long time to get there. That was why she was bring the wagon. But he didn't need to know that.

"Fine but when I say it's time to go, we go. Or I get your desert tonight."

Danny gulped at not getting desert. He really wanted to keep it. "Ok."

The ride was quick thanks to Jazz's foresight. Soon they were at the park, chasing squirrels and flutterbys. There were other kids there with their parents and a game of tag started up. Danny being younger sat and watched the other kids while Jazz played.

After a while he got bored and wandered over to some smaller boys playing in the sand with cars. "Hi. Can I plway?" Danny smiled at them in the way of all young children.

"Sure. Here have one of my cars." One of the boys said. He grinned and they all started vrooming the cars across the sand.

They played happily losing track of time, and everything outside of their little game. So Danny didn't notice the aching until his legs cramped up. When he tried to stand, he fell instead. "Huh?"

That's when one of the mothers looked up. When she saw Danny she screamed and pulled her boy away from him. Danny didn't understand what was wrong. He tried to get up again but the world was spinning. Jazz was suddenly by his side.

"Danny, what hwappened?" Her usually perfect dialog was interrupted by her worry, or was it the commotion. He could feel eyes on him from every direction.

He tried to speak but the word wouldn't exit his mouth properly. All he could hear was grunts, or was it that everyone else was talking in grunts. Their voices keep getting higher and higher. The only way out was back. The darkness was comforting, like and old friend. His sister's voice broke through, but he couldn't understand it. That was ok because the darkness was were he wanted to be, something was on the other side, if he could just reach it...

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:00 pm


eek whoaa eek intense eek

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