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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2018 8:23 pm

One by one we trot
Into bitter cold!
We will not rout
For we trot in harmony!

Beneath the weaping sky
Ponies find their hearth
Facing ice and snow
Ponies set their hearts aglow!

Hyup!

Two by two we trot
Hark, the blackened sky!
We will not rout
For we trot in harmony!

Upon the frozen earth
Ponies find thier strength
Facing the endless toil
Ponies might reaches the sky!

Hyup!

Four by four we trot
Lo, beneath her gaze!
We will not rout
For we trot in harmony!

Dangerous, powerful and cold
Tundra is beauty untold
Bow your heads
For we arrived in harmony!

Hyup!

Saving a record of it here. Thoughts?

Posted: Sun May 06, 2018 8:59 pm

I like it! It sounded even better with a heavy riff going in my head!
You write a lot?

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Posted: Tue May 08, 2018 2:56 pm

Sincerely Metalhead

I like it! It sounded even better with a heavy riff going in my head!
You write a lot?

Not like i used to.

My mind always moves so much faster than my hands. Using pen and paper when i started simply didn't work; by the time i got out a sentence onto paper my mind was paragraphs ahead, often with a conversation thrown in. None of which reached the paper.

Keyboard was something beautiful; at twenty to thirty words per minute it fell behind but you could see it coming together. I'll have to share those works; and get off my a** and keep writing.

These days work keeps me using mobile and my god it's SLOW. Worse than paper and this post is a missmash of five versions.

Posted: Tue May 08, 2018 6:23 pm

Xenar1

Sincerely Metalhead

I like it! It sounded even better with a heavy riff going in my head!
You write a lot?

Not like i used to.

My mind always moves so much faster than my hands. Using pen and paper when i started simply didn't work; by the time i got out a sentence onto paper my mind was paragraphs ahead, often with a conversation thrown in. None of which reached the paper.

Keyboard was something beautiful; at twenty to thirty words per minute it fell behind but you could see it coming together. I'll have to share those works; and get off my a** and keep writing.

These days work keeps me using mobile and my god it's SLOW. Worse than paper and this post is a missmash of five versions.

Bloody hell! That's like me!
Only with music.
I constantly have music playing in my head, original stuff 99% of the time, and I can never keep up quick enough to write it all down. The stuff I do write down though gets more and more personal as the years pass and now, I barely share any of it. Honestly, I thought I was the only one. It's nice knowing there are others out there who are like minded. smile

Sincerely Metalhead
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2018 2:29 pm

Sincerely Metalhead

Bloody hell! That's like me!
Only with music.
I constantly have music playing in my head, original stuff 99% of the time, and I can never keep up quick enough to write it all down. The stuff I do write down though gets more and more personal as the years pass and now, I barely share any of it. Honestly, I thought I was the only one. It's nice knowing there are others out there who are like minded. smile

i usually write fiction but lately my best works have been songs. March to Blizzard Weeps is definitely a song but not the usual variety. Playing duneons and dragons bard on RP introduced me to bardic balads and songs; a form of story telling not much used anymore.

It's amazing where life takes you sometimes.

Posted: Fri May 11, 2018 6:29 pm

Xenar1

Sincerely Metalhead

Bloody hell! That's like me!
Only with music.
I constantly have music playing in my head, original stuff 99% of the time, and I can never keep up quick enough to write it all down. The stuff I do write down though gets more and more personal as the years pass and now, I barely share any of it. Honestly, I thought I was the only one. It's nice knowing there are others out there who are like minded. smile

i usually write fiction but lately my best works have been songs. March to Blizzard Weeps is definitely a song but not the usual variety. Playing duneons and dragons bard on RP introduced me to bardic balads and songs; a form of story telling not much used anymore.

It's amazing where life takes you sometimes.

Seriously. I'm in a pretty good spot in life right now, which I didn't think would happen just a couple of years ago. Future looks bright too. So bright...
I HAVE TO WEAR SHADES!!!! BUM BUM TSH!!!! emotion_awesome

Sincerely Metalhead
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