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 Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 9:59 am
All right then, I've decided to make a thread. Shocking, absolutely shocking. Nii? Anyways, Here you can post and read others poetry and see what they think of it.
Rules:
1. Constructive critisim only!
2. Try not to be Rude.
3. Follow the guild rules.
4. Please don't bump or page stretch.
5. Please no advertising or begging or anything.
6. Please, please, PLEASE attempt proper grammar. It will make both you and your poem look much better.
Okie here's a short poem I made up last night for my journal:
*Love & Glass Roses*
Love and glass roses,
One in the same.
Fragile yet strong,
Harmless yet dangerous.
It's all the same,
Just a little game.
With no care nor thought,
It is tossed about.
Left to shatter,
Upon the darkness of the end.
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Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 10:00 am
=Little Black Book=
Little black book,
What secrets hold you?
Oh, how you tempt me,
Nagging at my sanity!
Why dost thou call me,
With though song of silence?
Little black book,
Held shut tight.
Clasped shut by a delicate strap,
Yet held closed by loyalty.
So defenseless, yet so strong,
Why dost thou torment me?
Little black book,
I must know your secrets.
Tell me the fair,
And tell me the foul.
Tell me the endless dreams,
And tell me the nitemares.
Tell me all your secrets.
Little black book,
With just a mere movement,
Your walls are all gone.
Now I stand here,
Viewing it all.
The lies, hopes, and dreams,
That the book holds.
The inner darkness and betrayl,
That I now see in me.
Little black book,
Your power is boundless.
Temptation and sensation,
Decieving and believing.
Oh little black book,
What have I done?
I am myself, a monster.
To murder so soon,
The trust that layed between us...
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Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 10:23 am
Nice job Sets. 3nodding heart
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Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 11:17 am
Alucard_the_Immortal Nice job Sets. 3nodding heart Why thankyou, and I saw no poetry thread and for me that's a problem. xd heart
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Posted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 7:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 1:45 pm
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Second-In-Command-Of-Hell
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 10:09 pm
Twas not bad Sets!
Not bad at all...xD
I sitll like Robert Frost better... xd
(I'm not comparing you I swear..I'm just playin'..)
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Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 11:11 am
Second-In-Command-Of-Hell Twas not bad Sets!
Not bad at all...xD
I sitll like Robert Frost better... xd
(I'm not comparing you I swear..I'm just playin'..) Hahaha. xD Sureeee, that's what they all say. talk2hand xd heart
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Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 12:36 pm
This is a little somethign I wrote one night. I turned on my computer and put on my head phones. I had been in a poetic mood and such so I was off in my own little world...and forgot to turn on my music...:
I sit here, waiting.
Waiting and rotting.
Waiting for the music to start,
To blare through my head phones.
Rotting as I wait for something to occur,
Something that'll never occur.
I sit here, waiting and rotting.
Rotting and waiting.
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Posted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:24 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 7:59 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 12:49 pm
At the age of ten
I saw the truth
The lies you told
Your secret's out
And everyone knows
What you did
Though you broke no laws
And had no morals
You tricked the minds
Of fellow soldiers
They gave their life
Just for you
And trusting you
With all they had
But you didn't care
And just walked away
Cuz your heart turned cold
Like touching Coal.
Sets, how's that?
xDD
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Second-In-Command-Of-Hell
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 12:57 pm
Second-In-Command-Of-Hell At the age of ten
I saw the truth
The lies you told
Your secret's out
And everyone knows
What you did
Though you broke no laws
And had no morals
You tricked the minds
Of fellow soldiers
They gave their life
Just for you
And trusting you
With all they had
But you didn't care
And just walked away
Cuz your heart turned cold
Like touching Coal.
Sets, how's that?
xDD Good but i do recall this beign the poem I yelled at you about. xP
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 1:01 pm
Faded-Stars Second-In-Command-Of-Hell At the age of ten
I saw the truth
The lies you told
Your secret's out
And everyone knows
What you did
Though you broke no laws
And had no morals
You tricked the minds
Of fellow soldiers
They gave their life
Just for you
And trusting you
With all they had
But you didn't care
And just walked away
Cuz your heart turned cold
Like touching Coal.
Sets, how's that?
xDD Good but i do recall this beign the poem I yelled at you about. xP
I dun remember...xDDD
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Second-In-Command-Of-Hell
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 1:15 pm
Second-In-Command-Of-Hell Faded-Stars Second-In-Command-Of-Hell At the age of ten
I saw the truth
The lies you told
Your secret's out
And everyone knows
What you did
Though you broke no laws
And had no morals
You tricked the minds
Of fellow soldiers
They gave their life
Just for you
And trusting you
With all they had
But you didn't care
And just walked away
Cuz your heart turned cold
Like touching Coal.
Sets, how's that?
xDD Good but i do recall this beign the poem I yelled at you about. xP
I dun remember...xDDDI think I yelled at you and called you a democrat. rofl
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