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 Posted: Tue Mar 28, 2006 7:51 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 4:56 pm
...since no one seems to be reading (That I know of anyways), I'm going to put the next chapter up anyways. Hokay?
Gotta go find it though... *what did I title it again?*
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 5:18 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 5:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 01, 2006 9:10 pm
I read it all! I thought it was relly good. I'm not incredibly familiar with Eternia, but I can follow along. I like your plot concept. It fits better than some of the things I've thought of......(we won't go into that....)
Although being really serious than using a word like "splat" sort of kills the seriousness, but I thought it worked.
Overall, I'd like to see where this goes! Keep it up! 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 4:43 am
Sound effects usually kill the tone don't they, XD. If I think of an action and a sound that's going to happen, I really picture that sound/action, even if it doesn't make sense.
Though... I probably should be more careful as far as my word choosing next time. Thank you very much for reading and your critique.
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Posted: Fri Jun 02, 2006 7:24 am
You're welcome. I can't wait to read more! wink
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Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 9:18 am
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