What's Missing? Please help! ~ Update 7-15: New Avi

[Aidylasia Fyrestar]

cat_gonk I feel like something is missing! cat_gonk
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So, I threw this little avi together, really love her cat_4laugh - but, it seriously feels off, like there should be something else there. cat_stare cat_sweatdrop

Anyone got suggestions? Thanks!
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~New Avi, please let me know what you think would make it better!~

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 234,813p
• 1 Felicia's Graceful Shoes 2p
• 1 Blue High School Skirt 1p
• 1 Blue High School Uniform Top 2p
• 1 White Bakeneko Ears 59p
• 1 White Bakeneko Facepaint 1p
• 1 White Bakeneko Top 13p
• 1 White Neko Cosplay 135p
• 1 Uncanny Form 4,114p
• 1 Black Lacquer Chopsticks 1p
• 1 Bad Moon 26,934p
• 1 Silver Champagne Party Hair Ribbon 3p
• 1 Altair's Honor 3,397p
• 1 Kitsuko's Shimmer 2,668p
• 1 Navy Investigator Purse 1p
• 1 Bunma 8,498p
• 1 Cosmic Live May Day 6,111p
• 1 Daiyokai the Nori Warrior 4,531p
• 1 Classic Resolute Resolve 178,336p

 

[Aidylasia Fyrestar]

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gaia_moon Old ~Missing Item~ Entries gaia_sakura
gaia_star The Rainbow Slasher gaia_star

gaia_nitemareleft Much thanks and credit to Aeternam & Hekiko for your suggestions and assitance in fixing her up! gaia_angelright

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 160,987p
• 1 Astra: Eternal Heartbeat 1p
• 1 Vivid Gatekeeper 48,729p
• 1 Purrsuasion Party 11,813p
• 1 Dancing Lights 143p
• 1 Her CMYK Delight 7,350p
• 1 Garage Band Lovey 13,253p
• 1 Puff Power 5,894p
• 1 Elusive Vibrant Visitor 43,921p
• 1 Monster! Project 17,803p
• 1 Red's Psychedelic Nobody 3,027p
• 1 Sirens intriguing Majoko Eyes 1,812p
• 1 Lori The Smooth Vamp 7,238p

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Update!

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 478,105p
• 1 Astra: Eternal Heartbeat 1p
• 1 Vivid Gatekeeper 48,729p
• 1 Purrsuasion Party 11,813p
• 1 Dancing Lights 141p
• 1 CMYK's Sketchbook 22,889p
• 1 Her CMYK Delight 7,350p
• 1 Feeling Lucky in CMYK 2,462p
• 1 Garage Band Lovey 13,253p
• 1 Puff Power 5,894p
• 1 Elusive Vibrant Visitor 43,921p
• 1 Monster! Project 17,803p
• 1 Red's Psychedelic Nobody 3,011p
• 1 Sirens intriguing Majoko Eyes 1,812p
• 1 Dimples 20,442p
• 1 Lori The Smooth Vamp 7,216p
• 1 Nose Knows 9,990p
• 1 Gift of Iridescent Cloud 261,372p

~ yum_greengrape Citrus Crush yum_orangesegment ~
gaia_angelleft Much thanks to DawnLuna, Moxalunos, Aeternam, & Vosca for your excellent advice and suggestions! gaia_nitemareright

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 29,396p
• 1 Secret Character B 5,058p
• 1 Selachii's Sour Drift 3,480p
• 1 Citrus Snowflake Gloom 2,606p
• 1 Sticky Lime Marmalade 3,207p
• 1 Good Luck Sour Artist-kun 707p
• 1 Maneki's Citrus Amewsment 842p
• 1 Citrus Cat Calling 1,618p
• 1 Mr. Fresh Froguccino 11,874p

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cat_mrgreen Update! cat_mrgreen

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 127,669p
• 1 Refreshing Lemon 802p
• 1 Majestic Commander 2,411p
• 1 Secret Character B 4,562p
• 2 Exorsavages 3,867p
• 1 Best Citrus Love 1,540p
• 1 Sunkissed Mr. Froguccino 10,591p
• 1 Citrus Snowflake Gloom 2,606p
• 1 Cute Cosmic Sidra 5,829p
• 1 Sticky Lime Marmalade 3,202p
• 1 Good Luck Sour Artist-kun 707p
• 1 Citrus Cat Calling 4,410p
• 1 Mr. Fresh Froguccino 11,948p
• 1 Gift of Bee's Knees 75,189p

If I can get Marmalade Splash or Sticky Lemon Marmalade, the finished product will be:

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 117,775p
• 1 Refreshing Lemon 802p
• 1 Majestic Commander 2,411p
• 1 Secret Character B 4,562p
• 1 Mr. Froguccino 8,316p
• 2 Exorsavages 3,867p
• 1 Best Citrus Love 1,540p
• 1 Citrus Snowflake Gloom 2,606p
• 1 Good Luck Sour Artist-kun 707p
• 1 Citrus Cat Calling 4,410p
• 1 Mr. Fresh Froguccino 11,948p
• 1 Gift of Bee's Knees 75,189p
• 1 Marmalade Splash 1,411p

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 120,050p
• 1 Refreshing Lemon 802p
• 1 Majestic Commander 2,411p
• 1 Secret Character B 4,562p
• 2 Exorsavages 3,867p
• 1 Best Citrus Love 1,540p
• 1 Citrus Snowflake Gloom 2,606p
• 1 Good Luck Sour Artist-kun 707p
• 1 Citrus Cat Calling 4,410p
• 1 Mr. Fresh Froguccino 11,948p
• 1 Marmalade Splash 1,411p
• 1 Gift of Bee's Knees 75,189p
• 1 Sunkissed Mr. Froguccino 10,591p

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 121,406p
• 1 Refreshing Lemon 802p
• 1 Majestic Commander 2,411p
• 1 Secret Character B 4,562p
• 2 Exorsavages 3,867p
• 1 Best Citrus Love 1,540p
• 1 Citrus Snowflake Gloom 2,606p
• 1 Good Luck Sour Artist-kun 707p
• 1 Citrus Cat Calling 4,410p
• 2 Mr. Fresh Froguccino 23,896p
• 1 Marmalade Splash 1,411p
• 1 Gift of Bee's Knees 75,189p

cat_ninja Nameless Child Ninja cat_ninja
gaia_nitemareleft Much thanks to DawnLuna & GH0ULFRIEND for the suggestions! gaia_angelright

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 334,055p
• 1 Wisteria 88,873p
• 1 Astrologer's Cosmic Path 1,395p
• 1 Natural Elf Reflection 96,151p
• 1 Lover's Chuu~! 7,892p
• 1 Flatline Mask 577p
• 1 Doki Doki Halo 7,333p
• 1 Perky Paper Potential 4,187p
• 1 Reserved Hidden Assassin 117,632p
• 1 Shady Lady Akumei 10,012p

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 558,543p
• 1 Wisteria 63,214p
• 1 Sooty Knit Snip Buck 3,283p
• 1 Natural Elf Reflection 96,151p
• 1 Club Cub 39,854p
• 1 Astrologer's Eternal Path 14,754p
• 1 Lover's Chuu~! 8,571p
• 1 Flatline Mask 577p
• 1 Perky Paper Potential 4,956p
• 1 Reserved Hidden Assassin 117,632p
• 1 Shady Lady Akumei 9,809p
• 1 Mossy Shear Gravity Sky 199,739p

emotion_skull The Ghost emotion_ghost
gaia_angelleft Many thanks to DawnLuna for assisting me in fixing her up! gaia_nitemareright

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 116,796p
• 1 Compass of Seidh 88,818p
• 1 Bellissimo Pianoforte 412p
• 1 Bold Blossoming Headband 1p
• 4 Ruined Souls 4,789p
• 1 Everlasting Amadea 136p
• 1 Cheruboss 9,853p
• 1 Sleepy Dark Etoile 6,782p
• 1 Stellaris' Dark Locks 6,003p
• 1 Pure Usa Usa Chan 0p

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gaia_sakura Completed gaia_pawstamp

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 1,014,882p
• 1 Compass of Seidh 88,818p
• 1 Bellissimo Pianoforte 204p
• 4 Ruined Souls 22,026p
• 1 Everlasting Amadea 45p
• 1 Cheruboss 9,853p
• 1 Sleepy Dark Etoile 27,454p
• 1 Nose Knows 9,082p
• 1 Stellaris' Dark Locks 8,018p
• 1 Magical Sweeping Gale 265,149p
• 1 Pure Usa Usa Chan 584,228p

 

[Aidylasia Fyrestar]

gaia_angelleft The following are the suggestions made on the old thread, thank you again! gaia_nitemareright

::From Aeternam::

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Aeternam

Aidylasia Fyrestar

I played around with her a little using your invo. I wanted to balance out /add a little black.

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 434,207p
• 1 Astra: Eternal Heartbeat 1p
• 1 Vivid Stroll 556p
• 1 Vivid Gatekeeper 48,729p
• 1 Purrsuasion Party 11,813p
• 1 Dancing Lights 143p
• 1 Her CMYK Delight 7,350p
• 1 Puff Power 5,894p
• 1 Seven Vivid Kisses 1,454p
• 2 Elusive Vibrant Visitor 87,842p
• 1 Sirens intriguing Majoko Eyes 1,812p
• 1 Lori The Smooth Vamp 7,238p
• 1 Gift of Iridescent Cloud 261,372p

Aeternam

Aidylasia Fyrestar

Aeternam

Aidylasia Fyrestar

I played around with her a little using your invo. I wanted to balance out /add a little black.

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• TOTAL MARKET VALUE: 434,207p
• 1 Astra: Eternal Heartbeat 1p
• 1 Vivid Stroll 556p
• 1 Vivid Gatekeeper 48,729p
• 1 Purrsuasion Party 11,813p
• 1 Dancing Lights 143p
• 1 Her CMYK Delight 7,350p
• 1 Puff Power 5,894p
• 1 Seven Vivid Kisses 1,454p
• 2 Elusive Vibrant Visitor 87,842p
• 1 Sirens intriguing Majoko Eyes 1,812p
• 1 Lori The Smooth Vamp 7,238p
• 1 Gift of Iridescent Cloud 261,372p

cat_sweatdrop Um, not sure what poses from what items you used, by the way 0.o like the white back skirt thing. Also, what created the yellow part on the chest? Sorry...was looking thru them, and couldn't figure it out... cat_crying cat_redface

No worries... the yellow part was the Seven Vivid Kisses tank top. The white skirt came from your tail item so you can ignore that if you like the tail better.
I do like the nose...not sure about the bow. Oooh try the Feeling Lucky in CYMK sunglasses. Those are less than 3kp in the MP

::From Hekiko::

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Hekiko

Picking up a nose would help make the face more focused/complete. Mimi Neko (and recolors) or Noble Commander (and recolors) are two good/cheap options with nose poses.

 

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Aeternam

Hekiko

Vosca

Moxalunos

DawnLuna

GH0ULFRIEND

 

[Aidylasia Fyrestar]

gaia_angelleft Now Open for Suggestions! gaia_nitemareright