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 Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 6:55 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:24 am
First of all, I like it.
The topic you've chosen get expressed easily.
I don't still quite get it why so many English-writing poets choose to get along so stricktly with rhytm and rhyme. Nevertheless, it's quite good here.
smile
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 9:10 am
Simple, with lots of expression and emotion. It's simple kind of descriptiveness gave me a good image.
Kudos! =D
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Posted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:28 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 7:20 pm
I have a huge bias for romance, so I'm not gonna critique. I'm really bad at it anyways . . . and there's nothing to critique, really. I really liked it.
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