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I'm moving this here from my forum until I finish my new site, since my current one's kinda dead. I have MB's permission.

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Alright, Key and me have made some changes to this topic based on the changes you guys wanted, and some other stuff. So... Please re-read everything and tell us if there is anything you dislike, or would like to add. Though preferably not more characters.. We have a LOT of those.. We particularly need help with some of the people we don't know all that well, or at all.

And for anyone who's new to this whole thing, like Malon or Platinum Dragon, if they read this, here's a rough explanation. This is a comic me and my sister Key have been trying to complete, and it was going to have a lot of people from Ncity, and some other places.. Or whatever.. And for those such people I do not really know, MB is the one who suggested to put you all in. You know, so you don't think I'm some creepy stalker, who's decided to put you in this comic.

Also, the comic is officially titled "Utter Misfortune" due to the fact that it has.. Well, a lot of misfortune in it. It has also been pretty much decided to be hand drawn, with Key drawing it, and me doing the coloring on the computer, and adding text bubbles and any required special effects, if there are going to be any.

I, of course, still need to varify what people want to look like and how they act. There are also going to be.. A bunch of villains later that will look sort of like us and act like our evil oposites. I need to make sure people are ok with them.

Oh, yes, and one last thing. I have now alpabetized all the characters. Er, the ones based off real people anyways.

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---People who have given permission to be in the comic---

(Axle)
Looks: Human, mostly. Has sharp teeth, red eyes, long white hair, and dark skin. Is also able to alter DNA to become nearly anything.
Personality: ...How do describe this.... Oh, yeah. Multiple personalities.. Yeah. Fears Rilla and the Gullywacker. Is TG's rival. Is training to become a Druid. His shapeshifting abilities are powerful, but unstable and easy to overload.
Evil Personality: Is very rude, sarcastic, and a general jerk. Is shockingly smart and sane compared to Axle, and has his same abilities to boot, though uses them much more effectively.

(Black Dragon)
Looks: Baggy clothes, shaggy hair. Basicaly what I really do look like. Height is 6'2.
Personality: Laid back, easy-going
Evil Personality: Beserk. Almost like I've gone off the edge and snapped.

(Dragon)
Looks: Skateboarding Punk Ninja.
Personality: Wants money, and can sometimes try to hurt people minorly from time to time. (Shove someone off a high place when somehow getting into their dream, for example.) Also hates Axle. (You'd have good reason to hate me. I have multiple personalities, some quite insane, in the comic.) Immensely amused by destruction. Likes mischief. Constantly teams up with TG for adventures and mischief.
Evil Personality: Utterly destructive. Pretty much all.

(Faith)
Looks: Like the... Brown Djinni from Golden Sun. It's the Venus one, right? Key wants you to have hands. (She's freaking out.)
Personality: Sometimes irritable, largely to the insane people. Pretty normal, sometimes vicous. Nearly un-beatable by anyone else. Never fights, but never gets hit.
Evil Personality: Plotting, very intelligent, and one of the smartest of the evil people. (Not saying their names.)

(Fox)
Looks: Like the Fox from Star Fox Adventures, kind of tall but not really more than anyone else, rather dashing.
Personality: Cool, adventurous, daring. Can become easily bored sometimes. Can be very serious and determined about his job but any other time he's a bit of a party animal. Is very polite but not nearly so on bad days. Somewhat of a bounty hunter? Comic relief that makes lame jokes sometimes that still manage to amuse though.
Evil Personality: Sarcastic, a bit snappy at times (yet still pretty polite), and very focused on no monkey business. Despite being a party pooper, he has his "episodes" where he is just downright insane, and sings songs and runs around pretending to be a racecar, complete with car noises.

(Gamer)
Looks: Humanoid Kangaroo, height 6'1, wearing a short sleeved white shirt and slightly dark blue, blue jeans, no shoes. Has a fur pattern like an arrow on feet.
Personality: One of the sanest and most normal people in the comic. Expert with machinery and robotics, and sometimes gets a bit obsessed with them. A complete expert at videogames and puzzles. Gets distracted easily.
Evil Personality: Never ever stops talking, and acts crazy and weird. Uses machines for evil purposes.

(Genowing)
Looks: Like the puppet from Super Mario RPG crossed with Wizardmon from Digimon, but purple, and can fly. Has a small animal the size of a chinchilla (a Genamon) on his shoulder, resembles Renamon and Gatomon from Digimon.
Personality: A weird dude that somehow has a few Major power sources (5 Star dragon ball and the purple chaos emrald) and is constly createing stuff for people, Showing up at random times with a plot or equipment and then dissapeering into thin air.
Evil Personality: A Bizzaro Geno, You know like Bizzaro from super man?
He thinks he is Geno and looks like a Zombie Geno but everything he does goes wrong.

(Keyshe)
Looks: Like a green space monkey, A.K.A., a Koon.
Personality: The cause of much pain and misfortune. Carefree, and somehow thinks she is beneficial to everyone. (I am helping! I am helping!)
Evil Personality: Utterly unstable and unpredictable. Nearly unstoppable.

(Kirbyiscute A.K.A. KIC)
Looks: Blue kirby with a purple flower on top of head. Occasionally seen with a labcoat and clipboard. Often has a white cloud around, for her to fly or float on.
Personality: Sometimes random, and extremely smart. Even owns a secret laboratory, with Key as her assistant. Is Shyguy obsessive, and often hugs them. When in a bad mood, will became violent at times, and will bite and throw bricks.
Evil Personality: Psychotic, vicious scientist. Creates extremely dangerous experiments.

(Malon)
Personality: Normaly nice and calm, can get a little crazed at times, but knows how to kick a**. Weapons include bow, sword, pool stick, cuccos, and Gloomy the Bear...
Evil Personality: Has no kindness, exact opposite, rarely speaks but when she does hell breaks loose and death awaits those in her path... Has crimson eyes and a black/gray shall
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(Gloomy the Bear)
Looks: Gloomy can come in many colors, pink being the orgianal, has blood on paws and cheast after killing
Personalyty: Dont make fun of him.... oh and he will kill without warning... tears apart people with ease... eats people... kills people...

(Marth)
Looks: Felix from Golden Sun.
Personality: Completly insane. Often makes dramatic entrances and stuff like that. Can be calmly handling a situation and then flip out yelling at whoever's nearest. His mood is almost never predictable. Trys to hit on every other girl he sees with success. Sometimes a bit destructive.
Evil Personality: Utterly quiet and still, only acting when it's needed.

(Marx Gainsborough)
Looks: Like a little 7-year old. Blond hair, not exactly messy, but it doen't look lik much effort was put in to comb it. occasionly has a small buster sword equpid
Personality: Extreamly naive, but at the same time, knows many things he shouldn't.(Ex: "Where to babys come from?" and then the fact he knows how to blacksmith. 0_o) Almost constantly happy, but when he is sad he usually sits secluded with Fuzzie(See below) gathering his thoughts. Knows way too many sword attacks than a seven-year old should know. (Take a look at his last name. Zach was his dad.)
Evil Personality: Nearly all ways wearing a scowl. Doesn't know of many sword techniques, but because he is a teenager, he is a much stronger. Seems to lack common sense.
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(Fuzzie)
Looks: Marx's Golden retriver puppy. Its weapon is small chocobo attack claws. (See chocobo's Dungeon)
Personality: Very loyal to Marx. Would never hurt a fly, unless it was commanded to. (What? They're crunchy!) Extreamly docile untill riled.
Evil Personality: Very loyal to Evil Marx. Interesting note is that it cannot tell the reguler and normal Marx's apart. Is ready to rip anything apart, weather given a command to or not..

(MetalBowser)
Looks: Like bowser, though a bit smaller and nicer looking. Often has a checkbook.
Personality: Nice, obsessed with money. You know, the usual tycoon thing. Runs Bowser's Bar, and the Bowsers Bar chain. Sometimes gets into making machinery with Gamer. Reasonably normal and sane. Has a mysterious journal with all the secrets of our past in it, but mostly the secrets of BabyBowser, Spike, TG, Fox, Gamer, Faith, Marth, Rilla, Geno, and Platinum Dragon's pasts.
Evil Personality: Very animal like, vicious, and likes to burn valuables belonging to other people.

(Rilla)
Looks: Like Celia from Harvest Moon except with a blue dress, and slightly older, height 5'5.
Personality: Sanest character in comic. Later gets a farm, and runs the inn. Likes writing (Later gets possessed by and evil pen.. Probably.) Also wields the Gullywacker, one of Axle's greatest weaknesses in his times of insanity. Is also a Jedi, and wields a lightsaber sometimes. Often deals with.. lIeutenant Kettch appearing and saying "Yub! Yub! Commander!".. (Rilla, I'm expecting a lot of detail on this from you..)
Evil Personality: Rude, and sarcastic. Other than that mostly normal evil things. Is also a Sith. Wields energy gullywackers and a Darth Maul style lightsaber.

Toad
Looks: Like a toad, from mario.
Personality: Really random, strange, and mischievious. Giddy as a school girl, annoying sometimes, hyper, frantic, curious...always offering to save peoples games, yet still couragous for such a small guy and always wanting to help and always getting in the way, but still very lovable.
Evil Personality: Calm, Quite, Very Intelligent, Enjoys Tea Time, Does not like to fight or do anything wild (haha thought that his evil personality should be opposite from his regular personality)

(Topgun)
Looks: Like Sora from Kingdom Hearts, height 5'6.
Personality: Ninja-like sometimes. Both likes and greatly fears Keyshe. Can sometimes act paranoid, but is usually right. Likes mischief. Is Axle's rival. Likes Tifa and melts to mush around her. Is very skilled with electricity and lightning magic. Always pesters Rilla about her "evil side, Lil' Debby" which may, or may not really exist, and writes random notes about "Lil' Debby" for no obvious reason.
Evil Personality: Acts like a wild, rabid animal.




---People we need permission/confirmation from---

(Baby Bowser and Koopa Kid-Her Baby-)
Looks: Unknown, possibly only off-panel.
Personality: Often tells people to be quiet for the baby during odd times, other than that, some help here?
Evil Personality: N/A, some help here?

(FireYoshi)
Looks: A red yoshi.
Personality: Often quiet, and primarily observes the insanity. Often never gets caught in it. Or cause or add to it. Odd things happen around him, but no one can point the blame at him.
Evil Personality: Never talks. Ever. No matter what. And pops out of no where. Utterly serious.

(Lin)
Looks: Like that... Guy... From Baten Kaitos?? But, more like an actual girl.. Right?
Personality: Sane, and handles fights and problems. Jumps in and saves the day when everythings hopeless. Second only to Rilla in sanity and skill. Always has Peanut Butter Cups to spare.
Evil Personality: Finds people alone and takes them out, fast and swift, and leaves them curled up and terrified.

(Platinum Dragon)
Looks: ...While normal, I don't know. So I need some help. Can transform into a platinum colored dragon that is very powerful.
Personality: Smart, courageous, rather sane... Some help here?
Evil Personality: N/A, some help here?

(Shadow/Kaiser/Kael --- PICK ONE!)
Looks: What the #$&*% do you want to look like?!?!??!!? Keyshe says "Make him a pink bunny!" .......
Personality: N/A, need some help here.
Evil Personality: N/A, need some help here.

(Spike)
Looks: A small, cute dog.
Personality: Is obsessed with videogame girls and women. Sometimes a tad irritating to some of the more irritable characters. A bit strange from time to time. Considerably random. CAN be sane from time to time.
Evil Personality: Utterly annoying. Knows exactly how to drive someone up the wall, in ANY case.

(Yoshi)
Looks: Like a yoshi.
Personality: Weird, and strange, but in a sane way, unlike most others. Well knowledges in combat, and an incredible commander in battle. El Capitain of his own secret army.
Evil Personality: Sneaky, and good at not being seen and getting everyone to fight each other. Often takes care of a job without any help. Also has a sock puppet, he never takes off, and treats like a real person, his boss in fact. Makes it talk to other people too. And talks to it himself.



---NRPs (NRP = Not Real People) XD---
Hekey
Jazkey
Nokey
Light
Chinese Master
Tifa
Shyguy
Japanese Master
Kuja
Goomba
Malon (The Malon from Zelda)
Axel Sikari
Wolfcry
Bob the Mantid
The Inuyasha crew
The ScRYed crew
The One Piece crew
Solid Snake
Magma Dragoon
Mattrix
Blaze Heatnix
Ground Scaravich
That MegamanX7 fire maverick (The name has slipped my mind)
Burn Rooster
Ganondorf
Andross
The Starfox crew
Samus
Dark Samus
Space Pirates
Link
Bowser
Mario
Luigi

......and more.



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Also, Key and me have realized an issue, one that will probably not come up for a while, but will probably come up eventually.. Copyrights (Dun dun DUN).. I don't think it will be an issue for the NRPs, but for the main characters. Some of them, like MB, for example, are kind of in a twilight zone between being owned by the original person and the company the character's design is based off.. Or the character.... Of the company....... Thing...

Either way, you get my point.. We might get a cease and desist order... Or a restraining order.. (Miyamoto: "Stay away from me!") *Ahem* So for some of the characters, the ones whose design is based off a copyrighted character or thing, we kind of need to make your designs a little more general. For example, we're dropping the Etecoon thing, and instead are calling them Koons, and making some slight design changes. So Key isn't an Etecoon anymore, she's a Koon. Rilla and Gamer are fine. But MB, for instance, should be changed from a definite Koopa/Bowser to more of a giant turtle thingy. I hope no one minds this, and if anyone has some suggestions for how their character should be changed or how they'd like it to be changed, feel free to tell us.

For Marth (Key: "Oh #$(*! Oh man- *Cough* *Cough* -Whoa, it went up my nose...") .....Yes. Now, Key has a suggestion that we can keep the same clothes as Felix, but change the ornament designs, and maybe slight color change. A different haircut would be great, too, but might not be necessary.

For TG, Key thinks you could have the Keyblade (Heh heh.. KEY thinks you could have a KEYblade.. *Snicker*), her other suggestions are to make it more generic, like maybe a Naruto haircut and goggles, and to modify the outfit so it isn't a direct Sora. Key was also curious if you wanted to be african-american (Or, black, if you prefer), in the comic.

For KIC, it shouldn't be too big a deal, I mean, she's blue, not pink. We could change the design a bit, like maybe fingers, a little different of feet and eyes..

For the others, just stray a little from the original design.. Like Faith could be a little brown monster.. Thingy.......

You know, just different little bits and things to change.

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And of course, there's some people who don't exactly come here or that I don't know how to contact.. there's still a few. Like Lin, or BabyBowser.

Um, I look like a Cross between Geno from SMRPG and Wizardmon from digimon

'k. Will edit.

Oh, and I remember TG had some issues with his evil personality. His last post was:



And I did remember that I added at some point:



But that was still part of the same personality: Crazy, drooling, insane freak in a straight jacket sort of concept. Still want me to change it, TG?

well perhaps Utter Misfortune should be more based around our gaia guild friends. like I don't even remember the last time i talked to Shadow...

and a lot of the intro to the comic idea is as if everyone understands what's going on...perhaps make the post more introductory to the comic idea...

overall idk, just review the post and make sure everything makes sense

....Utter Misfortune?....

*Nods*

Pretty much it.

There is going to be a main plotline that will last a while, with specific villains.. but it's hard to explain and I don't want to give any spoilers.

sorry didn't mean to offend confused
whatever...i'm just thinking if you bring it here, make sure people understand...because i think that you, me, key, gamer, rilla, and tg are really the only ones who are entirly filled in on this one
EDIT:Don't forget Geno

and apparently geno razz

but if you think it's set, then i trust you

Oh yeah, i remember now. I think you should fix this paragraph, because really it applies to Terrorlord's dungeon moreso then it does here. That's the biggest thing I think that was bothering me.