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Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2005 1:18 pm
Rage war My gun held tight at hand my eyes narrow I scan the faces of the mass I look for weak and young I fire with eye's of burnt rage. The young fall, The weak fall. I fire into the mass my rage now a smoreder there blood pooled about the ground
I step froward crushing hands with my boots looking for movement A young boy jerked up his face covered in blood His hand trapped under my boot his scearms were of terror One shot to the skull, he now lay still
I walked on my clip held more rounds More blessing's of darkness More hollow pointed slayers
A tear roll down my cheek it was the 8th town this week You'd think I grow to forget their faces. But you could never understand.
I' am the protoctor of the U.S.A I' ve stoped the evil known as women and childern
The stroy of my youth The flame was still in the night The dark sky hung still from the stars A shrap blade shined in the dull light. The swing of the blade sliced the tree trunk in two.
The blade was held by a young man he was dressed in rags The blade swong again another tree in two
The sound of horses near A single knight on a black horse he face covered his body in armor. no sword in his hand
The hemlet removed the face of rage his fist smashed into the boys face he yelled in words of hate and mock
The knight grabbed the blade he was gone in the night the young man's dreams broken his nose bleeding
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 5:50 am
Nice, very anti-war, but i like it. one or two typos, or spelling errors, but good none the less.
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 10:51 am
MelanthaB Nice, very anti-war, but i like it. one or two typos, or spelling errors, but good none the less. Hehe Thank you!
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