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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 12:24 pm
A/N: -sticks tongue out- Beware the craptastic-ness. surprised S' in our favorite guy's point of view. ;D
Prologue.
I really don't understand this. I was so careful about it. But maybe that was it. Maybe I was just too careful for my own good. But it was, no, is, obvious to see how much I care about her. Jude knows. Tommy knows. Kwest knows. Sadie knows. Dammit, I think even Liam knows! But she doesn't. Or her no-good loser of a boyfriend, either. But I'm not biased. I mean, just because he stole her away from me doesn't mean I'm not blind. He doesn't deserve her. I'm not even the slightest bit jealous, either. I couldn't be jealous, it's not me. I just can't. Nana wouldn't approve.
Oh. Who am I, you now ask? I'm just that kid who...I don't know, let the girl of his dreams just walk away without a second glance. Hmph, but bear in mind, one day I'll get the girl. Damn, that just sounded like it came straight out of a Disney movie. But back to my self-bashing, okay? I'm idiotic, geeky, too hesitant, too insecure, just too-
"Jamie!"
I whip around to see her flashing the brightest smile at me. I manage to grin, too, until I catch sight of his arm wrapped around her waist. The smile vanished from my face quicker than you'd imagine. Here I was, my eyes glued to my sneakers as the chilly fall wind nipped at me as I then clutched my jacket tighter. "Hey, Jamesters, my man," he announced in a cheery tone from her side. I could actually feel myself visibly wince. Jamesters? His man? Pffft. I am Jamie Andrews, sir, a respectable employee at G Major. Now excuse me while I vomit in disgust to your pathetic pet name for me.
In my mind's eye, of course. It wouldn't be too pretty hurling in front of her.
"Jamesters? Nice." Another one's voice called, as said woman's figure appeared next to mine, a man by her. I jumped and nearly fell over because of shock. Hah, wait till I give them my best glare! No. Wait. Stop laughing, dammit! I command you! Right, you all bloody know how to make a man feel confident. Honestly..
"Sorry," Jude Harrison chuckled, Tommy grinning appreciatively and nodding. I swear, ever since she became legal and got with Mr.I-Used-To-Shake-My-a**-In-The-90's, she's been glowing with happiness. But I guess I /should/ be happy for them, I suppose. Hey, maybe I can be best man at the wedding. If there is one...which, there should be. Or I'll have to kick Quincy's a**.
Ahem. Yes, I would so! Huh, you doubt me? I am fully capable of a**-kickage, thank you very much!
Or. I could give him really dirty looks. You know, that works too. Mmhmm.
"Hey, can we just finish what we came here for?" she suggested, laughing. I turned and gave my attention to her. She really did look beautiful. Those summers working in New York as an intern really improved her self-confidence. At the time it was like he wasn't there, either. I was just looking at Kat Benton, my best friend for all these years.
"There's this soft look in your eyes when you look at that girl,"Tom muttered under his breath beside me,"You shouldn't try to lose that." I felt the heat rush to my face, as I faked a small choking fit to explain for my now-scarlet face to the others. Tommy's eyes shone with knowing as Jude and Kat cast concerned looks at me.
Damn. Everyone knows except the girl who matters the most.
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:20 pm
I like it. NOW TYPE A CHAPTER AND NOT A PROLOGUE
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r i n g p o p Ri0T Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 3:33 pm
Awww, I love it, it's so Jamie-like XD And I love that ;D
Keep 'em comin'
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 3:44 pm
It is very Jamie-esque and interesting. Continue, please.
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