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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:41 pm
Hello ppl. Feel free to leave comments on my writing.
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:45 pm
Here's some of my poems. Please comment!
Leave
I just want to runaway
From my problems... everything
Every passing day
Makes me think back and cringe
Why should I stay here with everyone
In a world were no one cares
Whats done is done
But... how could i dare
Say no one cares
For I know that the one true God
Is there
For me forever
So there is a reson to be here in this world
So i won't runaway, I'll stay and fight the battle
Betrayed
Why am I feeling this way?
The feeling sweeps me away
I'm all alone
Every ones gone
The rain pelts my face
It was just a race
To become better frends with the person first
Oh how i thirst
For the river of frendship
I emerge from the ship
I see now
How
I can leave my pain
How I can change
I'll keep my distance
Beause that was their last chance
Good bye friend you have hurt me to many times
You've let me in a pool of hurt
So goodbye
~~~Trust~~~
I trusted you
But you abused that trust
Secrets of the old and new
But you spreaded them out like dust
I loved you
But now I hate
All the things you do
Trying to get me back but its all to late
All I an say is that you abused a gift I entrusted with you
A gift called Trust
What do ya'll think?
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Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:50 pm
Here's another one!
Choice
A spark Of hope A light to guide you One friend to love And one to trust Another Chance Don't give up Your almost there The journey is ending You can make it The light will guide you
Choice (part 2)
Give up All hope is lost Friends betray you No chances left You won't make it Give yourself to the darkness Your troubles will end
Epilogue Which will you choose The light of guidiance or The dephs of darkness?
I decided to right this kind of beause of kingdom hearts hehe lol lol
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