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mysticrainx

PostPosted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:41 pm


Hello ppl. Feel free to leave comments on my writing.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:45 pm


Here's some of my poems. Please comment!


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I just want to runaway

From my problems... everything

Every passing day

Makes me think back and cringe

Why should I stay here with everyone

In a world were no one cares

Whats done is done

But... how could i dare

Say no one cares

For I know that the one true God

Is there

For me forever

So there is a reson to be here in this world

So i won't runaway, I'll stay and fight the battle



Betrayed

Why am I feeling this way?

The feeling sweeps me away

I'm all alone

Every ones gone

The rain pelts my face

It was just a race

To become better frends with the person first

Oh how i thirst

For the river of frendship

I emerge from the ship

I see now

How

I can leave my pain

How I can change

I'll keep my distance

Beause that was their last chance

Good bye friend you have hurt me to many times

You've let me in a pool of hurt

So goodbye

~~~Trust~~~

I trusted you

But you abused that trust

Secrets of the old and new

But you spreaded them out like dust

I loved you

But now I hate

All the things you do

Trying to get me back but its all to late

All I an say is that you abused a gift I entrusted with you

A gift called Trust


What do ya'll think?

mysticrainx


mysticrainx

PostPosted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:50 pm


Here's another one!

Choice

A spark Of hope
A light to guide you
One friend to love
And one to trust
Another Chance
Don't give up
Your almost there
The journey is ending
You can make it
The light will guide you

Choice (part 2)

Give up
All hope is lost
Friends betray you
No chances left
You won't make it
Give yourself to the darkness
Your troubles will end

Epilogue
Which will you choose
The light of guidiance
or
The dephs of darkness?

I decided to right this kind of beause of kingdom hearts hehe lol lol
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