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Darsh Engel Will Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 11:54 pm
I lie there silently
the wind rushing through my window sil
as it comes at me swiftly
washing away the pain I feel
I lose my self in the distant growl
and the sent of wet pavement wafts in
some would say it is quite foul
and to like it wold be a sin
yet I long to be out in the lane
to open my mouth and taste the rain
yet I do not, for it is naught but the tears
shed by the girl that fears
to live her life as it is meant to be lived
being taught by the boy who can't be saved.
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Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 10:57 am
I honestly don't remember writing this.....I personaly do not like it, mainly because I am not sure what I was getting at. sweatdrop
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Darsh Engel Will Vice Captain
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Darsh Engel Will Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:12 pm
HOLY s**t!!!!!!!!! I GET IT! I know what I was saying...and now I like it lol sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 9:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 5:09 am
so your the boy who cant be saved? Who is the girl crying???
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:58 pm
It has a couple of interpritations....in one you could say I was the boy who could not be saved, I am also the main char. Which leaves the girl who fears...that person obviously is someone I know and care about...and yet there is another. the girl is humanity and the boy is Jesu or God....after all they can not be saved for who could really save them?
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Darsh Engel Will Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 13, 2006 7:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 12:10 am
sorry if it confused you more lol it made sense to me, but that isn't saying much lol
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Darsh Engel Will Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:59 am
no, I think I got it... its just I usually see different then others.. like if I saw a poem that said
run happy puppy,
play in the sun
play happy puppy
have your fun...
some would say its boring and happy ish...
this poem tells me that the happy puppy is about to face truoble.. for why else would someone tell the puppy to have fun? or maybe look at the person they seem to be watching this happy puppy...it says have your fun, as if the person is not having fun or feels trapped.. I dont know...
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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:49 am
I like it! It has a feeling of.. emptiness? not quite the word I was looking for. Anyway, it's nice. biggrin
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