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sorrows saille

PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2006 9:23 am


i was alone my haert was cold like a stone but
there was no moss
and that night i did not dance because i was alone
so i did not dance
i shuffled through life invsable to all the happy
couples who would mock me with there merry laughter
*feeble laughter*
and the only sound in the silent world
was the rusty hammer of my heart
nailing away at the hatred in my soul

but then you came....
and showed me things i have never seen before
like the snoflake on the eye of a startled dear
or a dog that smokes a pipe and played poker
a picture which i had prevously thought was rubbish
or the duck that lands so clumbsly on a frozen pond in
winter but the power of our intocsicating love turned the
cataclisming act into an atriggermorphic drama

and then you left, and i would die a thousand deaths
and would die a thousand more!
i thought you were an angel but you turned out to be a hore!
it seemed a bit vaque but why did you have o sleep with grieg
oh hes got a tatoo
obviously carving your name into my forhead with a compass
wasn't enough for you!

the snoflake on the eye of the deer,
has turned to puss that oozes from an open wound
the deer now blinded stumbles into a reveine
the duck lies shredded in a pancake
and the dog has moved from the pipe to 60
ciggarettes and coughs the rest of his life away
IN YOUR BETRAIL!!!
PostPosted: Sat May 27, 2006 1:20 pm


Wow, the title lead me to think this poem would be about something else entirely. Still, well done.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:02 am


robert don't copy other peoples work!!!
(by the way peeps this poem is by bill baily)
it's more of a song!!!
and you could get done for copyright enfringement!
(soz if it's not bill baily..)
PostPosted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:00 am


it isn't bill baily because i only used one paragraph which was some of the betryal verse the rest was my own words edited and i used the tempo of it so there

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