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Posted: Fri May 26, 2006 9:23 am
i was alone my haert was cold like a stone but there was no moss and that night i did not dance because i was alone so i did not dance i shuffled through life invsable to all the happy couples who would mock me with there merry laughter *feeble laughter* and the only sound in the silent world was the rusty hammer of my heart nailing away at the hatred in my soul
but then you came.... and showed me things i have never seen before like the snoflake on the eye of a startled dear or a dog that smokes a pipe and played poker a picture which i had prevously thought was rubbish or the duck that lands so clumbsly on a frozen pond in winter but the power of our intocsicating love turned the cataclisming act into an atriggermorphic drama
and then you left, and i would die a thousand deaths and would die a thousand more! i thought you were an angel but you turned out to be a hore! it seemed a bit vaque but why did you have o sleep with grieg oh hes got a tatoo obviously carving your name into my forhead with a compass wasn't enough for you!
the snoflake on the eye of the deer, has turned to puss that oozes from an open wound the deer now blinded stumbles into a reveine the duck lies shredded in a pancake and the dog has moved from the pipe to 60 ciggarettes and coughs the rest of his life away IN YOUR BETRAIL!!!
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Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 1:20 pm
Wow, the title lead me to think this poem would be about something else entirely. Still, well done.
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:02 am
robert don't copy other peoples work!!! (by the way peeps this poem is by bill baily) it's more of a song!!! and you could get done for copyright enfringement! (soz if it's not bill baily..)
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:00 am
it isn't bill baily because i only used one paragraph which was some of the betryal verse the rest was my own words edited and i used the tempo of it so there
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