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Maiden of Night

PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 8:22 am


This is just a poem I made for someone who didn't return my feelings...

I would like to say everything...
That I have always wanted to say.
You broke my heart in every single way.
I don't know what to do without you
I wanted to be with you as long as I could be...
But you didn't have the same thoughts...

I would like to say everything...
I want you to know,
That you're in my mind,
In my dreams
And everywhere I could see.
I loved you
But now it's just too late.

I would like to say everything...
I watch you become happy,
While I am crying a river inside.
Acheive your happiness
And I'll continue looking for mine.

I would like to say everything...
Good bye.
Maybe I'll see you again sometime.
I will always love you
But maybe you feel differently for someone new.
But still...
There's a time when I have to let go.
And that time is now.

I would like to say everything...
I love you...
But good bye...
PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 12:54 pm


Very nice. Simple wording but it conveys just as much (or maybe more genuine) feeling than a string of elaborate, fanciful phrases would.

I hope writing it was therapeutic for you. Unrequited love is not an easything to bear, which you obviously know. I'm impressed that you did move on though that shows strength of character.

cherryblossomjen


Maiden of Night

PostPosted: Sat Mar 26, 2005 4:47 pm


cherryblossomjen
Very nice. Simple wording but it conveys just as much (or maybe more genuine) feeling than a string of elaborate, fanciful phrases would.

I hope writing it was therapeutic for you. Unrequited love is not an easything to bear, which you obviously know. I'm impressed that you did move on though that shows strength of character.


Thank you very much. It hurt a lot to write this poem and say good bye. But I have moved on and I think writing this poem helped. ^_^
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