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NAME: Raphael

WARRIOR NAME: Shade

AGE: 16

RACE: Angeli /Manipuli

HISTORY: Raphael comes from a long line of Manipuli. His mother, however, was one of the Angeli, the race of Angels. His father trained him, along with his sister Serenity in the art of manipulation, But he was trained in the art of sound manipulation. Raphael has been blind for his entire life and he can fly like his sister, but he relies on sound to map out his location

PROFILE:

PERSONALITY: Raphael is really not bothered with other people. He doesn't care what they think about him and he couldn't care less what they say. He's happy with who he is, although he would give anything to be able to see the sunset.

WEAPONS: Raphael uses sound manipulation, along with his staff.

LIMITATIONS/WEAKNESSES: As Raphael relies on sound to see he can be thrown off with echoes, rain or anything that causes a lot of noise.

MOTIVATION: He wants to prove that a blind man is as tough as any other man or woman warrior.

DIMENSION: Angelus

((REDONE- He's sooo much better than Serenity))
((Mistakes edited out..happy now??))

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*slaps hand to forhead*

Ay me! Ok. I can see this is going to take alot of work, so lets go through this one at a time...


Damaresk RP Advice

When you get to the 'Dimension' tab, what we need you to do here is explain a little about the dimension which your character comes from. Perhaps name it.

Also, I'm going to add another character tab called 'Motivation' under this tab you will need to explain why your character would want to go after the Rose Damaresk. This is very important. It explains what they're doing in the story in the first place.

Jay, you need to set the limit for the finalists.

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General RPG Advice

When creating a profile this is what you should put.

Just enough.

Because a profile is what the other writers use to learn about your character - and thus, what their characters know about your character - you should only put the maximum of what somebody who has just met him/her should be able to gage. We don't want to know every detail all at once. Leave some to filter in through the story as your character develops. It also helps other writers to repond naturally to these revelations.

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This is something that everyone should know. What I do is make suggestions. I try to find the flaws that would make the story as a whole redundant, cliche or unrealstic. However no one has to take my advice. It'd be a good idea and it'd make things a whole lot more pleasant for everyone, but you don't have to. If you want you can only change some bits.

Really this is still your character and everything is up to you.

So do what you will.

~Ace

Hello Lunar Star Angel. Gee, that's long... how 'bout I call you Lusa? That'll do.

So... can I just ask why you have her abilities listed under 'Dimension'? And as for said powers, it's either one or the other. The powers are completely unrelated, so there's no way to integrate them both. So she could be a shape changer/ changeling (like Wolfsbane) or control the weather (like Storm)

That bit about looking into her eyes is just sap. Pure sap. And please try to avoid characters that have had 'horrible' things happen to them.

Also, an outcast is not a race, it's a social status.

You need to add a 'motivation' tab.

Fix it up and then I'll look over it again.

~Ace

Name: Egavas

Nickname: Vas

Age: 16

Race: Essencerites

Personality: Violent at times and quick to anger. Egavas easily holds a grudge and will inflict physical pain on people who she finds annoying or troublesome. She is quite quiet though despite her appearance and temper. She loves to gamble and test her luck.

Appearance:

Vas is also smaller than average

Abilities: She may take on various characteristics or essences of animals. For example the wings of a certain animal, the claws of a wolf, the strength of an elephant etc. Only some of the characteristics are visible like claws and wings but strength and endurance and speed you can�t see.

Weakness: The characteristics of the animal she takes on if violent may intrude her mind. If she takes on the claws of a wolf for example she may be more violent than usual. The more characteristics she takes on the more violent she will become eventually losing herself. She must not take on too many violent animal characteristics. Egavas also has to touch and see than animal beofre she takes its characteristics.

History: She lost herself once as she was taking on too many violent animal characteristics; she lost her memory due to this.

Motivation: She wants to find the Essencerites again to resume a normal life. Egavas was banished from her clan and she doesn�t know why. Egavas believes if she can retrieve the Rose Damaresk and bring it to her clan, the Essencerites she will be once again accepted.

Realm: The Realm of Changelings.

This realm not only includes shapeshifters changelings, morphs but also Essencerites. All of these though are clans. These clans are either small villages or traveling clans. This realm is dangerous as the inhabitants are violent and instictive to outsiders. Along with this there are many various wild animals free to roam around and coincide with the peoples. There are no significant man/race made structures the environment varies from mountain to forest.

Also she doesn't have a warrior name or outfit as she lives in her outfit all the time battle or what not and her real name is her warroir name. So her nickname is just a shortened version. Also has anyone noticed the thing about her name???

*I have no claims to the artwork and did no contribution to it what-so-ever*

Name: Bainbridge

Nickname: Bambi

Age: 14

Personality: Bainbridge is fun loving and smiles a lot; she loves to be around people and crowds. Although this doesn�t mean she follows them, she�s individual, but willing to listen to Ideas. Bainbridge often spaces out, she daydreams quite a bit and can find it hard to concentrate on one thing or a conversation for a long period of time.

Dimension: Laydenth.

Race: Fairies

Appearance:

Ignore the horns and pretend her eyes are gold.

*This picture has been stolen from Devianttart, it's not kmine and I take no credit for it*

Skill/power: Bambi is skilled in using herbs and Oils for healing; she knows basic potions as well, but her main field is just in herbs. She can create basic remedies for poison from plants and for some animals, but most of these are just for her race, however they can be effective for others. She always has to use herbs, spells or recipes to heal, this is a skill, not a power. She can also hover, as can every fea.

Weakness: Healing Potions work the best, but she knows only very basic ones, and they require a lot of concentration, so she doesn�t like to use them a lot. Most remedies are best suited of the Fairy Clan. She can fly but doesn�t do so that often as she enjoys walking and climbing trees more.

History:She�s been experimenting in herbs and oils for healing since she was seven and become quite skilled in them. It was only recent that she started using potions and spells, and so doesn�t know that many. She�s still in training for her skill, but stops, when she enters the Dimension Tames.

Motovation: Thinks it would be fun.

EXTRA INFORMATION CONCERNING HER RACE AND DIMENSION: In the Fairy realm, everyone is brought up to learn a certain skill, rulers of that city decide these. Each city has a different royalty figure and there are 11 different Cities in Laydenth, she came form Sage.