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 Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:45 pm
Heres a poem I wrote a long time ago, I was wondein what people think of it?
Forever
As the words fill my mind, all emotions, feelings, even actions, leave
To love seems pointless, to hate seems pointless, even caring seems pointless
Only time can unlock the relization.
They talk and they talk, but it all falls on deaf ears
The words roll round and round in my head
I leave reality, lost in thought, hoping never to return to the pain reality unleashes.
Depression, anguish, wishing I had done more
Powerless to stop the tears, they flow gently down my rosy cheeks.
As the sun slows, all time breaks down
The memorys flood my mind
Unable to dismiss the feelings I release them for all to see.
To withhold the demons of pain and anguish, will only cause more suffering
If you let go of it all, only the happiness and love of what was lost will remain.
In memory, we live forever.
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 9:24 pm
Wow. I love it. I've been there (depression) and like how you've described it. Good job! biggrin
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