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Josh_Maxwell

PostPosted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 3:00 pm


Heres a poem I wrote a long time ago, I was wondein what people think of it?

Forever

As the words fill my mind, all emotions, feelings, even actions, leave

To love seems pointless, to hate seems pointless, even caring seems pointless

Only time can unlock the relization.


They talk and they talk, but it all falls on deaf ears

The words roll round and round in my head

I leave reality, lost in thought, hoping never to return to the pain reality unleashes.


Depression, anguish, wishing I had done more

Powerless to stop the tears, they flow gently down my rosy cheeks.


As the sun slows, all time breaks down

The memorys flood my mind

Unable to dismiss the feelings I release them for all to see.


To withhold the demons of pain and anguish, will only cause more suffering

If you let go of it all, only the happiness and love of what was lost will remain.

In memory, we live forever.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 8:21 pm


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Josh_Maxwell

PostPosted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 9:51 am


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Thank you for that very insightful comment : )
PostPosted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 2:09 pm


i like your poem heart

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BeStShiNoBi

PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 4:30 pm


nice poem
PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 3:24 pm


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