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I stand alone in the night
I hold a knife with all my might
As the knife comes down I feel a sharp, sharp pain
I might be going completely insane

The knife pierces my skin and becomes one with my heart
I stand there for a minute or two
I stand there looking at you
You look away from me
You really hate what you see

I take one last breath, then fall to the floor
I won't have to deal with my problems anymore
I might be dead, but I can feel
That my body will never heal

My blood starts to pore
Then I lay stiff on the floor
My body turns ice cold
I lay there and I start to become so very old

I am all alone, so very alone


AND DON"T THINK I"M CRAZY...CUZ I'M NOT twisted

i like it!!! blaugh
however...on the other side....is not about one piece but o well who cares... mrgreen i like the 2nd better of course...1st one is kinda... confused

i must agree, but they are nice! ^^ at least you can write. i write only fanfictions.

THIS IS COOL!!!!!! mrgreen

The first one reminds me of Nami, during the Arlong Arc. It was an awesome poem! I loved it XDDD

The second one is sweet.

yes yes, more! heart