Naah Namida-san all you really need to work on is thinning the width and adding a mit more heigth to the heads.. and maybe more neck... Then it would be just fine. Study the dementions of faces and shapes more and you will be as good as pie
smile Here is some of my drawings.. Aww my computer just ******** up.. grrness... I will only post one right now because of my puter.. I need to restart it!