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 Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 2:40 pm
You have taken the part of me
That felt so free and open
Now closed as a door with no key
Betrayed I felt and still do now
Hurt and trashed deep inside
Always finding a way to hide
Never truely petrafied
Yet too scared and blind
Couldn't fight you
I had done nothing
You must be ******** up inside
To take away such a honest peice
Now I havn't a future
Now I havn't a chance
I will die cold and dead
Forgotten from this dreaded world
This world you created for me
Now each day I must suffer
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2005 12:37 pm
Thats a great poem. Very umm...I can't think of the word.
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Posted: Thu May 05, 2005 4:02 pm
That's a really good poem. I like it a lot.. It's deep. Nice job.
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