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 Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 5:34 pm
I would really apreciate constructive critisism if no one minds... =) 
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:18 am
 1) The neck was too thick, and positioned too far to the side. The thickness gave a masculine appearance to your character, not something common among even the strongest of females. Also, the head was too long in comparison to the neck and body. 2) Her shoulders were a bit broad 3) Her torso was a bit too thick, and her hips where too low. 4) Her arm was a bit too short. 5) The way you had the hand was very unnatural. The position of the arm was very uncomfortable. Trust me, I tried it. 6) It looked very uncomfortable. Usually when someone stands in this position, their leg looks somewhat like my red example. I hope this helped!
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:26 pm
Whoo, Kita's rough was awesome xd
Anyway, to add, I really like the pic in general, her character design is very Naruto-ish, and seems to fit withthe series.
As for her left arm, I agree, it looks VERY uncomfortable: If you want to do the hands on the hip thing, I would suggest moving the elbow to the side, so that the arm bends out at an angle. If you want to go for the sexier pose, then the upper arm should disappear behind the torso, and the hand shoudl come out across the hip, revealing more of the forearm.
Kita, you're right, it is uncomfortable, but it's a good pose, though one you can't hold for a while XD If I had a camera, it'd be easier to explain sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:56 pm
accetysalicyclic Whoo, Kita's rough was awesome xd Anyway, to add, I really like the pic in general, her character design is very Naruto-ish, and seems to fit withthe series. As for her left arm, I agree, it looks VERY uncomfortable: If you want to do the hands on the hip thing, I would suggest moving the elbow to the side, so that the arm bends out at an angle. If you want to go for the sexier pose, then the upper arm should disappear behind the torso, and the hand shoudl come out across the hip, revealing more of the forearm. Kita, you're right, it is uncomfortable, but it's a good pose, though one you can't hold for a while XD If I had a camera, it'd be easier to explain sweatdrop If anyone has hand-tutororials that'd be great... and I'm really glad you took much time on my picture as well ^^ (not very many people do that...o_O) I'll try to use more lines and circles next time too... XD
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:46 pm
Kosakachi accetysalicyclic Whoo, Kita's rough was awesome xd Anyway, to add, I really like the pic in general, her character design is very Naruto-ish, and seems to fit withthe series. As for her left arm, I agree, it looks VERY uncomfortable: If you want to do the hands on the hip thing, I would suggest moving the elbow to the side, so that the arm bends out at an angle. If you want to go for the sexier pose, then the upper arm should disappear behind the torso, and the hand shoudl come out across the hip, revealing more of the forearm. Kita, you're right, it is uncomfortable, but it's a good pose, though one you can't hold for a while XD If I had a camera, it'd be easier to explain sweatdrop If anyone has hand-tutororials that'd be great... and I'm really glad you took much time on my picture as well ^^ (not very many people do that...o_O) I'll try to use more lines and circles next time too... XD XD I know Notopu is planning to do a hand tut. . . at least, I think so o_o; XD And, you're welcome!
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 7:55 am
accetysalicyclic Kosakachi accetysalicyclic Whoo, Kita's rough was awesome xd Anyway, to add, I really like the pic in general, her character design is very Naruto-ish, and seems to fit withthe series. As for her left arm, I agree, it looks VERY uncomfortable: If you want to do the hands on the hip thing, I would suggest moving the elbow to the side, so that the arm bends out at an angle. If you want to go for the sexier pose, then the upper arm should disappear behind the torso, and the hand shoudl come out across the hip, revealing more of the forearm. Kita, you're right, it is uncomfortable, but it's a good pose, though one you can't hold for a while XD If I had a camera, it'd be easier to explain sweatdrop If anyone has hand-tutororials that'd be great... and I'm really glad you took much time on my picture as well ^^ (not very many people do that...o_O) I'll try to use more lines and circles next time too... XD XD I know Notopu is planning to do a hand tut. . . at least, I think so o_o; XD And, you're welcome! Really? yay! I hope I get to see the tutorial before I leave the US O_o
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 2:52 pm
Kosakachi accetysalicyclic Kosakachi accetysalicyclic Whoo, Kita's rough was awesome xd Anyway, to add, I really like the pic in general, her character design is very Naruto-ish, and seems to fit withthe series. As for her left arm, I agree, it looks VERY uncomfortable: If you want to do the hands on the hip thing, I would suggest moving the elbow to the side, so that the arm bends out at an angle. If you want to go for the sexier pose, then the upper arm should disappear behind the torso, and the hand shoudl come out across the hip, revealing more of the forearm. Kita, you're right, it is uncomfortable, but it's a good pose, though one you can't hold for a while XD If I had a camera, it'd be easier to explain sweatdrop If anyone has hand-tutororials that'd be great... and I'm really glad you took much time on my picture as well ^^ (not very many people do that...o_O) I'll try to use more lines and circles next time too... XD XD I know Notopu is planning to do a hand tut. . . at least, I think so o_o; XD And, you're welcome! Really? yay! I hope I get to see the tutorial before I leave the US O_o I hope so too crying xd She's such a slacker! *looks about to make sure she's not lurking*
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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:46 am
accetysalicyclic Kosakachi accetysalicyclic Kosakachi accetysalicyclic Whoo, Kita's rough was awesome xd Anyway, to add, I really like the pic in general, her character design is very Naruto-ish, and seems to fit withthe series. As for her left arm, I agree, it looks VERY uncomfortable: If you want to do the hands on the hip thing, I would suggest moving the elbow to the side, so that the arm bends out at an angle. If you want to go for the sexier pose, then the upper arm should disappear behind the torso, and the hand shoudl come out across the hip, revealing more of the forearm. Kita, you're right, it is uncomfortable, but it's a good pose, though one you can't hold for a while XD If I had a camera, it'd be easier to explain sweatdrop If anyone has hand-tutororials that'd be great... and I'm really glad you took much time on my picture as well ^^ (not very many people do that...o_O) I'll try to use more lines and circles next time too... XD XD I know Notopu is planning to do a hand tut. . . at least, I think so o_o; XD And, you're welcome! Really? yay! I hope I get to see the tutorial before I leave the US O_o I hope so too crying xd She's such a slacker! *looks about to make sure she's not lurking* lol niiice
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:19 pm
mmm...talking behind my back, I see...shame shame shame... talk2hand
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Posted: Fri Jun 23, 2006 9:26 pm
Notopu-sama mmm...talking behind my back, I see...shame shame shame... talk2hand It's my hobby, meow!
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 12:53 pm
hey i think you need to take it a little less harsh..how old is the artist and whether or not this is one of her first drawings i say its really good i remember my first art..now its amazing...
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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 8:39 pm
MiStReSsOuKa hey i think you need to take it a little less harsh..how old is the artist and whether or not this is one of her first drawings i say its really good i remember my first art..now its amazing... Point well taken, however, there is no way you can improve if you dont recieve criticism and take it into consideration.
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 3:24 pm
MiStReSsOuKa hey i think you need to take it a little less harsh..how old is the artist and whether or not this is one of her first drawings i say its really good i remember my first art..now its amazing... I was 13 when I drew it... now I'm fourteen.... so THANKS OOKAMI!!!! I really appreciated the crit... but it's okay Ouka-san, there are plenty of people my age who are definitely better... I have other things I'm good or okay at and that may be why
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 10:27 am
Kosakachi MiStReSsOuKa hey i think you need to take it a little less harsh..how old is the artist and whether or not this is one of her first drawings i say its really good i remember my first art..now its amazing... I was 13 when I drew it... now I'm fourteen.... so THANKS OOKAMI!!!! I really appreciated the crit... but it's okay Ouka-san, there are plenty of people my age who are definitely better... I have other things I'm good or okay at and that may be why Ayeah, don't think of it like that! There are lots of people at EVERY age that are better. . . I mean, 6 billion people in the world, it's pretty much written there's going to be someone better then you. But if you try to be the best you can be, and develope a personal style that makes you stand out from the crowd, that's what's important! 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 3:00 pm
Opa-sama Kosakachi MiStReSsOuKa hey i think you need to take it a little less harsh..how old is the artist and whether or not this is one of her first drawings i say its really good i remember my first art..now its amazing... I was 13 when I drew it... now I'm fourteen.... so THANKS OOKAMI!!!! I really appreciated the crit... but it's okay Ouka-san, there are plenty of people my age who are definitely better... I have other things I'm good or okay at and that may be why Ayeah, don't think of it like that! There are lots of people at EVERY age that are better. . . I mean, 6 billion people in the world, it's pretty much written there's going to be someone better then you. But if you try to be the best you can be, and develope a personal style that makes you stand out from the crowd, that's what's important! 3nodding Yes I agree... Thanks for the wisdom...
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