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RedDwarffer
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:17 am


if I where to sing a song
I'd sing it just for you
and if I where to write a book
I'd write it just for you

but as it is I sing like crap
and as far as writeing goes thats crap too
yet my insides whant to do it all
and do it just for you

you remind me of a character
I read of in a book
the super guy that saves the world
and he does it with one look

he looks at you
and melts your heart
thats been you all along
I've known it from the start

super guy come save the world
and leave me fall apart
but by my side you stay
sitting smug and smart

you picked me over the world
you knew I needed your hand
you picked me up from my knees
and with you I know stand

super guy from that book
thank you for that helpful look...

(ya britt, its Kyle...lol)
PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:22 am


eek I think I read that book!

Okay, but all joking aside....that's REALLY good......like.....REALLY. SERIOUSLY. That's like.....I love it.

TanyaDawn


RedDwarffer
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:27 am


lol....thankies... I dont know....
PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:33 am


I do. I LOVE it!!!!!

At the first line in the second stanza, I about spit pop all over the computer screen, though....it made me laugh.

TanyaDawn


RedDwarffer
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:39 am


lol ya... well I do sing like crap.. so lol
PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:42 am


Yeah, but I thought the poem was gonna be all cheesey and cliche from the first stanza....then I got to that line and was like "OMG! That's GREAT! xd " And my initial impression was proved wrong....and I'm glad it was.

TanyaDawn


RedDwarffer
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:47 am


lol *shakes head with a smile*
PostPosted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 4:51 am


smile

TanyaDawn


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PostPosted: Sat Jul 01, 2006 5:02 pm


I like it too 3nodding
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Poetry by:COF-sexy beasts

 
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